Solid 3.5 stars for this debut novel. I truly enjoyed the array of characters that Paxon is able to bring to life, and it had a solid plot and story the whole way through. It was a cute read from start to finish and I was pleasantly happy to find that our heroine wasn't the typical Hollywood A-lister. I loved the witty Chapter headings, though I'm still not sure what the "Thinkin' Stick" is... (really, a super cringe-worthy euphemism!) and the banter back and forth between the characters was great. Gracie was a favorite character of mine, (especially at the end) but I wish that Talia would have been a bit more... muchier, to quote the Mad Hatter. I felt as though at times, she was a bit flat, and with the title of "Gossip Queen," would have expected her to be a bit more ruthless and determined. Instead of seeing her go for the next big scoop, or even pursue her serious writing career more, her conflict centered on her weight. While I relate to Talia, having been bullied in high school myself, I would have liked to have seen her stand up for herself a bit sooner, not running away every time things got tough. But... oh well. While I would have given this a 4 star review normally, there was one thing I just couldn't overlook: Editing.
This book needed an editor. In a bad way. The prose was choppy, sometimes making it difficult to follow which character was speaking. In addition, incorrect usages were abundant at times (for example: you steer a horse with reins, not reigns, and "Your lucky I love you" should have been, "You're lucky I love you." There were various typos (form instead of from, and he when it should have been the or her) and it detracted a bit from the story for me. Whether it was my college editor persona rearing it's poisoned pen again, or just that I take notice of those sorts of things, I don't know, but some of them had me wincing. (PLEASE LET ME BETA READ FOR YOU!!!)
With all of that said, I made it to the end, and found myself smiling. Again, keeping in mind this is a debut novel, and one that was published as an Indie, I think it was swell! I would recommend to readers should they want a cute, love story (minus the old man balls because, gross) and would certainly give a second novel a try. Please take my criticism as constructive. I love seeing the hard work and am amazed by authors that are able to strike out and tackle getting published. The writing has so much potential!