Soo disappointed.
The h was such a TSTL and a rather ungrateful one at that.....
We start with Tenthil and while I do agree there was a lot, a L O T of descriptive prose out there, I can't say
if it was too much or not necessarily but it did make me impatient to get to the meat of the story and character and
I found myself skimming a lot. I just saw most of it as world building though and I was grateful for their efforts and saw myself as impatient at the time. Soo I really can't say it it was too much,even though I wish some things had been more to the point,I tried to appreciate they were building a new series...
any way.
Back to what destroyed the story for me : Arabella the ungrateful.
Here you have a young woman ,I'm guessing 24-25 ,she was taken in collage I believe ,who's been held for 4 years by
a monster against her will. From how her interaction starts w/Tenthil ,the Dance,the Kiss I was expecting a woman
who was mature and willing not just to take the consequences of her actions but had common sense and strong survival instincts.
What I found instead of a girl who's willing to take lashes laying on the ground for a moments connection through a dance and a kiss,she'd never felt the like of before. Lashes that were still hurting her a week later. A kiss and a connection she was still thinking about a week later.,that still supposedly worth the pain but when he appears and rescues her all she really gives in return is mistrust and childish fits,assumptions,anger and ingratitude.
WTH?
Tenthil was amazing I thought. He's as much a slave or more soo than Arabella,unlike like her he's totally lost his former self. Tent no longer remembers or knows who he is or where he came from or anything except what his "master" has tried to teach him or beat out of him. In his way he's nothing but caring and loving.
I wanted a h who was going to ask questions first and try and understand first before she made her mind or formed
false assumptions. Arabella wakes up naked sure,sure but w/her back healed and her collar gone w/the male she was willing to take lashes for trying to feed her and care for her and her 1st thought isn't "Thank you! you amazing creature!!!" it's "I won't be your hore or pet!" Seriously ? after your amazing connection,he's killed for you,healed you,wants to care for and feed you and took that F'ing slave collar off your scrawny neck,That's your first thought ?
You ungrateful Itch! Then being as ignorant as ignorant can be the moron w/the brain the size of a gnat wants to either fight him while being chased by assassins (because they only want to kill him for killing her "master") (seriously ?) and then later again she fakes sleep after he's gotten her someplace safe and is again ONLY thinking of her and her safety. Seriously ? where do you think your going lil girl w/a weapon you don't know how to use,one a planet where your only seen as something to see for a quick profit ?
Seriously being that dumb SHOULD be painful. Tenthil of course NEVER complains and only tries to be a better mate to her as he goes against all he knows and his programming.
That poor B deserved better than a TSTL like her who seems to fight him at every move just because just because she's supposed to .... I'm not for those books w/the h has some kinda "Stockholm syndrome" kinda love for that jerk who's kidnapped her. NO! But this scrawny idiot just lacked common sense and gratitude...
Poor Tenthil