3.6 stars
a heartfelt and realistic middle grade about homelessness; that is fairly well written, has a pretty great center friendship and characters, handles its topics and themes with care, respect and nuisance. really promising for a debut!
the writing was solid - it was very quick and easy to read, though at times it was lacking in descriptions in terms of what was happing and the description of things themselves. however, i feel that it had some vibe/feeling of San Francisco as a city and a more general summerish-feeling to it, which is something that i always love to read, even if its not that strong or distinct. i often feel that with books like this (middle-grade slice-of-life's tackling heavy/realistic topics) the characters are more often than not - badly written, thankfully it could not be farther from the case here! i cared about the characters a lot, and i think that the main friendship was written quite well in particular. they all had very distinct and well-defined personalities and general vibes, and their relationship dynamics between the entire 'main cast' were realistic and engaging to read about. the development in relationships over time is very slow, which is both a pro and a con, in that that it is realistic but also makes the main friendship between the two not really turn into that until farther into the book. the well written-ness of the characters, mainly Cal and Jeanne Ann, was the main reason that this book got as high of a rating that it did from me. they were primarily the reason that i was invested in the book, and i really got to care about them!
the writing being quite light, the very upbeat way the characters acted in parts and the happy 'everything's looking up' ending make the book feel fairly positive despite its main-plot topic. however, i don't mean it in a way like the book is romanticizing or downplaying its heavy themes, or that it is afraid to go into more emotional and heavy elements of the already serious topic of homelessness, or that it is disrespectful to its themes - i believe the opposite! the themes of homelessness and how people treat you because of it, both negatively and positively, in a form that is unwanted, are well developt and handled with care and respect. Joyce and Jeanne Ann both disliked and turned away any help that people outside gave them, and actually acted like real people might in their situation. people outside, like Cal and Sandy, who were despite to help, but at times felt frustrated about their lack of reciprocated care towards the help that they were giving, or frustrated at people who were not helping - and also themselves for not helping enough in their eyes.
the plot was engaging and kept me interested all the way through, mostly because of the aforementioned good writing of the characters. the book was fairly slow paced, and it rarely felt boring or dull, and most of the book was spent on relationship dynamics that do well with this sort of slow burn style of pacing. i feel that the main friendship was well written and realistic, in large part due to the absence of a instance friendship and very slow development of their friendship that felt very believable. around the middle of the book, i felt a bit worried that they were at this point, they were barely on speaking terms and wasn't certain how they would get to this 'best-friend' statis by the end of the book. i think that it sort of worked itself out, even though the ending half felt in general a bit rushed in all pacing-ways. as well, at points it felt like the plot was moving in circles and not much was happing or progressing for the overall middle section. i would echo the slight pacing problem for the ending too, that not much progress was made for most of the book, until the big, dramatic ending. perhaps the book is trying to say something about how hard it is to get things to change without sudden, drastic actions? or that the much faster pacing for the start reflects how easy it is to get into these situations, and the stagnation in the middle how hard it is to do anything while you are in them?
oh, and also need to shout out the nice writing for that one food scene!
did i enjoy it? -yep!
would i read it again? -probably not
would i have read it knowing what i do after? -100%