Being different is hard enough but being a genetically engineered hybrid who has no idea of your origin takes peculiar to another level.
Created as the ultimate weapon, Nicolette Winspere is a timid African American woman caught in the middle of a deadly war between humans and mythological creatures. The humans want her to destroy their natural enemies the vampires and werewolves while her "father" wants to use her to avenge an over two millennia-year old slight. With the assistance of a werewolf detective, who was hired to capture her, Nicolette will discover the depths of her being but it is a risk that could either kill her or make her stronger.
S.N. Smiley is an afro Caribbean author of the Empowered Trilogy and Weathered. She has always loved reading, traveling, and trying new cuisines. Along the way she found that reading wasn't enough especially when she could not find her image in the main characters. She began her writing journey back in 2020. When she isn't writing you can find her traveling and binging the latest anime obsession.
Good idea, execution needs work. I could not finish due to distracting lack of editing. There needs to either be breaks when POV change, or the Author needs to add details that notifyythe reader of the change. When a character speaks, the reader needs to know who is speaking, and quotation marks need to be at the beginning, at each break, and at the end of their spoken words.
Outside of that, heroine needs a bit or emotional consistency, unless she has ADHD in addition to her genetic inheritance.
Please get some beta readers or help with editing and republish.