Having read this book my question is: what is it trying to do?
I am a student at the history department and as a rule I usually never read non-fiction in history by non-scholars for the simple reason that they often get it wrong (a fact learned from experience), and because sometimes laymen’s’ “contribution” is outright dangerous as it feeds new legends, and if there is one thing Eleanor doesn’t need it’s more legends surrounding her. After all these centuries and black legends she deserves better. But this book was so anticipated and Cockerill got good reviews on her last project, so I decided to make an exception to see if she could prove my rule wrong. Spoiler alert: She did not.
Cockerill starts this book grand. In the preface she drags ealier biographies on Eleanor for speculation and legend. I only assume she includes the scholarly literature in this too. A weird remark to make as a non-scholar. On top of this she blows up her own importance in the scholarly timeline to interesting levels for a non-scholar, stating clearly that her book is what is missing to the field. That she is giving us all what we have been missing. After this she continues by expressing her disappointment in Eleanor as a subject, telling the readers we are in for a letdown we can’t even imagine. She assures the reader some of the people she has told the story to have even walked away feeling visibly disappointed. While she goes on about this it is good to know she is a big fan of Micheal Evans’ book on Eleanor which is clearly reflected in her work. (For those of you unfamiliar with the whole Eleanor universe Evans released a book a few years back addressing the myths around Eleanor. While a good initiative the book has apparently grown its own Eleanor-skeptical camp.) Oddly, Cockerill starts her book in this spirit with marking how unremarkable her subject is and how disappointed she is in her. A weird way to start a book of over 400 pages on one of the most powerful women in medieval Europe who had an effect on the continent hundreds of years after her death. On top of this she assures the reader the point of her book is to give us the clean slate pure and simple for the first time ever. Her book is here to give us truth and nothing but the truth on Eleanor. Apparently something historians haven’t been able to do (as she indirectly expresses). What a build-up, I thought to myself. Let’s see if she delivers on her promise.
She did not.
First of all, Cockerill employs an assured tone in her knowledge, but she is not a historian. I can’t stress this enough, because it is noticeable in her writing and thought-process throughout. This is problematic since her subject is complex twice over. First of all, she writes of the Middle Ages which is a hard period to truly grasp, nevertheless to write about. Secondly, she is trying to write about a woman in this age. Research on women in the medieval world is new and limited. No fact in this is given to you for free. In other words, to give an honest view as close to fact as possible there is a lot, and I do mean *a lot* of reading up and study to be done beforehand. Even scholars who have this area as their speciality note how hard it is to grasp information sometimes, marking how many hours of research and thinking is behind. Having read the book I am not at all sure Cockerill has done this homework. She falls into traps constantly, going too far with too little material. Sometimes to a point where it gets ridiculous. I recognize the style from Alison Weir’s Eleanor biography and Marion Meade’s as well. Meade’s book has backfired the last couple of years because it doesn’t hold at all. I do believe this book will meet the same fate, because instead of sticking to what she has material to cover Cockerill constantly flares out into territory where the ice is too thin. And it breaks. All the time. Early on I felt like she’s building a story without enough material or the proportions for it. The guesswork and speculations she blamed everyone else for is constantly present, ironically enough.
Let’s be honest, Cockerill is a barrister, and I would argue she writes history like a lawyer. As a history student, I miss the methodology of historians. The alternative explanations, the humbleness and never going out boldly with a statement without evidence to truly support our weight. The respect in front of our task, constantly trying new perspectives and accepting we aren’t all-knowing beings. When I read this book though, I feel like she is trying to discredit everyone else and convince me of her view being the right and true one. We are in court and she is defending her view on Eleanor. But the prosecutor’s side is gaining on her constantly. The text contains several mistakes, some blatant, and far-fetched speculations. Sometimes stories are repeated without questioning the sources, legends are presented as facts. She seems to even forget at points that she is writing about the medieval age, which becomes incredibly problematic.
On p. 89-90 when she gives a suggestion on why Eleanor didn’t turn up in Poitiers in 1138, is a perfect example of when she takes the material too far. Same thing happens on p. 91 when she not only disclaims Eleanor’s power in her relationship to Louis based only on the few charters (scholars argue she used her power through Louis, not in charters) and yet again blows her speculations way out of proportion in saying that there was a deliberate policy in place to keep her out (what..?) and pins up the hate for her influence from the legacy of Adedelaide of Maurienne as reason. There is no evidence at all to support this. She does things like this constantly, and it is disconcerting with what ease she presents it. I could go on and on, but I’ll just give you some examples:
At p. 49 it is stated that to the 30 year old William death was a “distant prospect”. This is part of her argument for Eleanor not being meant or prepared for becoming duchess of Aquitaine. Again, this is the medieval world. Battles and diseases haunted by death were everywhere. No one could be too sure despite their age. From the cradle to old age (hence the heir and a spare-expression). Once again I doubt if she is really thinking in medieval terms while writing.
This argument continues on p. 52, where she states that if Eleanor had been considered the heiress to Aquitaine “it is almost certain that her future would have been settled at an earlier age”. No, it’s not. There is a myriad of different possible reasons why William had yet to betroth his daughter to anyone (as everyone before her has stated). Yes, his excommunication was a problem, but if he was truly concerned for a male heir or marrying his daughter away he could’ve found an end to the conflict sooner. Really, that he didn’t betroth Eleanor (or Aelith) to anyone for all these years could be for many different reasons. But we know too little about the situation so we can’t know what he was thinking. But what we can know is that if William was truly stressing out on the point of having another male heir he had 6 long years to clear that business out between Aenor’s death and his own. That’s a long time. We simply don’t know what his plan was, but Cockerill uses these events as “evidence” for her views when really they prove nothing. Again, I doubt her judgement.
Building on this, on p. 51, she suggests William went on pilgrimage in spring 1137 in order to clear his name so he could marry Emma of Limoges. The only problem being that Emma was already remarried the year before.
P. 58 she assumes Dangereuse supported her daughter Aenor in educating Eleanor and several other young noble women for their future. Again, without any evidence but only speculation (and wishful thinking?) presented as fact.
On p. 62 she keeps on pointing out surprise at how religious life must have been for Eleanor. Again, we are in medieval Europe. What did she expect? On this and neighboring pages she also makes a lot of assumptions on the importance of different cultures (like the Islamic one from the Iberian) on Eleanor’s early years. Ending with that Eleanor must have been a young girl with a thorough understanding of other cultures more so than other girls of her age. This is pure speculation going way, way too far.
And to a major one: A point she drives through later is about the relationship between Eleanor and Henry. Cockerill argues they were probably not very emotionally attached to each other, almost completely uninterested, spending much time apart. Again she steps into territory way beyond what she can prove with evidence and reason. No one doubts Eleanor’s and Henry’s marriage was a business deal. Marriages in this time within the nobility were political first and foremost. Personal attachment came second. But for a husband and wife who supposedly weren’t very interested in each other they sure had a lot of children (8 or 9 children in 13 years!). Way beyond an heir and a spare. The number of sons in fact turned out to become a problem and headache for them both and was possibly one reason behind the trouble that built up to the revolt. This is no evidence, but for a couple supposedly uninterested in each other the amount is curious. Henry was a busy king, just as Eleanor was a busy queen. Together they had to govern an area more than twice as large as England, hence their time apart could be as much for practical reasons as anything. Certainly not an argument for personal emotion. I do think their relationship was very complicated, also in that they were both unusual people. Whatever they felt is hard to know today, but I do not believe in the cold indifference Cockerill argues. True evidence points against it (and there is more of that but on to the next).
If her speculations weren’t enough there are several factual wrongs. Some major and some minor.
For example, on p. 91 she states Eleanor was 15 in 1138, but Eleanor was, also due to her own account, born in 1124 which with simples maths would make her 14... On p. 49 it is stated the young Geoffrey of Anjou had succeeded his father before he married Empress Matilda, and his military capabilities in this title so recommended him to Henry I of England as a match for his daughter the Empress. This is wrong. It was Henry himself who knighted him before this marriage (a ceremony which was a big step to adulthood for young men of the nobility) confirming him into adulthood, and Geoffrey only became count a year *after* his marriage to Matilda. A marriage which his father set up before he left for Jerusalem, and left his titles for his son.
There’s just too much weird stuff going on. So much so that I started skipping after only 50 pages to different events to see what she could be coming up with next.
I’ve read most of the non-fiction literature there is on Eleanor out there. Let’s be honest: the best you can find is still Ralph V Turner’s brilliant biography on Eleanor. Neither is Helen Castor’s chapter on her far behind. Then again, they are scholars. If I am being brutally honest this book is a pop-written revamp of Ralph Turner’s version. The additions Cockerill does come with are often of a speculative manner, completely irrelevant additions falling apart under slight scrutiny.
I am disappointed. I truly am. I was looking forward to this book and all its promises, but instead I feel cheated. For a long time now I’ve longed for the ultimate balanced biography on Eleanor. One which really digs deep into research and argues well for its standpoints, as so many scholars are asking for as well (not that I do not respect some of the scholarly-written literature so far, but they are more starting points for the subject, asking for more research themselves). I definitely fell for the lure and walked into the trap with this one. I’ve seen other reviews expressing the same disappointment though which gives some solace in that at least I am not alone.
Don’t get me wrong. If she had kept to what she could prove, telling that story only and not leaned so much on speculation this would have been something completely else. I wanted it to be that something else too. I did long to read this book, and perhaps that is why I am so disappointed. I do respect her work to want to give something new to the Eleanor world, but nothing in this world stays without evidence supporting you.
I want research into Eleanor to continue, but not like this. Not speculation. Give me serious scholarship, with serious theories holding up. We deserve to not be fooled and Eleanor deserves to be properly researched.
Meanwhile, friends, if you want the most balanced account on Eleanor out there you will have to keep to the scholarly literature. The subject is just too tricky without having proper background to balance yourself when writing. That’s my best advice.
Peace.