Totally, completely, AMAZINGLY AWESOME. 😎 I love all the suspension and action and the only thing that mildly bothered me was Bob wasn't in there. That's fine though. I have read all of you're books and am always waiting months for the next one, lucky for me I use a kindle account so they are free! 😀 (Please give Bob a jetpack along with all of the Golem Mechs
Your books are going downhill STN (warning: Spoiling book and lengthy review)
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Your books are going downhill.. You gatta turn it around or many older kids will stop reading your books📚 ... It was kinda boring for the first half. The second half was ok, but the fight was just... It was too easy!! Honestly, it was too easy. Wasn't hard at all. Same old same old as all the other fights. Lose somebody random or a close friend..maybe dont lose one. Go into rage mode. Defeat the beast easily. Another random, too easily won win. 😐😒 like, it was simple.. Also, can STN lose for real for once?!? Yeah, he KINDA lost once, but the monster (forgot who) "retreated". Like whaaaaat?? •~• back to this book. When Dr. Z died, he died.. Strangely. He was like.. "AAAAAAAAH!! NOOO!! MY HEART!! ACK!!!" . Thats just awkward. When something Pierces the heart, it immediately stops working. And once it does, u die within 2-4 seconds.. But how'd the monster be able to say all that dramatic stuff before he died?? Even if he did have enough time, he would be staggering for air and in awful pain. He should've said.. "ARGH!! W-What..did...y-" that would've worked better for the situation.. Also, you spent, like, 20 pages on the meeting with the mayor. I get meetings help the book come together, but did you really have to do all that?!? I mean.. Like, the mayors meeting was also kinda random. Cant steve focus on his mission to stop the nightly plague instead of getting sidetracked? It makes no sense. Your losing a lot of readers. I get your a new author but.. Its your fault your books are going downhill. You never pay attention to the helpful 1-star reviewers and/or critics! I get there are some haters out there... But theres also helpful critics out there too! its your fault you dont read them.. I dont even know why i bother reviewing your books anymore.. Its kinda just to waste time cuz im booored. After this, ima go review on skeleton steve and cube kid. People who actually listen to their reviewers who rate 1-3 star reviews. Hope your seeing this.. (Your not 😑😒🙄)
Complaints:
1: steves being a pig. He eats, like, 6 snacks and 4 meals a day.. And he DOESN'T gain weight!!! No, he keeps his "perfect", fit, strong body structure! Come on!! In reality, if you ate like steve, u would be really fat and unhealthy (no offence to anyone). And you would much less be that strong and fast for a BATTLE!!!! If you did in reality, you'd be dead before the battle started. 😅
2: BoRiNg!! Nothing interesting ever happened. Yeah, they won a boring battle with steves rage mode. Maybe lost a few soldiers. Gained XP. Passed out like a noob!! Plus, why is da series called "diary of steve the noob"? I mean.. Obviously the author planned for him to become pro throughout the books 18-41. So, whyyyyy? He made his name for the short length books as a noob. You need to think ahead of time for the name!!
3: RePeAtInG sToRy LiNe!!!!! 😮😣😕🤔 the same story plots get old after.. I dont know, the 12th book?
Ideas
1: make steve less of a hog, and if hes ganna stay like that, at least make him gain some weight!
2: make him less childish and/or brattish. He kinda acts like a childish or spoiled 9 year old in most books.
3: Make the love scenes better! Steve acts like a 9 year old in love when he sees alex(no offense 9 yr olds). He hesitates, blushes, and gets flustered when his friends tease him like 13 year olds when they find out their friend has a crush.
4: dont add so much dialogue!!
Welp, thats all i got.. Your not so much of a fan anymore fan- dogwolflover826🐕🐶🐩🐺
Hi it's gaber11979 and weikm back for another review. This book was amazing, in it Steve and the army fight Dr Z in an ultimate final battle.
Suggestions We believe you should add vampires, villagers who were experimented on by Dr Z, they gain the ability to teleport threw shadows along with super speed and strength Vampires also must drain others hp inorder to keep from burning in the sun (While someone's hp is being drained they can not move). Also we would like you to add a class known as a Battle Master, this is a tier two class that does high damage at any range. Battle Masters dual wield special swords called scimatars, they also use bows and arrows. A Battle Master has less accuracy than a marksman but more than a sniper (But less powerful shots) and can shoot very fast, however they gain no ranger ability's. They also have the strength of a blood lusted gladiator but more consistent. Battle Masters can also sneak as well as any rogue. You should also add a tier two samurai known as a Shogun.
Characters We would like two characters known as Kyrian, and the other is called Newt. They are both vampires. Kyrian wears black clothes and is a Battle Master (Clothes are class uniform). Newt is an Assassin and wears his class uniform.
Thank you STN for making this awesome series, may you continue to shine brighter than a star to all your readers. PS Can our characters join the Fortress pls
Writing a review cuz dis book is da bomb! It was so funny how Steve got his hair sliced off! Also wonder how their gonna figure out how to save team scorpion. Kanye Wanda will tell them that they have to see that super wise old dude to save them.golden elixir? Golden apple? Can’t wait to find out!!!
I love this series,so PLEASE keep it going because it's just ausome ;) ;) ;) PLEASE keep it going and if you sudenly stop, I will be madder than steve with infinite berzerker rage mode active :)
This book is the best ever in the history of ever!!!!!!!
Steve if your reading this I love you 😻 al though you aren’t publishing fast as usual I still love every single book you make!!! And if any one is reading this Steve the noob is the best this is like the only thing i read on my moms kindle !!!-Midhi
You Should Try To speed Up Your Books. Before It Was So Quick But Now It Is Kinda Slower Then Before. Not trying to Put Pressure On You Because You Have A lot Of Homework Or Something like that.Anyways this book was amazing so keep up the good work! And Guess What!? Your Writing And Your Books Have Inspired Me To Make Minecraft Books! Can You Also Add My Name On Reviewers list And The Name Soul Be called Thunder_Boy. Keep Up The AMAZING Work!