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Demi knows she is far from normal. She can feel it every time she walks near a park, or a tree, or a flower. She has a gift-or a curse; green things call to her. They tug at her soul and she has no idea how to control it. But Demi has it all figured out. She's going to be a ballerina just like her mother wants. And since the dance studio is the only place she feels like she fits in, it’s the perfect plan. That is, until she meets Dylan, a boy with a similar gift. Dylan shows Demi the path to discovering who she is and what fate holds for each of them.
Formerly titled SARATOGA
Formerly titled SARATOGA
272 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 1, 2013
About the author
M.R. Pritchard
50 books175 followersM. R. Pritchard is a two-time Kindle Scout winning author and her short story "Glitch" has been featured in the 2017 winter edition of THE FIRST LINE literary journal. She holds degrees in Biochemistry and Nursing. She is a northern New Yorker transplanted to the Gulf Coast of Florida who enjoys coffee, mint chocolate, cloudy days, and reading on the lanai.
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November 24, 2013
Wow!
This entire book was enjoyable, but the last quarter or so was pretty fantastic.
In the vein of young adult paranormal romance, this story draws on Greek mythology, and ties it all together neatly. The ending chapters show this to be more meaningful than your average "coming of age with a supernatural twist" story.
A fun read for sure. Would love to see it as a major motion picture someday!
This entire book was enjoyable, but the last quarter or so was pretty fantastic.
In the vein of young adult paranormal romance, this story draws on Greek mythology, and ties it all together neatly. The ending chapters show this to be more meaningful than your average "coming of age with a supernatural twist" story.
A fun read for sure. Would love to see it as a major motion picture someday!
February 10, 2015
Different is probably the best word I could use to describe this book. Different in a mostly good way. For me, one of the biggest drawbacks of this book was that so much of its length was spent building up the story, only to have it all wrapped up in a rather quick manner. Overall, I did enjoy the book and it was definitely a fast read.
December 31, 2013
First, I really appreciate that the author made this a full-length book instead of dragging it out in a series. Second, it was such a fun read. Man, I wish I could control trees, grass, flowers, etc.
June 17, 2014
I was honestly pretty skeptical when I read the synopsis for this book, but my judgement was flawed. This story blew me away- I love it. I look forward to reading more by this author. I'm a fan! Thanks, goodreads giveaway!
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January 14, 2014A new twist to to the old tales.
a very good writer who brings an enchanting tale of true love and soul mates. I'm a romantic, shoot me:)
a very good writer who brings an enchanting tale of true love and soul mates. I'm a romantic, shoot me:)
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March 22, 2014awesome story...
April 23, 2014
Saratoga movie form
really good book I would like to see it as a movie also. and there should definitely be a sequel.
really good book I would like to see it as a movie also. and there should definitely be a sequel.
June 16, 2018
interesting... the end seemed a little rushed.
November 25, 2025
I listened to this book through audio as this book was put into the vault a while ago. She does not know when or if she is going to republish it anytime soon.
This is a YA books with mystical gods in it.
Here is the blurb
One should not dance in the moonlight and whisper to tangled vines. It could bring forth a God of unknown origin.
Demi has a curse. Plants and flowers call to her. They tug at her soul and she has no idea how to control it. But Demi has it all figured out, she's going to ignore it and become a ballerina just like her mother wants. Since the dance studio is the only place she feels like she fits in, it’s the perfect plan. Until darkness calls and tugs her away to a new land and a castle with secrets. There she meets Dylan, a boy with a similar gift. He shows Demi the path to discovering who she is and what fate holds for each of them.
This is a YA books with mystical gods in it.
Here is the blurb
One should not dance in the moonlight and whisper to tangled vines. It could bring forth a God of unknown origin.
Demi has a curse. Plants and flowers call to her. They tug at her soul and she has no idea how to control it. But Demi has it all figured out, she's going to ignore it and become a ballerina just like her mother wants. Since the dance studio is the only place she feels like she fits in, it’s the perfect plan. Until darkness calls and tugs her away to a new land and a castle with secrets. There she meets Dylan, a boy with a similar gift. He shows Demi the path to discovering who she is and what fate holds for each of them.
March 4, 2018
A beautifully written story with a fairy tale kind of quality combined with ancient mythology. Though the ending was a bit slow to wrap up after the climax, it was still a thoroughly enjoyable read. Loved it.
September 2, 2023
Went on too long
Interesting story, mostly. A different take on religion. Unfortunately the story really dragged the last third of the book. The ending left me melancholy....
Interesting story, mostly. A different take on religion. Unfortunately the story really dragged the last third of the book. The ending left me melancholy....
March 30, 2023
yea Im not sure that this book is really amazing, it definitely has an interesting concept.
The synopsis describes a girl who is a ballerina with nature wielding powers who finds a boy (fine, i can get behind that idea) but then, that's it.... which is interesting... because it doesn't say anything at all about the mythology aspect? I feel like that would've been an important thing to reference maybe seeing as it takes of half of the book.
AND SPEAKING OF HalF OF THE BOOK, the first half was interesting and although not written all that well, it was interesting. The second half of the book was just a mess. It felt rushed and like they just kept throwing new things in there for fun. I genuinely had such a hard time staying interested in the second half. This book felt so long and yet it wasn't even 300 pages.
I wanted to see more character relationship development between Demi and like... everyone, it feels like all the relationships in the book were so surface level without any depth which could be why I didnt feel invested.
Overall, an interesting read, would not read it a third time :(
The synopsis describes a girl who is a ballerina with nature wielding powers who finds a boy (fine, i can get behind that idea) but then, that's it.... which is interesting... because it doesn't say anything at all about the mythology aspect? I feel like that would've been an important thing to reference maybe seeing as it takes of half of the book.
AND SPEAKING OF HalF OF THE BOOK, the first half was interesting and although not written all that well, it was interesting. The second half of the book was just a mess. It felt rushed and like they just kept throwing new things in there for fun. I genuinely had such a hard time staying interested in the second half. This book felt so long and yet it wasn't even 300 pages.
I wanted to see more character relationship development between Demi and like... everyone, it feels like all the relationships in the book were so surface level without any depth which could be why I didnt feel invested.
Overall, an interesting read, would not read it a third time :(
July 16, 2016
Ugh. Such a weird book.
Got to give it credit for being original, that's for sure. Even if I don't mean that in a good way.
Demi and Dylan really were cute together and I enjoyed seeing them find someone who can relate to them. But I lost interest fast once Baal appeared. After that everything starts to get weirder and weirder. Since I was already too curious to find out what really was going on I mostly read the last few chapters just to finish it and finally get to the bottom of this crap. Because it really was ridiculous and hard to process/picture. I can see now why some people say they want a sequel, but for me I'm glad it's over. If there's ever a sequel, I won't be reading it that's for sure. There's no reason to.
Actual Rating: 2.5 Stars
It's a good thing I got this free or else I would have never bought/read it.
Got to give it credit for being original, that's for sure. Even if I don't mean that in a good way.
Demi and Dylan really were cute together and I enjoyed seeing them find someone who can relate to them. But I lost interest fast once Baal appeared. After that everything starts to get weirder and weirder. Since I was already too curious to find out what really was going on I mostly read the last few chapters just to finish it and finally get to the bottom of this crap. Because it really was ridiculous and hard to process/picture. I can see now why some people say they want a sequel, but for me I'm glad it's over. If there's ever a sequel, I won't be reading it that's for sure. There's no reason to.
Actual Rating: 2.5 Stars
It's a good thing I got this free or else I would have never bought/read it.
December 31, 2013
I tried this book and I feel horrible for having to be honest. It wasn't for me. I just felt disconnected from the characters. The heroine in the book was telling us how Dylan and she were best friends and how much time they spent together. But the reader didn't see it. Relationship arcs are important when reading and I like to experience them in real time. I love to witness relationships develop and I just couldn't with this story. Dylan and Demi's relationship seemed and felt random. I couldn't finish. I'm sorry peeps!!!!!!!!!!!!
February 15, 2016
This story begins with a girl who has power over plants, and parents who try to help her exist in the world without anyone finding out about her power. Eventually, she meets someone who can help her understand this power. Then, things turn dark. I liked this story in the beginning and the middle, but I did not like the way it ended, and how dark it became. Frankly, at that point, I just wanted it to end. The story is very creative and descriptive, but it almost seems like two stories fused together.
November 12, 2013
SARATOGA is now perma-free on all eReader platforms!
http://mrpritchard.com/books/saratoga/
*A paranormal romance for fans of The Goddess Test, the Percy Jackson Series, and The Covenant Series.*
100,296 words
http://mrpritchard.com/books/saratoga/
*A paranormal romance for fans of The Goddess Test, the Percy Jackson Series, and The Covenant Series.*
100,296 words
January 31, 2014
it was free on Amazon...good story, especially since it was free.
May 12, 2014
New edition, new cover!
February 25, 2015
Absolutely wonderful! There was so much more to this story than I expected.
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