Sorry, @MikeWellsAuthor. I wanted to like them.
This set was a free download for me and also included half of book 4. First things first, I would never have paid for each of these books individually, and I probably wouldn’t have paid for them at all even if Books 1-3 were all one book at 275 pages. I have found that my benchmark for most downloads is 300 pages (yes, even if they’re free), and I despise the cliffhangers. If you want my interest and a decent review, give me a stand-alone novel with some depth to it. If I know the author or ALL of the reviews are stellar, I’ll come down to about 275, but most books that are shorter than that don’t have enough character development to keep my interest.
Now I’ll get to the actual review. I struggled with these books. There were a lot of good reviews, but I did not read what they read apparently. It could have been a good story line if the heroine were believable. For me, she just wasn’t. Not giving away anything that’s not in the Amazon description or in the first few chapters, Elaine Brogan is the extremely detail-oriented daughter of a construction manager who would do anything for his little girl. He steals supplies from his construction sites to put her into private school and to give her $2000 for classes she wants to take through a modeling agency. When the agency turns out to be a scam and she demands the money back, the owner gives her counterfeit money that her father deposits. When he’s arrested for passing the counterfeits, since he won’t reveal where the money came from, his fingerprints also implicate him in the construction site thefts, and he goes to jail, where he commits suicide.
This is where I start to find it hard to suspend my disbelief. ***WARNING: SPOILERS***
First, I don’t understand why Elaine and her father won’t reveal where the counterfeits came from. That incident set the whole story in motion, so I get that it was necessary for the book to continue, but I don’t understand why anyone would take the fall for that. I also find it hard to believe that the private school Elaine is attending agrees to keep her in school as a minor and an orphan. Family Services would almost certainly get involved in a case like this, and Elaine would end up in some sort of foster care. Finally, the headmaster of the school somehow arranges for a full scholarship (room and board) for Elaine for the rest of her education. Scholarships don’t just come out of thin air.
So Elaine finishes high school and is determined to get revenge on the modeling agency, so she sets herself on a path to become a U.S. Secret Service agent to work in Anti-Counterfeiting. Everything she studies, every decision she makes, is based on this career choice. She attends RISD and determines what she needs to study to qualify for a career in Anti-Counterfeiting. When she gets an interview with the Secret Service, she somehow manages to pass through extensive interviewing, psychological screening, and a lie detector test without revealing anything that would tip them off to the idea that maybe, just maybe, her intentions are not all she makes them seem to be. (Side note: in one of her training classes for the Secret Service, she encounters Gene Lassiter, an instructor who tells her that when she’s ready to quit the Secret Service and come work for the Treasury Department to give him a call. This was a one-time encounter at this point that is key to the rest of the book, and to more disbelief on my part.)
She gets the job she wants in a remote office of the Secret Service, and she asks if she can work on her own cases on her own time, so she starts looking for the head of the modeling agency. Over the course of six months, her boss makes passes at her, and she won’t give in to him. She does not file a sexual harassment complaint because she feels it would be his word against hers, and her boss eventually has her transferred to Bulgaria and says it’s because she was using the office resources for her personal research. She doesn’t fight it. She just goes. This “determined” woman who has spent her entire life preparing to get revenge on the man who landed her father in prison just rolls over and goes to Bulgaria?
Once she’s in Bulgaria, her new boss, Nick LaGrange, is much more laid back than her old boss. She works side by side with him for six months, and gradually falls in love with him. But she’s gun-shy because he doesn’t seem interested and she still has bad memories of her old boss. Just as they get to a point where they share their feelings and then sleep together (like, literally the next morning), she gets a call from Gene Lassiter asking him to meet her in Germany and not to tell anyone who she’s meeting or why she’s going because Nick is about to be arrested. So this man who taught her in a single class, who she met once and has no other known relationship with, calls her out of the blue and tells her to figure out a way to get to Germany without revealing anything. And she goes! And she believes him, tells Nick she has been reassigned to Treasury (although the Treasury is a completely different department, so she would quit the Secret Service and be hired by the Treasury), at the last minute decides to tell him that he’s going to be arrested, and then she goes to DC.
Lassiter works her day and night to create a list of software updates that need to be made to the machines that check bills for counterfeits. (He hand-picked her because of her eye for detail. While in Bulgaria, she became known as the Secret Service agent who could identify counterfeits quicker than a machine.) He checks her into a long-term stay hotel under a different name, gives her a burner cell phone, and doesn’t allow her to do anything outside of work and the hotel for months. She has never gone through any sort of onboarding or orientation that we’re aware of. She completely trusts this man. She never questions it. How on earth does she not question it?!?!
Long story short (too long already, I know), Elaine goes to test the software updates in Russia, but Lassiter has set her up with the Russians. He is working with the enemy in return for 800 million Euros so that he can live out the rest of his life with his gay lover. Elaine gets “rescued” by an Italian counterfeiter, Giorgio Cattoretti, who creates copies of designer gowns, bags, and shoes in addition to currency, because he believes that she was there to deliver the software updates because he has a stolen currency press. She ends up becoming enamored with Giorgio and agrees to stay on as his partner. (WHAT?!) And then just as quickly, she decides that he is the type of person she took this job to stop and decides that she’s going to betray him. (WHAT?!?!) She is unable to leave because her fake passport is delayed, and while they’re in Giorgio’s castle, Nick (who, as we suspected, was NOT arrested) just happens to have gotten a lead that Giorgio might be the counterfeiter who has the stolen machine and sneaks onto the property. Nick sneaks into Elaine’s room, Elaine tells Nick she has always been in love with him, Giorgio comes in and shoots Nick, and then takes Elaine away to protect her. While they’re gone, he finds out that she betrayed him and takes her out to the cliffs to toss her to her death, but she had grabbed a letter opener and stabs Giorgio in the eye, and he goes over the cliffs instead. Elaine does lose her footing and she’s hanging from the ledge, but Nick (yes, dead Nick, who was wearing Kevlar so not dead and was released by Giorgio’s cook who decided Giorgio had killed too many people) comes to her rescue. The epilogue is that they move to France, where they live with their two children and their cook Tony. (Seriously?) All of Giorgio’s staff were arrested, his counterfeiting equipment destroyed, and his body never recovered.
And you guessed it, Book 4 is Giorgio’s return…because he apparently survived the fall and was able to nurse himself back to health and then recover his fake passports so he could disappear and start over.
I know there were a lot of people who loved this set, based on the reviews, but I was not one of them.