NOTE: I received a complimentary eARC of this book from Albert Whitman & Company through NetGalley. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
*deep breath*
Where do I begin with this one?
After liking Ignite the Stars, I was really looking forward to reading Eclipse the Skies... Unfortunately it fell even flatter than Ignite the Stars did for me, except this time it was a little harder to ignore the glaring issues with this one. I still didn’t absolutely hate it, but... well, it took me twice as long to finish this one as the first one. Almost a month. That should really tell you all you need to know; if I struggle for a full month to read something, it’s not holding my interest.
**WARNING - SPOILERS AHEAD**
Let’s start with the fact that compared to the first book, this one takes a complete 180° turn away from badass action and dark humor, and straight into mopey, pathetic boredom.
About 80% of the book is spent on Ia feeling sorry for herself after being betrayed and nearly killed by her own brother. A twist, I might add, that was so easy to spot coming that it might as well have been announced right in the blurb of the book.
I get that having your brother betray you is not a great feeling and obviously recovering from having almost every bone in your body broken is gonna be rough but after spending the entire first book having Ia described every few sentences as this tiny little pint-sized badass, pocket-rocket killer, who everyone is scared of and is a danger to herself and everyone around her especially those that betray her... it was a HUGE change, and not for the better.
I feel like half of that recovery/moping time could have easily been left out and the story still would have made sense. Instead we got to spend most of the book listening to Ia mope around and complain about how easily her brother nearly killed her, how she wasn’t ready to face him, how she was gonna give up entirely... only to them turn around at the end, for absolutely no reason at all, and be like “screw it, I’m going to fly to his heavily guarded base and take him on, even though I’m barely recovered and will probably die. ‘Kay bye!”
On top of all of that, Brinn’s choices made absolutely NO sense either. She spent pretty much all of her chapters complaining that Ia didn’t care about what she was going through... but she never actually told Ia anything was up! I’m sorry but people that do this annoy me so much. If you’re going through something and want someone to listen, tell them! Don’t just expect your friends to be mind-readers! And then she uses this as an excuse to... what? Turn against Ia by going with her brother, not trying to stop him from killing Ia at all, and then killing one of the Queens because she wanted to “make her own choices”?... WHAT?! Brinn’s character development in the first book was beautiful; she went from hiding who she was to being proud of it... only to go completely off the rails in the most illogical way possible in the second book!?
And don’t even get me started on Knives. Why was he in even in this book? He served literally no purpose except to bum around waiting for Ia to “get better” and then screw everything up by setting AN AI INSIDE A PEN loose in one of the most advanced “weapons” in the galaxy?! I just... don’t understand. I mean I understand, I just... don’t. It makes literally no sense!
Omg and Kami/Deus! What was the point of having her there!? She was the “God” Deus and she had some kind of weird ramen-producing black hole in her chest (WHAT?!) but literally did nothing at all and refused to help Ia, only to show up at the end and tell Knives there was still hope after Ia died (oh I’ll get to that, don’t worry)... What was the point of including her!? The only thing I can think of is that there was supposed to be a third book in which she reappeared and had purpose but that in the end the author decided against three and squished everything into two? I don’t even know.
Which brings us to the ending. The only word that comes to mind is “Disappointing” with a big fat capital D. There was SO much build up to Ia facing off against her brother... only to have it all be over in two seconds!?
You know what? Here, lemme save you the time of reading the whole book:
Brinn suddenly decides she can’t stand to see Ein hurt Ia (even though she stood around last time he broke every single bone in her body and walked away when Goner was about to shoot her in the head) and picks up a gun to shoot his hands off because apparently he’s useless without them? Ein then sits quietly in the corner while Ia and Brinn hug it out and plot to push his life’s work, that he has been so crazy-focused on he literally nearly killed his own sister over, into a black hole that Ein had conveniently made his base next to for reasons. Ia then gets Brinn safely to another ship but doesn’t go herself because “there’s only one spare seat” and she’s been stabbed anyway, which apparently means she’s already dead even though, you know, she just survived having every bone in her body smashed to pieces and still lived? She stays with her brother right up until the moment they are torn apart by the black hole (and can still apparently form thoughts after that), even though Ein still clearly hates her right up until the end, because “You are my brother” and “No one wants to die alone”.
WHAT THE MIFFING MIFF!?!
And to top it all off, the romance between Knives and Ia was basically non-existent until right at the end where they admitted they loved each other via video call right before Ia gave herself up to Ein. I’m not even gonna get into that one.
I just don’t understand what happened here. It’s like the author took all feedback from the previous book and said “You know what? Here’s what I think of your opinions” and went in completely the opposite direction! I don’t think I’ve ever been so confused and disappointed in the ending of a series since the last season of Game of Thrones.