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Deftly recreates the world of the Gupta Empire... widely regarded as the golden period of classical India Sanjeev Sanyal 373 CE. In the thick forests of Malwa, a mysterious stranger gallops into combat to rescue a young courtesan, Darshini. His name is Deva and he is the younger son of Emperor Samudragupta. That chance encounter that Darshini has, with Deva and with his two friends, the loyal general Saba Virasena and the great poet Kalidas, forges a bond that lasts a lifetime. In time, from a dispossessed prince, Deva goes on to become one of the greatest monarchs in ancient India, Chandragupta Vikramaditya. But the quest for glory comes with a blood price. For as Chandragupta the emperor sets aside his personal priorities to build a destiny for himself, his one-time friends become his harshest critics... A sabre-rattling tale of love, revenge, friendship and ambition, The King Within is a remarkable novel about the power of passion and the passion for power, and the difficult choices a man must make. A wonderfully crafted, engrossing tale that takes us back in time Bibek Debroy

256 pages, Paperback

Published May 10, 2019

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Nandini Sengupta

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Nandini Sengupta is a Pondicherry-based writer and journalist. After a chance trip to the Ajanta and Ellora caves in 2007, she began researching third and fourth-century India which quickly deepened into an obsession with India's glorious past. She now lives in Pondicherry's quaint French quarter with her little daughter, Kiki. Her first book of fiction, The King Within, was published by HarperCollins India in 2017.

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August 17, 2017
When I discovered that Nandini Sengupta's first novel 'The King Within' was coming out and it was a historical novel set during one of the fascinating times in Indian history, during the era of the Gupta dynasty, I couldn't wait to read it.

The story told in the book goes like this. Darshini is a courtesan-actress. She is travelling with her escorts to Ujjayni to participate in a music and poetry festival. During their travel, Darshini and her group have to pass through a forest. There they are attacked by a group of tribesmen. Darshini realizes that they are outnumbered. Just when she has given up hope and starts praying to the Buddha, the Enlightened One, a new man enters the scene and engages the robbers in a sword fight. People who come with him also join the fight. Before long half of the robbers are killed and the other half beat a hasty retreat. The newcomer introduces himself as Deva. There is more to him than meets the eye. Deva offers to accompany Darshini and her group to Ujjayni. He also introduces her to his friends. And thus begins a long beautiful tale of friendship between four young people which stretches across time and geography, a friendship which goes through challenges hurled at it by personal relationships and historical events. What happens to these four friends forms the rest of the story.

For a book which is around two hundred pages, 'The King Within' is epic in scope. The story starts at a time towards the end of Samudragupta's reign and continues through Chandragupta Vikramaditya's reign till nearly the end. I don't know how the author managed to pack in so much in a book of this size. I loved the historical characters who came on the stage - Chandragupta Vikramaditya, Dhruvaswamini, Kalidas, Saba Virasena, Fa Hein, Queen Dattadevi, Varaha Mira - they were all complex and beautiful and flawed and real. I don't know whether Darshini was historical but I loved her very much - to me she was the heroine of the story.

I loved the depiction of the life of that ancient era in the book - the dress people wore, the food they ate, the different kinds of wines, the different types of flowers, what people did for entertainment, the music people listened to, the relationship between Hindus and Buddhists - this was very beautifully written. Clearly the author has done her research very well. I also loved the description of the swordfights in the book - beautiful, elegant, graphic without being gory - it was like watching Gene Kelly dancing around with his sword, thrusting and parrying, in 'The Three Musketeers'. I loved Nandini Sengupta's prose - it flowed smoothly with an elegant touch, page-turning during action scenes and slow and thoughtful in contemplative scenes.

The story is gripping from the first scene and as the book transitions from the everyday happenings in the life of four friends to the larger issues of governance and managing the empire, we move from the particular to the general, from the everyday detail to the bigger picture on a larger timescale, and the whole transition is seamless and brilliant. Reading this book made me want to read more about the history of that period. That, I think, is one of the great achievements of the novel - making the reader want to read more.

I loved 'The King Within'. If you like historical novels which are well researched, have cool characters, dashing adventures, cultural interludes and also talk about the bigger picture, you will love this.

I will leave you with some of my favourite lines from the book.



For what was love if not suffering? Was it not the touchstone that transformed the earthy into the ethereal, ecstasy into bliss, giving mere humans a taste of eternity? Why blame destiny when, as the Enlightened One said, 'There is no path in the sky.' If her actions were hers, so were the consequences. Darshini felt drawn to Urvashi, more strongly than she was drawn to Shakuntala. Shakuntala was blamelessly poignant while Urvashi was dignified in her tragic flaws - one a girl, the other all woman.

The relentless rains had made way for blue skies and a nip in the air. Winter was on its way and this was Darshini's favourite time of year. She loved the autumn for its promise of a gentler season, unmarred by the harshness of summer or the bleakness of winter, an in-between time when nature's bounty seemed so much more magnified. It did not have spring's riot of colour, but autumn always felt like a time for celebration.

"Sometimes, I wonder if it's all been worth it after all. You spend a lifetime putting in place relationships and then you turn your back for a moment and they all come undone. And there's nothing you can do about it. Nothing at all."

If dawn is the purity of unspoilt promise, she thought, dusk is the brevity of conclusion.



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324 reviews47 followers
September 27, 2017
I am not much into Historical Fiction but this book came very highly recommended from a dear friend and this was Author's debut work hence I had no expectations from it. Also, this is one of those very few books that can very well be judged by its cover as they say "Never Judge a book by its cover" it works totally opposite for this one. As beautiful its cover is, the writing is way more beautiful, a very intriguing account of four friends told in a riveting manner such that I kept asking for more as it ended. Another co-incidence if I may call it is that the story starts from a town called Ujjainy :) that fortunately happens to be my hometown as my parents and siblings still stay there and we visit it twice a year religiously. Also, I did my schooling from an institute which is named after one of the main characters of this book. That was like WOW! I had no idea what I had in store as I started the book. But this book made me realize how hard it is to rewrite a story which is 16 Centuries old, just imagine. One has to take care of so many things, not only the timeline of the story or the characters but the Geography, attire, weapons, what they eat, how they talk, how they fight and so much more. But this one, even after being a debut work does not only full justice to the narrative, it actually sets a standard so high for the Author herself that I will be hooked and waiting eagerly for her other works or you may call a sequel if she ever writes.

Story is set in the year 373 CE and about four main characters. Deva (The Prince and soon to be a king), Virsena (The Warrior), Kalidas (The Poet) and Darshini (a girl they save from savages) and who joins them for the journey called life. Right from the word go, the story is so amazing that I just couldn't put it down and had to finish it in flat 24 hours with a couple of breaks in between. The way they save her and the action which follows sets up the course and she follows them on their journey to Ujjainy. Even the introduction of the prince in the very first chapter, the way it is done and how his identity is revealed actually gave me goosebumps, I had to read the para thrice for that amazingly unbelievable title and his full name. And I realized there was no looking back from thereon. It has its own twists and turns too as it couldn't be that simple as I expected it to be. How it goes forward and the Prince even after having his own past and life, keeps up with Darshini and his friends is a superb tale with so much packed in it. Story the way Author has told is so smooth and transforms from one scene to another brilliantly, from regular fun life to the Kingship is totally amazing. I loved the part Kalidas plays in the story and almost all the Epics that he has written get not only a mention, he actually throws some light on them himself as when he was writing them what all he was going through and even that gels so well with the story , thats totally commendable on Author's part and hats off for the research she must have done to make it that way.

I totally didn't expect that a book with mere 224 pages will pack in so much punch in it. Also, two sequences that I must mention without forgetting is a terrific action sequence between the Prince and his elder brother (not only fighting for the throne but for a lot more), the way the entire sequence is done and the way it ends - it actually reminded me of visuals from "Lord of the Rings", I will not call it an inspiration but if you read it, I am sure you will agree with me that the sword fight and the ending totally reminds you of one important sequence from LOTR and imagination is terrific. Second is another fight sequence towards the end done in full public view, Man! that sent me back in time and reminded me of the "Gladiator" fight, not so much action but the arena that came to my mind was almost as good as that. Hats off to the way it was done in the book, totally Goosebumps moments and that made me wonder if this ever gets made into a movie, it will be a superb watch. I have no doubts on the books historical accuracy too in depicting the times of Samudragupta and the making of Vikramaditya as it is so convincingly and terrifically done. Even the support cast and their own stories are given their own dues and hold up pretty well. I loved the Buddhist, Chinese and SriLankan connections too.

If you have read it, do tell me how you liked it and if you haven't, you've got to read it as soon as you can. Do not miss this epic of a book which is too short to my shock, surprise and pleasure as I never wanted it to end. Pray that the Author does comes out with a sequel as I am really keen to know what happens to the four friends in the end an their next generation :).
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October 28, 2017
The King Within by Nandini Sengupta is a historical fiction set in 373 AD, almost 16 centuries ago in the place we know as Jambudweep or the ancient India. The story follows the lives of four friends, and their destinies which brings them to a full circle.

The story opens with an ambush by Deva, the younger son of Samudragupta, wherein he saves Darshini along with his friend Vira. Soon enough, they form a bond which only strengthens over time. Also included in the group is Kalidas, Deva’s friend and the poet laureate of his time. While Deva is a warrior, his elder brother, Ramagupta, the crown prince is more of a schemer and dislikes battles. Needless to say, Rama sows seeds of doubt in their father’s mind regarding the choice of the next king and makes him name him as the successor, and snatches away Deva’s betrothed, Dhruva, marries and tortures her just for the heck of it. Although Deva craves for the love of his life, Dhruva, he also has a wife and a young girl along with keeping Darshini as his mistress. Subsequently, when Deva saves Rama from the clutches of an enemy, and when the tide is in Deva’s favor, Rama puts him under house arrest on pretext of him being seriously ill, while limiting his contact only to a few persons, mostly to provide food. Meanwhile, Rama starts behaving and ruling the country like an emperor and also puts Deva’s closest aides under constant watch.
Will Deva’s friends ever be able to rescue him in time? What will happen if they are unable? And what if they are able, how will the enmity between the brothers end? What will happen of the country they call their kingdom?

Just about a couple of pages in the book, I knew it wasn’t going to disappoint me in terms of language, a feat I’ve rarely seen Indian authors achieve with our colonisers’ language. And that, my friends, was something that hooked me more than the story itself. Yes, for me the language is the most important aspect of any book, then follows the rest. Having been on a reading break for the past two months proved it’s worth, when I found myself reading the immaculate words forming beautiful sentences, giving me the high I always get when am drowning in a fictional world. As for the plot line, frankly, it was a little less exciting than I had hoped for. More than a piece of history, it was a tale of characters, and more than a love story, it was a tale of friendship. Although there were no loose ends, one thing I noticed missing was the explanation for timeline and the age of the characters. A passing mention or maybe a reference to the time elapsed would have been of great help.
Divided into two parts, the power of passion and the passion for power, sees the evolution of the characters according to the circumstances. The description of characters, be it primary or secondary, was taut. None felt incomplete, but little was left to imagination. Between the two female protagonists, I admire the character of Dhruva more, for in my eyes, she was a true princess. Having endured torture at the hands of her first husband, she still hopes for a better future with Deva, yet somehow she doesn’t get what she deserves for her unwavering love for Deva. And Darshini, she always got what she wanted, even though she was a courtesan, she got more than she actually deserved for her loyalty to Deva. Being an ardent supporter of monogamy, it is difficult for me to understand the concept of polygamy, both then and now, and it makes me more sad than furious, and a little unbending to the concept. I know it is not uncommon, but it seriously puts me off the character. The shift in Deva’s emotional wavelength in the later stages speaks volumes of what power and ambition can do to a man if combined together. While it brings him on the crossroads similar to the one he had faced during his prime, it also is a lesson for the reader that everything comes round to a full circle.
This tale of friendship is littered with hate, revenge, fratricide, ambition and polygamy, yet it manages to strive on a common feeling of love - love for a lover, a friend and a country.
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425 reviews159 followers
July 24, 2022
Avis Lecture 🧐📖 "The King Within" Sengupta Nandini 🇮🇳

Dans les forêts épaisses de Malwa, un inconnu énigmatique galope dans une embuscade tendue par des bandits pour sauver une jeune courtisane, Darshini. Son nom est Deva et il est le fils cadet de l'empereur Samudragupta. Cette rencontre fortuite, d'abord avec Deva et plus tard avec ses deux amis, le loyal général Saba Virasena et le grand poète Kalidas, forge un lien qui dure toute une vie. D'un prince dépossédé, Deva devient l'un des plus grands monarques de l'Inde ancienne, Chandragupta Vikramaditya. Mais la recherche de la gloire se fait au prix du sang. Une histoire d'amour, de vengeance, d'amitié et d'ambition.
The King Within parle du choix souvent difficile entre le pouvoir de la passion et la passion du pouvoir.

Je continue mon immersion dans l'inde merveilleuse, avec ce récit de Fantasy historique, prenant place dans l'Âge d'Or, entre le 3eme et 4eme siècle après JC a l'époque de Chandragupta Vikramaditya.

Le récit est court : 170p en ebook, mais il reste assez prenant et facile d'accès. Les personnages sont très bien décrits ainsi que leurs vêtements et les scènes de batailles et combats à l'épée sont vraiment réussies.
Une fois les prénoms bien assimilés, je n'ai eu aucun soucis à suivre l'histoire.

Pourtant, malgré les belles descriptions, les personnages n'ont pas réussis à me convaincre, j'ai tout de même passé un bon moment de lecture et j'ai aimé le côté historique de ce récit. De l'Inde, je connaissais avant tout quelques bribes de sa mythologie, mais je ne connais rien de son histoire politique. Ça me donne donc très envie de plonger encore plus dedans ! 🤩
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325 reviews106 followers
November 19, 2018
Unputdownable.

After a long time I finished a book in two days. Fast-paced, showing glimpses of the glorious history of India and a tale of humans bonded by love and governed by duties.
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October 1, 2020
Enjoyed this swashbuckling tale of power, passion and politics. Written with insight and imagination, the story brings alive the reign of Chandragupta Vikramaditya. What I loved most about the book were the vivid descriptions of sword fights. Looking forward to reading more of the author's work.
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6 reviews
July 7, 2019
Just read 'The King Within' by Nandini Sengupta.

I found this tale , woven around King Chandragupta Vikramaditya, a very engrossing one. It is a historical fiction circa 373 BC.It involves not only the great monarch Chandragupta but also other notable historical characters like the great poet Kalidas, the court astrologer VarahaMihir and the Chinese pilgrim Fa Hien . Chandragupta's family, his father Samudragupta, brother Ramgupta and sons Kumargupta and Govindgupta are also portrayed.With this the author blends the fictional characters like Nagar Nati Darshini and others so well that one actually forgets which is history and which is fiction. The product is very engaging ....one need not care about history or fiction. To me it was the life and times of Chandragupta coming alive!

The plot gallops from the time the four friends Deva, Virasena, Kalidas and Darshini meet and embark on a life long friendship. It is at the same time , their personal journeys too with Deva turning into the glorious emperor Chandragupta, Kalidas writing his plays based on his time (Raghuvamsa based somewhat on Gupta empire or Kumarsambhaba with the crown prince Kumargupta in his mind) or Darshini 's journey from a beautiful maiden to the Nagar Nati to the member of the Court of Elders to a Buddhist pilgrim : are all equally captivating. But of all I loved Dhruvaswamini too ! Loved her diplomatic sense, her genuine concern for her children - her own or step, her possesiveness or her insecurities.

All the characters age so gracefully. There are no gaps in the plot. The events are quite rapid and not for a moment did I feel like putting the book down. No boring bits and pieces anywhere. Very concise, engrossing and well edited.

Also loved the Sanskrit words used . A glossary is also there at the end of the book. This added in creating the environment of the time.

Loved my journey through 'The King Within'. Waiting now to begin 'The Poisoned Heart' , the sequel with eager anticipation.
1 review
August 17, 2017
Fierce clash of swords, the heroic display of the protagonist, palace intrigue, love triangle of Deva the protagonist, Darshini the beloved friend and Dhruvaswamini the empress, the tryst of friendship of Deva, Kalidas and Virasena and the myriads of journeys through the dense forests of ancient India.........the novel has all elements to make it a blockbuster thrilling movie and surely to woo an avid reader.
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17 reviews3 followers
November 21, 2021
The 1st book in the trilogy is "The King Within" and it is about Chandragupta II.
From a non-crowned prince "Deva" to crowned king - Chandragupta and then proving worthiness and the making of Chandragupta "Vikramaditya".

The book also shows the beauty of the capital Patliputra in that era. From ensembles to territorial beauty, the cultural openness, the flow of international trade and diplomacy, religious tourism.

One will find a glimpse of Kalidas' work, music, astrology, trading of culture from Fa xien, Roman wines and food, and more.

It has everything to be a good movie :D, a disliked brother, people's prince. Friends to die for. Being royal but a friend with all classes. Hero to save his brother (who doesn't like Deva) from the fierce enemy, has a lover who is also a friend but from a different religion. Hero's heart was broken once as the brother out of jealousy had married the girl Deva loved but now is ex. Then Deva won the ex back and realized she was fighting her own battle for the hero. Encounter with same enemy multiple times and being winner each time. Despite fratricide, became King, married ex (the brother's widow), and triumphed his metal by absorbing countless kingdoms under him.

Cons:
1. Map would have been helpful to understand the making of Vikramaditya
2. Battle and war details were missing.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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30 reviews
September 26, 2020
The plot could have been more reed fined. I loved reading the descriptions of the Gupta period. Their accuracy and authenticity is debatable. However, I am fascinated by the world author has created. Story could have been more detailed and the characters could have had more depth. Barring that it was a wonderful read.
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351 reviews275 followers
February 7, 2018
The book begins with a scene where a courtesan named Darshini is being attacked by a group of bandits. She only has two protectors left with her after she had sent some of them to fetch water. Two against six? That is when Deva steps in and shows his mastery skills of the sword bringing down the bandits to the ground in no time. Not to forget he came riding in a horse. Deva saves her and introduces her to his friend Saba Virasena. The three of them form an unlikely bond of friendship. Darshini was on her way to Ujjayni to perform in their festival. Deva and Virasena accompany her on this journey and when they are almost close to Ujjayni, her earlier enthusiasm of participating in the event starts to dissipate as she thinks that she will not meet Deva and Virasena again. At first, Darshini wasn’t aware that Deva himself was Chandragupta but later on she does find out. I enjoyed their friendly banter.

The book is based on historical figures, the backdrop of the story is set in the medieval times, 373 AD, the characterizations are that of the time when kings and queens ruled our country. The scenes have that grand and majestic feel to them. Even the characters dress up in royal manner. The setting is regal and magnificent. I loved the portrayal of the characters. They were not perfect neither were they faultless. They had their own struggles to deal with, they made mistakes and they regretted some of the choices they have made. This made them look all the more humane than mannequins. They felt real with flesh and blood.

I loved the choice of words in this book. The language has that medieval feel to it and the writing is supported with thorough research. The writing style is descriptive. The narrative presents the historical events, the facts and figures in such a placid and mellow way. It’s smooth and allows generous amount of time for the characters to shine.

There were some grammatical errors which I noticed in the book. Overall,the editing was good but yes, some glitches were left out. I really enjoyed the story, the characters, the setting and everything but one thing I felt was that the pace of the book was a bit disturbed. At times, the pace felt fast and at times it was slow. Another thing which I felt while reading was that the scenes shifts were swift and rapid. At times, it felt as if they were overlapping on one another and it took me some time to figure out whether it was a new scene or a continuation of the previous one.

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16 reviews
August 20, 2022
This is the first book of "The Gupta Empire Trilogy".

It is about a king and his friend's journey through the twists and turns of the destiny. The story goes through three generations, their emotions and aspirations. Though the plot is open and future story is revealed at many points in the book, the gripping narration of the scenes hold us till the end. This gives a fresh perspective as the author focuses not just on the lavish lifestyle of the royal families, but also on the hardships behind the royal alliances and actions.

There are a few errors by the editor at places where the names of the characters are changed (for ex, there is a character Vishnu Vardhan which was spelt as Vishnu Varman in few places) and spelling mistakes.

Overall, the book gives a good opening for a trilogy that can make readers go for the next parts.
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2,876 reviews117 followers
July 3, 2021
Easy and quick read. The Gupta period its majestic life and the glory as a reader could visualize by the description. The depth of research behind the writing is visible in the way the incidents or events, life, art, culture, and the way description takes the reader into the aspects. Familiar names - Chandragupta Vikramaditya, Dhruvaswamini, or Kalidasa whose tales from various sources are given the representation as the readers are familiar with. Dive into the world of history.
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November 2, 2017
This year, I have experimented with reading. I have always favored contemporary fiction, thrillers over historical fiction, mythology and science fiction. The historical fiction that I had read were mostly about Second World War. But when I saw the cover of The King Within by Nandhini Sengupta, I knew I had to read it. And soon we met at her residence during SRR meet and she had interesting tales to tell about how the cover came into existence.
Before I started reading the book, I did a small research about Gupta dynasty. The most I knew about that era is what I had read in history books. "Guptan era is the golden era of the country" And what sacrifices did the kings make to make it a reality? I thoroughly enjoyed the book.
The excerpt gives away much the storyline but how Nandhini tells so much of things in so little words is a treat to read. Sometimes, very few times, I felt like she could have elaborated more. Like in one instance, the lead character Dharshini is gifted with Rose saplings. May be it was the first time the flower was introduced in India. She could have gone full on history about how it came to India, from where it came here etc etc., but she keeps it short. There are so many such small things sprinkled through the book.
The scope of the book is unlimited. Nandhini had a great canvas. One of the reasons I stayed away from historical fiction is given the scope the authors tend to wander off from the main story to tell as much as possible about the setting and that era and show off their research. But in "The King Within" the story stays true to POVs which was refreshing.
Also the female characters were as strong as it gets. I loved Dhruva, as her character was very dynamic which is followed by the character of Deva. I read ivory thrones earlier this year and I couldn't help but appreciate the research went in for this novel. The queens were not just in pedestal. They were real. I loved the way Dharshini and Kalidasa were portrayed as true friends. But the shades of the characters in Deva and Dhruva were missing in the these two characters. There is a video game from the franchise of Prince of Persia called Two Thrones. It shows the dark side of the prince as well. It is said to be the best of the lot. Similarly the transition of Deva from the first half of the book to the second half of the book is not only logical but was awesome. The sword dual at the start of the book and middle of the book just comes alive with the narration. One could hear the clanks and thuds of the swords and dagger. It is safe to expect an epic battle sequence in Nandini's next novel.
The downside of the book is again the length. When I started the book I didn't get the enorimity of the kingdom which Samudragupta was ruling so during the second part of the novel I had to struggle a bit to understand Deva's issues and his actions. The second one is I felt aged when I finished the book. The book which can be finished in three to five hours made me travel to different part of ancient India growing up along with the characters as they grow old and also wise, develop hubris and eventually letting it all go.
Deva as a character is a enviable one. If only we all had friends who can write epics like Kalidasa, Dance and encourage like Dharshini, a person with unquestioning loyalty like Vira, I think we can all bring out "The King Within" ourselves.
I recommend this book for anybody who likes to read about Ancient India, historical fiction or if you feel like reading a nice story about friendship.
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1 review
August 31, 2017
This is the kind of book Norman Mailer would have been proud of: It superimposes verifiable facts with the mysteries of sorcery, and the personality of a ballad, and in the process becomes a timeless document. The mythology the book carves out, sets us up for an entire series of books. Nandini Sen Gupta is a fresh new voice in a market of mimic-artists.
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76 reviews3 followers
May 21, 2022
Having always thought Ancient India to be a little boring, this book was a pleasant and transformative surprise, full of gracefully written action, political and family drama and heart-wrenching romance. I especially loved the nuanced characterisation, rich with empathetic depictions of friendship, jealousy and yearning. The female characters were a major strength of this read, each of them complex, individual and powerful in their own right. They were fascinating examples of women enacting agency in often disempowering narrative frameworks. The unashamed look at sexuality, sensuality and desire was refreshing, and very well executed; it struck a steady balance between giving these themes their due and integrating them into the narrative course of life, same as anything else.

The pacing really worked for me, I’ve always enjoyed fast-paced books full of action and high emotional tensions. The romantic, platonic and family drama elements really amplified the emotional undercurrents of this book. The palpability of everything at play made for an intense and satisfying read.

The descriptive prowess demonstrated here was impressive, I loved the vividness of court life, scenic beauty, the tenderness devoted to describing the human form. All of it brought the distant time-period much closer to home than I thought possible. This book really dispelled all notions of Ancient India being anything but a thriving centre of culture, diversity and intrigue.

However, in parts the dialogue got slightly too didactic and informative for me. I would have preferred some of the personal information to have been revealed in time rather than sequentially described. Sometimes it felt as though the characters were communicating with superhuman eloquence, getting their points across without having to work to be understood, which distanced me from them. This is of course a personal stylistic preference, and did not take away from how much I enjoyed the action, world-building and putting together of a complex and historically rooted narrative.

All in all, a beautiful book I’m glad I own—I can come back to its intricacies whenever I want. I really look forward to the remaining two books in the trilogy.
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May 19, 2019
Rating - 3.5stars


The King Within is a historical fiction novel that tells the story of the reign of Emperor Chandragupta Vikramaditya. It's essentially a political drama sprinkled in with a good dose of emotions. There's pain, passion, power, love, envy, lust and so much more. The plot of the story is very well crafted and is, for the most part, historically accurate. The author has taken poetic license in places, and one can't really be blamed for that.

The writing style in this novel is very matter-of-fact and exposition heavy. It does enhance the experience of the reader at times, but it also takes away at others.

The characters were well fleshed out and we'll crafted and everything, but they were removed from the reader because of the exposition heavy style of the book. I couldn't connect to the characters and therefore didn't care about something that happened to them enough.

The historical element of the story is perhaps the thing most attractive about it. As someone who is super into Indian History and the entire vibe of kingdoms of the past, I really enjoyed reading an almost nonfictiony version of the story. But if you're someone who isn't into history as much as I am, you might have trouble immersing yourself into this world. I wouldn't totally recommend it to you guys.
1 review
September 6, 2017
A novel based on history told in harmony with fantasy that should create history! Kept me engrossed from the first line to the last ... and then beyond.
I am yet to decide which aspect of the novel I loved the most.
The story of love, friendship and leadership. Although it is a story about legends like Chandragupta Vikramaditya, Kalidasa and the like - they are portrayed as normal human beings - perfected with flaws and values of their own, natural and consistent. The historical setting comes alive through vivid descriptions with just enough details to make you feel as if you are present in the scenes.
And finally, the deep philosophy subtly interlaced in all the elements of the novel - the poignant love of Darshini and Deva, the candor and simplicity of Virasena, the spontaneity in the friendship of the four friends, the silent emotions and philosophy of Kalidasa expressed through his immortal epics, the royal politics, the likeness of the sense of dignity of the queen and the courtesan, and finally the evolution and self-mastery of Emperor Chandragupta.
I thank the author, wish her all the best and request her for many more of such gems!
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71 reviews18 followers
April 18, 2020
A beautiful novel that brings Chandragupta II (Vikramaditya) and the era of the Guptas vividly to life. The book is remarkably true to the historical record (particularly the play Devichandraguptam, by Vishakhadatta). The presence of Kalidasa (as a close friend of Deva or Chandragupta's) adds a lovely touch, and the author's descriptions of the launch of every new Kalidas play are a highlight. A very enjoyable and evocative novel.
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16 reviews
May 11, 2018
That was a cozy read! Royalty in every lines! Each character arouse from the book. Strong plot with an end which leaves an opening for the next sequel (if any). Felt like living with them & witnessing their wars, love & friendship. Happy Reading! ♥
1 review
January 21, 2018
An illuminating historical fiction!

I am not really fond of reading historical fiction for the obvious reasons that reading history bores me to death but the moment i got my hands on this book it came out as a shocker. For the very first time, i found myself too intrigued and engrossed into the narrative that i realized that the book was finished just in a span of 2 days. All i can say that this being author's debut work marvels and bewilders me at the same time that how a debut work can be crafted in such a scintillating manner with so much efficacy, detailing and strikingly intertwined that your senses refuse to believe that it is the debutant work. It is a perfect blend of contemplative whirlwind of emotions and such nail biting moments that is sure to keep you hooked till the last page is turned. It's a stirring narrative set against the backdrop of malwa with a narrative line focusing upon the life and times of 4 friends and a riveting saga of the perils they upturned and expeditions their life made them undergo. The noteworthy aspect is the whole narrative retells the moving story of 16 centuries ago and as a reader you cant help but to revel in the finesse of the research that has been so beautifully integrated to refine the whole narrative manifold. Every aspect be it weaponaries, costumes, traditions and lifestyle of that era has been so intricately woven into the narrative that it instantly teleports the reader back to the era it belongs to. She suffuses each and every paragraph with richest vocabulary and brilliant characterization of our historical laureates that will keep you enamoured with her descriptive and indulgent style of writing.
Story is set in the year 373 CE and it revolves around (as stated earlier) the 4 central characters. It can be rightly said that this is one of those rarest books which has four protagonists, criss crossing each other's paths as and when the arrow of destiny strikes in between. Deva ( princely heir of the state), Virsena (The Warrior), Kalidas (The Poet) and Darshini (a girl who was saved from the brutal attack of the perpetrators). The scene of Darshini being rescued appear so magnificently chivalrous that it is likely to linger in your head for a considerable point of time. Their journey together that leads them up to ujjainy which is going to set their lives in the most unexpected and astonishing space which is going to unfold through many layers that is to be done on the part of the readers to peel it off layer by layer. You will begin to feel getting hooked from the introductory scene itself when the prince is being hailed, the way his identity is being plucked out of the camouflage and how his path coincides with that of Darshini, his friends and how he keeps up with them to make her stay in his life. He becomes deeply devoted and does everything to make her realize how valued her existence can be in his life. The whole story is being narrated so smoothly and all the twists and turns get unfurled so effortlessly that you fail to resist the urge to re-read many of its golden paragraphs twice or thrice maybe.
"A woman's heart is a mystery to herself" said by the poet Kalidasa is the quote that is going to be my eternal takeaway from this book which really transformed my perceptions about historical fictions being too mundane to be considered as my midnight coffee companions. Kalidas plays veritably a very pivotal role in the entire narrative and how he formed the foundations of the plays he was going to write his name in the books of histpry in glittering letters for the time immemorial as the world acclaimed and revered playwright. Just in 224 pages, you will find helluva pack of stories and anecdotes woven together so intricately that you don't feel for a moment that any story or character is being hackneyed.
Even the support cast and their own stories are given their own due recognition and don't appear being overshadowed or neglected.
It's an impactful, stirring read which perfectly captures your heart and mind the moment it gets in sync with the wholesome narrative of the book. I would personally recommend this book to everyone who is fond of historical books and to those too who are not, like me. Because, this book will change your perceptions and your taste too.
Highly recommended!
Hope to read something as intriguing, insightful and edifying as this work by this author very soon!!
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30 reviews
September 29, 2021
The King Within by Nandini Sengupta is the first book in the Gupta series, and traces the rise of King Chandragupta II, also known as Vikramaditya, and the role of his four friends in his success.

The book opens up with Darshini, a courtesan being rescued by Deva (Vikramaditya) and his friend Virasena, and taken to Ujjaini, where they become close friends. Later, they are joined by Kalidasa - yes, the famous poet - and the four of them begin a friendship for a lifetime.

What I liked:

1. The research.

Historical fictions are always written with generous doses of creative liberty, but I really love it when authors can manuever the liberties skillfully without distorting the entire narrative of history. Nandini Sengupta has done a good job here. Though the story of Ramagupta and his kidnapping is historically questioned and taken from a Sanskrit play by "Devichandraguptam", the overall story seems historically plausible. Especially, the glimpses of Roman, Chinese, etc culture add authenticity. The 7-8 years of research as mentioned in the Afterword is worth it!

2. The language is very good, even impeccable in places. This is not very common among Indian authors these days, except some greats. So, kudos to Nandini Sengupta for that!

3. The storytelling is engaging and in most parts, makes you turn the pages. One extra star just for this!

4. How power changes a man is portrayed well through Deva's character-arc. Additionally, fight sequences are well-written.

5. Inclusion of well-known characters such as Kalidasa and Fa-hien, about whom we had read in history books feels nice.

What I didn't like:

1. Sketchy.

At merely 236 pages, I felt that the overall story could have been more detailed. For instance, in one place a coup is being planned. The whole planning is merely "told" in Chapter 7-8 instead of "shown" with a dozen names thrown in, some of whom are introduced for the first time in the book. Those portions are jarring to read.

2. Characterization lacks depth.

This is the story of a man who later became the great Vikramaditya. However, except in some places, I could barely connect with the man "Deva". At all times, he seems like a distant person, his thoughts, insecurities, etc barely shown to us. Among the characters only Darshini and in some parts, Deva's second wife, Dhruvasvamini are well-sketched. Rest all appear in glimpses. Even the friendship between the four friends felt thin in places.


3. The treatment of Deva's first wife Kubernaga.

In one place, Deva is crowned as the emperor. His wife of a decade and mother of his child, Kubernaga enters the hall, but he doesnt even bother to invite her to sit next to him. Why?
Because he wants to marry his long lost lover Dhruva and make her the Empress, not this wife. Even after this, Kubernaga seems to have no qualms, no hard feelings, no heartbreak and worships her husband's second wife!

Now, this may have been historically correct. But the treatment felt a little insensitive to me. Kubernaga felt like an unwanted object in Deva's life, whom he valued even less than his servitors. He barely spoke about her or to her. Even if that was the case, a little insight into Kuber's broken heart would have been better.

I would have given the book 4 stars, but the treatment of Kubernaga, in fact, wives of all the men like Vira, Kalidasa, and later even Dhruva left a bittersweet feeling. All wives in this book are either non-existent or trouble-makers to their wise husbands. Only Darshini is understanding. Perhaps, because she is not anyone's wife.

So 3.5 stars.

That said, this book deserves to be a bestseller.
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221 reviews4 followers
November 19, 2025
When I first picked up The King Within I expected a tidy historical retelling; what I found instead was a compact, muscular story that feels both intimate and epic. The novel opens in 373 AD and quickly draws you into a world of politics, loyalties and painful choices, it’s the kind of historical fiction that makes you forget you’re reading a recreated past and makes you live inside the decisions of its people.

Plot & setting
The narrative begins with a dramatic rescue in the forests of Malwa and follows Deva, a younger prince, as circumstances propel him from anonymity toward greatness, ultimately becoming Chandragupta Vikramaditya. Sengupta keeps the action focused and kinetic: there are personal moments of tenderness and loyalty, but also the slow, often brutal calculus of power. The book does a good job of sketching the sweep of the period while remaining anchored in a few crucial episodes that change the course of the characters’ lives.

Characters & relationships
What I loved most was how the book made its relationships feel earned. Deva’s bond with his friends and companions, the loyal Saba Virasena, the brilliant poet (Kalidasa), and the tragic presence of Darshini is the emotional center of the novel. These ties are not decorative: they complicate Deva’s rise and force him into choices that hurt as much as they elevate. The friendships and betrayals are written with a restraint that kept me turning pages to see how the loyalties would bend or break.

Writing Style & Research
Sengupta’s prose is polished and lean; action scenes snap along while quieter, reflective moments carry a softness that balances the narrative. I could sense the depth of research behind every description — from the grandeur of the Gupta court to the earthy simplicity of the forests. The world she creates feels authentic and lived-in, never like a history lesson. What impressed me most was how naturally the historical details blend into the story, making it both immersive and effortlessly readable.

What I enjoyed (and who should read it)
I appreciated that the novel doesn’t try to cram endless subplots into a compact page count; instead it prioritizes character growth and moral complexity. If you enjoy historical fiction that combines political maneuvering with emotionally credible relationships think character-driven historical epics that keep the pace brisk, this will be a satisfying read. The book’s brevity is actually a strength: every scene feels purposeful.

Final thoughts and why I’m excited for what’s next
Overall, The King Within left me with a warm, satisfied feeling: it’s a strong debut that balances heart and history. I finished the book eager to follow these characters further, I’m excited to see how the threads Sengupta lays down here would unfurl in a continuation. There’s a sense that this story could easily expand into a larger saga, and I’d happily pick up whatever comes next to see how Deva’s choices echo across time.
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5 reviews3 followers
January 12, 2025
A dancer (court performer) Darshini is on her way to the grand event in the holy land of Ujjain. The event is organised by the greatest Indian Kingdom - The gupta empire and by the king Samudragupta. While on her way, she is attacked by thieves, an attack which was thwarted thanks to 2 warriors in disguise. The warriors also make sure to escort Darshini to Ujjain, where she is shocked to find out that one of the warriors was none other than the prince of the kingdom - Devagupta.

And so begins a wonderfully told historical fiction that explores the grandeur of Bharat, capturing the valor of its kings and princes, the political intrigue, and the entangled webs of romance and family affairs. This narrative promises to take readers on a journey through the triumphs and trials of a bygone era, where power, love, and loyalty intertwine to shape the destiny of mighty kingdoms.


BUT it fell short in many key areas. The world-building was underdeveloped, leaving much of the setting and context unexplored. It lacked proper character development, making it tedious to connect with the protagonists or understand their motivations. The suspense, a key element in any historical fiction as this was barely present. The narrative felt rushed, with important moments uninspiring and key conversations between characters incomplete. The battle scenes, which should have been intense and captivating, were described with minimal detail and failed to evoke the thrill they should have. Overall, it felt as though a to-be epic was crammed into a relatively short 240-page book, leaving much of its potential untapped.

Essentially there was no WOW moment.

This is not to discourage readers from reading this book. Every Indian civilization deserves to be retold, preserving its grandeur and ensuring that a wider audience learns about the great kingdoms of our country. However, I feel that our civilizations deserve an epic series that brings to life the richness of our histories, capturing the essence in great detail. We need a narrative that showcases the complexities, which brings to life the people, cultures, and philosophies that made these civilizations truly remarkable. There is a lot more to be told about Bharat's civilization and I truly hope we will also have more such retellings in greater detail like we have about the western civilizations.
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540 reviews43 followers
January 18, 2018
With power comes great responsibility. Greatest power lies in not wielding it but in understanding how to use it. Power may enable a man supreme authority but at the same time may render him utterly helpless.

'The King Within' is the story of Chandragupta's rise to power, his helplessness against the will of destiny and the remorse he felt while turning against his own kin. It's the story of love, friendship, betrayal and how power can render even the most supreme man weak in his knees.


The characters were inspired from prominent historic figures from 373 AD. The author has depicted them in a different light. Even though there were many of them, but one could easily recall their names owing to the flawless characterisation.The dialogues were impactful elucidating the emotions felt by the characters. Special mention goes to the women characters. There is Dhruvaswamini, the chief consort of Chandragupta who tries to deprive Darshini, the courtesan, of her husband's friendship and company. Dhruva, not entirely selfless, her motherly love is evident towards all her husband's children from other women. Darshini loves Chandragupta deeply, but is forced to sacrifice her happiness for the sake of her illegitimate child. Both these women endowed with endurance and strength will definitely charm you.

The treatment rendered to Chandragupta's character was perfect in every sense. He was not depicted to be a person without flaws. Along with his bravery and intellect, his vulnerabilities were highlighted too.

The names of the places and kingdoms were backed by thorough research. There was also glimpses of Kalidasa's poetic translations that will definitely prove to be a treat to the poetry lovers.

I loved the way the fight scenes were written. The words beautifully articulated each move, almost bringing the scene to life.

The only flaws I found in this book are:

1) There were no clear indication of timeline and if there was, in few places, the pace didn't quite justify it.
2)The ending was abrupt

'The King Within' offers insights on the glorious reign of the Gupta's and has its own share of thrills. This book will definitely be a prized possession for History lovers.
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97 reviews7 followers
May 30, 2019
📖 Title - The King Within (Book 1) , The Gupta Empire Trilogy.
📖 Author - Nandini Sengupta.
📖 Edition - Paperback.
📖 Number of pages -241.
📖 Publisher - Harper Collins India.
📖 Genre - Indian Historical Fiction.
📖 Brief Review - 373 CE
Deva, the young prince of the Gupta dynasty rescues a courtesan, Darshini from a gang of robbers along with his friend and general, Saba Virasena in Malwa. They accompany her to Ujjayni and Patliputra, where she discovers Deva's true identity. Darshini is attracted to Deva, befriends Virasena and admires Kalidas, the poet laureate. The four strike a strong bond of respect, admiration, friendship and love. Darshini learns of Deva's love for Dhruvaswamini who is the wife of his elder brother and the crown prince, tyrant Ramagupta. When Deva rescues the crown prince from an abduction, questions arise about the rightful successor to thof the Gupta Empire. With the help of his loyal friends, Deva claims his right to the throne. What follows is a coup and combat which leads to Deva transforming to Chandragupta Vikramaditya, the emperor sovereign.
What happens to Deva's dream of a
better and reformed empire? Will Deva find true love in Dhruva or Darshini? Will his sons continue with his legacy or will history repeat itself? Read up to know more..📚❤
📖 My Rating and Views- 4.8🌟/5.
The author beautifully narrates the story marrying off historical facts with fiction.
Truly it's difficult to believe that Darshini is a figment of imagination questioning the fact whether there maybe a remote possibility of the emperor Chandragupta II having a muse.The transformation of the brave prince, Deva to the politically apt, ruthless and benevolent king, Chandragupta Vikramaditya is truly remarkable. Dhruvaswamini is the portrayal of a powerful queen empress who represents women empowerment in that era. I have not yet read much of historical fiction, but I would recommend you to read this commendable piece of work. I am eagerly waiting to read the next book in the series - 'The Poisoned Heart'.📚💝
❤ I thank the publisher @harpercollinsin
for providing me with a copy for a honest review.
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84 reviews5 followers
February 5, 2021
A chance encounter with a young courtesan forges a bond of a lifetime between her, Deva, the loyal general Virasena and the great poet, Kalidas. Deva goes on to become Chandragupta Vikramaditya, the mighty emperor of the Gupta empire, with a life riddled with difficult decisions that not only affect him and his family, but the entire kingdom.

What a story! Kudos to the author for writing such a rich and engrossing tale. We have all read and forgotten about the Gupta empire from history lessons in school, but the way the author brings those characters and the era to life with her writing will make them stay with me for a long time.

The characters are the heart and soul of this novel. Not only does their decisions and actions move the story forward, the emotions they evoke will keep the reader engrossed and connected to them. It is hard to pick a favourite character as each of them has their own unique way of creating an impression in our minds. The development of characters as they age is remarkable to such an extent that the voice in which I heard them in my mind was quite different and mature than the voice I heard when they grew old.

The research done by the author is meticulous, and it shows. Some of the aspects might be imagined but they never had an air of exaggeration. It really felt like this is exactly how it must have been.

The only thing that felt a bit off was the time jump. It felt sudden and it took me some time to adapt to it but it never hindered the reading experience. Also, there was another thing that felt a bit odd but it would be a spoiler so I won't be talking about it, although I feel different readers might have different views on it.

This was truly a glorious ride into the past and I would highly recommend this book. This wasn't just the story of Chandragupta Vikramaditya, but the saga of one of the most powerful kingdoms of India.

Onto the second book now!
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451 reviews5 followers
March 11, 2018
Blurb-373 AD. In the thick forests of Malwa, an enigmatic stranger gallops into an ambush attack by bandits to rescue a young courtesan, Darshini. His name is Deva and he is the younger son of Emperor Samudragupta. That chance encounter, first with Deva and later with his two friends, the loyal general Saba Virasena and the great poet Kalidas, forges a bond that lasts a lifetime. From a dispossessed prince, Deva goes on to become one of the greatest monarchs in ancient India, Chandragupta Vikramaditya. But the search for glory comes with a blood price. As Chandragupta the emperor sets aside Deva the brother, lover and friend, to build a glorious destiny for himself, his companions go from being his biggest champions to his harshest critics. A sabre-rattling tale of love, revenge, friendship and ambition, The King Within is about the often-difficult choice between the power of passion and the passion for power.
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I heard the clashing of swords. I saw people fighting. Kings clashing with other kings. Author has given me one of the best experience through this book. A page turner and jaw dropping book. A book filled with thrill, love, revenge and friendship. Not every book makes you imagine at the place where the story takes place. This book took me back to that old dynasty which I never heard about and this ride was an amazing one. Grab this book and experience a totally different tale.The way the author has maintained the plot is beyond words to be appreciated. The cover of the book is designed amazingly just like its plot. Blurb could have been much better to grab the readers attention.
Grab this book and experience what it takes to be a king.
Overall ratings-5/5
Narration-4.5/5
Characterization-5/5
Plot-4.8/5
Cover-5/5
Title-4/5
14 reviews
December 11, 2021
This set of books consists of 3 novels viz., The Poisoned Heart, The Ocean’s Own and The King Within. As the name of trilogy indicates, these are set in the Gupta Empire with historical period of around 5th century CE.
Guptas ruled a large part of today’s India. Their reign is regarded as one of the glorious periods in Indian history. The great kings of this dynasty viz., Chandragupta, Samudragupta, Kumaragupta etc. are hardly known to general public except for cursory mentions in text books. These and other characters from that period come alive in these novels. Kalidasa who lived in Gupta period, appears with flesh and blood as a poet laureate.
Each novel concentrates on the regime of one great Gupta king. The novels are woven with interesting elements such as palace intrigues, the wars, the conduct of administration, the logistic and other challenges, the customs and lifestyles of the day etc. There is also a strong female character in each of these novels which acts as a counterpoint to the protagonist king and also brings in an element of romance! There is a delicious mix of historical and fictional characters whose interplay produces a delectable plot. Being a novel, it is only natural that a substantial creative licence has been taken in telling the story. However, the storyline, plots, geography and the political situation etc. are backed by substantial research which lends credibility.
Each of these novels is independent and can be read in any sequence. The plots are engrossing and well narrated. The sections on conquests and attacks are gripping and make you sit on edge. Read them not just as novels but also to get a feel of a great empire which was born and flourished in India.
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