I just reread the book and because this is my first review on goodreads and I want to give a fair review of this book. I read this book with great interest, and I realize that someone will read this book either out of curiosity or entertainment. I have an ag background, and you won't (and probably should not) select this book to be educated by the author on farming, she simply doesn't have the knowledge or experience.
Oh, I know, there's a lot of 5 star reviews out there with some pretty heavy hitters commenting on its authenticity and narrative, and they should -- the writing does have some great moments. However, there are just too many ingredients and it doesn't quite make the cake. And I'm not an expert, either.
But I grew up in the plains, still own a farm there, I was raised Mennonite, and I moved to California, so I will comment on what is not working in this book for me. You have to put some of the responsibility back on Graywolf Press for throwing caution to the wind as the author is simply trying to grapple with too many topics.
But the first thing that Graywolf should have done was get a handle on the author’s tone, which lacks any sort of humility, like this paragraph from the author website: “When Paul and Luella married—the son of the town doctor and daughter of the town dentist—the two wealthiest families in town were united. They continued to make farming a part of their activities, though not the sole professional focus. At its peak, the farm was 7000 acres. The Mocketts alternate the fields planted each year, which means that in any harvest season, they need to cut around 3,000 acres.”
I have also noticed that since the author has been called out several times regarding the actual size of the remaining farm (less than half of what it once was), there was an attempt to clarify that when she was interview on NET, but this is the type of boastful disclosure that does not endear the writing to the farming community.
I think critical attitudes that drive the author out of town (and she really does box up her stuff and slips out in the wee hours) have less to do with the author’s race and more to do with that author lacks in knowledge and social pragmatics. She admitted to the LA Times that “socially, I really struggled” in high school. And it seems like she continues to struggle, maybe with the feelings of imposter syndrome, which is evident in the book. I've heard her in the interviews and readings over the past few weeks and she talks about her experiences using big words in front of the harvesters, talking about viewing incredible sunsets through the weeds, she knew she was her grandmother's favorite. It's one thing to bare all, but there is just no sensitivity in the things she says to those around her.
As a person of faith raised Mennonite, I found that her observations and novelties about Amish, Old Mennonites, Mennonites, etc., were extremely insulting, in one part trying to identify someone’s heritage based on the manner of speaking. And while the author mentions that the men who work on the harvest crew are virgins until marriage, the author’s reflections of her own marriage and the vows and sanctity associated with marriage and fidelity are glaringly absent.
We don't know much about her father except he wasn't a farmer. But there are elements in this book that give pause for the reader to imagine what happened. We know that the farm is no longer what it was -- but half is gone. Whether it was because her dad didn't work a steady job and they sold off parcels to pay bills or for her education, we may never know. There are many times where I actually feel embarrassed for the author. Can you just imagine how unnerving it is for the harvesters that resent her presence? They are out there trying to get this crop harvested and here comes the former boss's daughter in her enormous hat, shiny boots and skinny jeans complete with her notebook and annoying questions.
Whether the author accomplished what she set out to prove, the reader will need to decide, because I cannot determine this. But if I need an education on plains farming, I will always go back to the works of Wright Morris, Ted Kooser and Mari Sandoz.