Extremely Immature & Cringing. Badly Written.
Irritating whinings of a teenage girl about her crush. It's so cringely immature that I wish there was away to blacklist so called author's like this, who aren't real writers, so they don't show up on my amazon book searches. The female is so childish and immature that there is no way a forty year old, hardened biker, would go for her.
All her teenage droanings on about how "He hasn't been around, she hasn't seen him, he hasn't come by, he hasn't.." bla bla bla and "How without him my life anymore it will unbearable", it not only gave me a migraine it had me saying seriously she's only know him for a couple of hours!
It's so bad it's ridiculous! The author completely skips all the development, having them thinking things like that, and, "He was always so wonderful to me, never did anything bad, always treated me like a queen", again seriously she's only known him hours! Awful rubbish.
As for the writing, it is very amateur. There are missing words, missing punctuations, huge grammatical errors, sentences are not complete. For example, "her boyfriend is the quintessential rich prep", ??? Is missing the word 'guy' on the end. There's a lot of unfinished sentences because if missing words. And many other problems, again all in the first 30%. Not good.