The writing in this installment of the series was poor.
It was incredibly... Juvenile. The dialogue was also really awful. I finished, but I did not enjoy this installment in the series. It's a shame, they had been so good! Katie was annoying in this book. I barely tolerated her "investigation". It was written as if the author is tired of writing this series but needed to churn out another one quickly to meet a deadline. 1.5 stars... Maybe even just 1.
The mystery this time was poorly done, and I felt like the characters behaved out of character- Don especially.
And then her relationship with Andy... she's tepid about it anyway, but yet gets weak kneed and moony over him- and then wonders why he's a bit perturbed about her dinner set up. It doesn't add up. Katie should not be this emotionally dense-- and then we have paragraphs were she admits she feels a certain spark with Ray. "There was no possible way she was attracted to him. No possible way. Besides, she had Andy, who was young and extremely good looking and smart and busy, or course, but wasn't everyone?" (direct quote from Lorraine Bartelett's Dead, Bath, and Beyond). One, Katie is terribly immature and self-centered... who cares if Andy is great looking and young? Are those his only good qualities? And, two, wow that's some terrible writing. Then we have this paragraph where Katie says she lacks self-confidence and then Britney replies "I'd guess all women do, right?"-- I get the sentiment. I lack some myself. But, this feels completely out of place in this exchange and this series. Then, she proceeds to beg Katie if Crystal (who has made countless blunders and almost burned her business down) and Katie says oh sure, think of something. You complete idiot. I don't believe you could solve a murder, let alone make your way out of a wet paper sack. (Which, by the way, sounds hard actually, but it's always said like oh man, that's so easy, but think about rolling around in wet paper. It would stick to you. I can see how it might take a few minutes. But, I digress. As often I do.)
I love this series, but I was disappointed. It just... wasn't good and I am reminded now of how disappointing the last Booktown mystery was and I'm wondering what's going on with a normally solid author.