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That’s in exchange of an honest review that I received an ARC of « You Matter » by Jazzy Mitchell. So, here it is !!!
It’s actually the 1st time I’m able to read one of Jazzy Mitchell’s book. Thank you Desert Palm Press for this discovery and reading opportunity.
My rating : 3 ⭐️
The story sets in Boston, MA – USA and focuses on Chrissy Kramer, a 32 years old single mother and paralegal & Reggie Esposito, a senior law partner at Hawk, Esposito & Associates—a leading Boston law firm. Chrissy became pregnant during her senior year of high school and was abandoned by her parents, her boyfriend, and her friends. She became a loner, working hard to provide for her son. It was her and him against the world. She eventually earns a paralegal degree & works for Reggie. Chrissy’s smitten from the beginning, but she refuses to jeopardize her job by acting on her feelings. A disgruntled former client attempts to kill Reggie after she loses his lawsuit. Chrissy prevents him from shooting Reggie, but she is hurt in the process …
The Pros :
° the originality of the plot, the promise of a good recipe : a workplace romance with a sprinkle of intrigue and danger … I was drawn to it because it seemed a bit different from what I usually read & I love when it’s different.
° 2 (seemingly) bisexual MCs one is already not that frequent even nowadays but 2 in the same time …
° the age gapbetween the MCs
° the single mom theme, with the normal everyday family issues to deal with.
° a very promising opening chapter …
° a not perfect (because I would have loved a lil bit more detailed about some parts of the building of the relationship) but quite good 6 months in time flashback (lasting for almost the half of the book to bring us back to right after the shooting) with a regular progression which allows the reader to discover how the MCs romanced each other (without totally acknowledge their feelings)… even if knowing what made Reggie look differently to Chrissy after a while would have been interesting.
° the touching, romantic, cute & funny moments
° good secondary characters, beginning by Ben, Chrissy’s teenage son … who is more than supporting.
° the author’s lil touches of humor
The Cons :
° the style … I found there were a lot of monologues, thoughts, etc coming from Chrissy. Because of this (even if I still prefer the 3rd-person narration no matter the ise of the present or the past tense), I think that, maybe, the author should have narrated the novel in the1st-person, in Chrissy’s POV … this way, all the internal « debates » would have been a part of her narration and made the story more fluent..
° the time line (even more in the last 1/3 of the book) is sometimes a bit confusing so it’s hard to really know when the actions really take place.
° the last 3 pages – which are just a part of a chapter like any other part – should have been properly identified as the « epilogue » since the scene happens … 2 years after the beginning of the novel !!!
° Chrissy’s insecurities are totally conprehensible after what happened to her when she got pregnant as a teen but, after a while, her self-deprecation is quite tiring (she second-guesses almost every single thing she mades or says…). Since she successfully graduated from paralegal school, got a good job and raised a great kid…she should have been able to give herself a tiny bit of credit but, nope … Seriously, a good shrink could have helped her with this !!
°the 1st half of the book was quite OK but, even if I may be wrong (how would I know ??), I’ve got the feeling that Chrissy & Reggie’s love story had been cut like from 25 to 50% at least … Which is annoying in the case of a slow-burn romance (a trope I deeply love) ‘cause it creates a lot of void & make the story unbalanced … Here it was like if some entire chapters have been removed. And, then, in an other part of what has become the same chapter & without any indication of how much time has past, the narration suddenly picked up. I confess that it was a bit weird in the first 2/3 of the book but I ignored the because I really liked plenty other things … It became definitely disturbing in the last 1/3 because the stories moves way faster (it's even rushed I'd say …) and it was hard to make a connexion between all the events + the romance didn’t feel like this anymore, it was more IDK, maybe like a succession of booty calls … (and I’m not fan of this !!!)
° the totally unhygienic 1st intimate encounter between the MCs after Chrissy has healed …
If I had to make a very short and quite different version of my review, it’d be something like this :
- Did I enjoy this book? => Yes … & … No
- Did I find the characters believable? => Yes … & … No
- Is this book now included in my « must be re-read »-list? => For now, I don’t think so
- Will I purchase the paperback? => I don’t think so
- Would I read another book by this author? => Yes … ‘cause I don’t want a light deception keeps me away of a potential great romance…
- Would I recommend this book => Yes … to the workplace romance fans / attorney stories fans / single mom stories fans and they’ll make their own opinion
Hey guys and gals, you know that now it’s your turn … So … Grab your own copy and make your own opinion …
Enjoy (or not) your reading … 😉
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