Microscopes swivel and flowers spread as the poet wrestles with a spectrum of growing pains. These coming-of-age poems draw inspiration equally from science textbooks and fairy tales. As the final poem prays, “I will see the moon and morning and know”. Branches explores what it means to live to the next day, and the next, before we fully understand what we are surviving.
Branches is the poetry collection of Rhiannon McGavin, the youth poet laureate of Los Angeles 2016. Her unique voice lifts the reader off the page and into a vision of hot LA summers and days in Paris. This is a bittersweet yet hopeful collection that could've only been written in 2016, cleverly covering sensitive topics in a way that doesn't seek to alienate the reader in a flurry of strong language. McGavin expertly describes traumatic experiences and bitter hurt as well as hopeful love in this collection alongside her more current event oriented pieces. As a long time subscriber to Rhiannon's YouTube channel, reading this felt like coming home. I highly recommend this book to anyone who can appreciate a mix of classic style with something new and fresh that feels almost like biting into a summer tangerine. You can see her read poems from this book and more on her YouTube page, thegeekyblonde. Rhiannon, if you're reading this, thank you. Your voice has fueled me though my high school years, so it is the least I can do to give you a good review on Goodreads.
First read: August 27th, 2017-August 27th, 2017, 4.5 stars Second read: September 10th, 2019-September 12th 2019, 4.5 stars? Higher?
Take time out of your day. Read a poem out of this collection slowly. I mean slowly... Put the book down. Continue on with your day. Return to the poem at the end of the day. Reread it again. Slowly.
I tried my best to read this poetry collection as slowly as I could. The sheer enjoyment of each poem led me to reading it faster than I should've. I did stop and go back to reread a few poems, each time I read Rhiannon's poems, the more I feel impacted, and that I am starting to get inside the enigma that are her words. The reader wants to understand the poems, but knows and accepts and even is okay with skirting the surface of Rhiannon's poetry. They will still read her poems over and over, enjoying them more with each sip. She captured moments in her own life, mixed them with history and myth and politics and created art that isn't just gorgeous and detailed, but interesting and thoughtful. I found myself crying my eyes out, there are poems in here I know people will find themselves in.
We have familiar pieces in this second edition. Some were changed with minor details, some were changed a lot, and some were added. I really found the new poems to be ones I liked, ones I've heard before made their welcome appearance as an added need to this collection. I enjoyed comparing the two editions of Branches and seeing what had changed, it was interesting to me to know what Rhiannon thought to be changed. I got to be honest and say that some of the changes I was not into, but most of the changes I do understand why she made them and appreciate her changing the poems, while staying true to her adolescent self.
Favorite poems: - Art Class - early September - Post-Winter - Things that could Happen to a Girl wearing Jeans
Reading this poetry collection makes me want to see where Rhiannon goes and read whatever she writes next. If you choose to read this, also check out her spoken word as well. Or check out her spoken word and then come back here.
rhiannon mcgavin exudes older sister energy and i ADORE it. this collection feels like she's braiding your hair, correcting your sentence structure, and teaching you all the things she wishes she knew in high school in a mere forty-some pages. these poems feel like a culmination of her growth as a poet, and it was delightful seeing how her old poems could give off the same feeling, despite how new the writing in it is. the poems in this have been stuck in my brain for a while and after reading the book, i'm pretty sure that won't change anytime soon. my favorites would be: art class, pain theory, post-winter, first base gold, en rose, and in the branches.
read this in one night because i just couldn’t stop. i can’t wait to reread it over and over again. the imagery. the voice. i wish i could be more coherent. perhaps once i analyze my thoughts further. how lovely! it made me ache, smile, tear up, all of the ‘growing pains’. (‘:
Quality Rating: Five Stars Enjoyment Rating: Four Stars
It's been quite a few years since I first stumbled on Rhiannon's work in Slam Poetry, but I think it's fair to say she was my gateway into reading and watching poetry as a whole. Her collection (though somewhat hard to get your hands on in the UK) differs from her bold feminist performance poetry and instead turns to more quietly rebellious tones. Reading her written poetry - especially the historical ones dealing with Jewish persecution - is just as emotional an experience as watching her speak. She's vivid, vivacious and poignant without having to make a sound. Regardless of which topics you prefer, her work shouts with passion and whispers with hope.
ignore the smog. you see what you want to / here in tenth grade mr latorra showed us the video of Rhiannon McGavin, Zariya Allen and Belissa Escobedo performing Somewhere in America for the Queen Latifah show and I proceeded to youtube rhiannon's slam poetry throughout the remainder of high school. eight years later I ran into her chapbooks on Not a Cult while looking for another poet's work, soft proof of a conserved planet. what smoke bears your sky? i liked recognizing on paper the words i'd only heard on youtube so many years ago. that is not an angle of memory i would have anticipated. Rhiannon's work is saturated and fleshy and gleaming and bends english in ways that feel really good. I stand by high school me's search history
If you read a self published young poet who penned most of these at the age of seventeen, you're likely to say - give them a break. Go easy on them. They were young and inexperianced and someone told them they could write. But then there's Rhiannon McGavin who just blows you out of the water until your left gasping for air. She writes with such raw emotion. Her storytelling so simple and so poignant. This is a serious poet who already has grown from this collection and will go farther. Her performances add so much to the readings. Ones to seek out on YouTube would be Art Class, Post Winter, Chick Lit and Things that could Happen to a Girl wearing Jeans.
I cannot tell you how many times my mind has wondered and i start randomly reciting "First Base Gold" and very time i hearing it in the voice that Rihannon uses when she's reading it out in a cafe in paris i think. the way she says, 'and now your talking to the profits' just hits different.
also i am 19 and because of parameters. i have decided i have never had my first kiss.
and for the poems who's subject matter i've never experienced... we've had a mutual understanding and we love each other just the same.
“When I was younger I would lick rain off the flowers and think this is what love tastes like” -en rose, Rhiannon McGavin
Not gonna lie, it took me three days to read twenty-seven short poems, because I needed to give the magic of each one its proper time to dissolve, like flower water on a tongue.
Rhiannon McGavin spins the seams of human life, nature blooming, scientific facts and ancient myths into pure silk.
Also, she has such a cool vocabulary!!! I learned so many great words. My favorite new word from this collection:
Freshet - the flood of a river from heavy rain or melted snow.
Her poetry feels so well thought out and I feel a connection in some way or another with each poem. On top of having amazing poetry her youtube is informative as heck. She make me want to be a better poet and I like that she hasn’t fallen into the style of having three line and an illustration (it’s not bad just a lot of people doing it right now).
I have followed McGavin's work for some time, and oh what a treat this collection is. Chick Lit is my favorite poem in this, but I genuinely loved them all. I love how honest her work is, but in a way that still highlights the craft and skill it took to write these. One of my favorite poetry collections I have read :)
Stunning collection of poetry by LA Youth Poet Laureate Rhiannon McGavin. Funny, heartfelt, often deeply touching, rooted in the American experience but also very aware of the historical and cultural roots of that experience. A great read.
truly, a massage for the brain. soothing. sometimes a challenge to unveil what she's saying, but i like to do that kind of work and close reading. good enough that it inspired me to get out my pen, too.
Having a poet who knows how to treat queer longing as the delicate and beautiful thing that it is, is such a treat. Rhiannon, you are a marvelous writer💕
Most of the poems had very heavy topics. I used to love this kind of writing, but not so much anymore. Still good work and it holds a special place in my heart always.