This anthology series has now made it to two straight instalments of very high quality. I read the first volume of the Syrup yuri anthology earlier this week and the comparison, for me, was not even close.
There are a lot of good stories in this instalment and only a couple meh ones. The only straight up dud is the incest one; you’re never going to get me to buy an incest story, let alone a yuri one. Fortunately it’s the exception and not the rule here.
Oddly, two of the best involve adult-teenager pairings which is another thing that I tend to be very critical of. One of them is written by Fly, who did the best story in the last volume, and they get around this trope by making the characters VERY aware of the consequences involved for everybody if they did anything. It was not as good as their previous work, but I did really enjoy it.
The better version of this is Unresolved Prologue, which is near the start of the book and is one of the best stories. This one is about a chance encounter between a teenager and a young woman on a ferry. It’s very much about two people falling in love very quickly, but the author smartly flips it so the teenager takes the lead in terms of power dynamics (the young woman is pretty hopeless). It also deals with the age gap in a realistic way and has an utterly charming conclusion.
However, I ended up thinking the best part of this anthology turned out to be Love Drops, a story that starts with a ridiculous premise of a student making a love potion out of a jar of candy and getting her friend to take it. It turns into a very sweet narrative between the two over the course of a couple weeks.
This was, hands down, the one story that I felt I wanted more of - it could easily have been spun off into a full series with that premise and the characters complimented one another perfectly. It’s got a real spark to it.
So, that’s what I liked most out of a really good volume of Eclair. I’m now to the point where I’m actively looking forward to these coming out rather than wondering if they’ll be any good and that’s a net positive.