2.5*
While I can’t say that this was my favorite book within the series, this novel was action-packed and there seemed to be so many things constantly going on. It had you sitting on the edge of your seat wondering what twists were going to be thrown at you next (some I guessed, but others I never saw coming).
However, there were still a few things I didn’t like or was confused by.
I’m disappointed with Lu accepting Dom back so easily. I think he needed to apologize a bit more – maybe grovel a bit – before getting back into her good graces. She kind of turns the tables on him, but even before that, her feelings were softening toward him and her anger, hurt, and betrayal had diminished in a really short period of time while she was actively avoiding him (so they weren’t even talking things through anymore). I definitely wanted him within the group by the end, but I think he needed to go on more of a journey to get there.
Lu felt very much like a damsel in distress through a large portion of this novel. In a way, I guess this was refreshing from the all-powerful boss babe’s that seem to be the trend of late. Instead, Lu needed the guys to save her. If she hadn’t had others to depend on (namely her boys but also Daphne, Simon, and Josephine), then she wouldn’t have made it out alive. I loved seeing Lu have to depend on others to help her instead of taking on the world herself. With that being said, Lu and her wildfire were built up so much, that it just seemed like a major plot convenience that for such a large part of the story, Lu’s magic had been rendered unusable. It felt both more realistic and improbable at the same time.
The 2nd and 3rd novels of this series have been leading up to a showdown with Albrecht and/or convenmistress Gilt. And yet, both of their deaths were so incredibly anticlimactic. For all of the build to these 2 separate moments, what actually played out was surprisingly brief and such a disappointment. I genuinely couldn’t believe either scene.
But then, when Albrecht dies, there’s a catch to it. I was surprised that he not only quickly popped up once more (which didn’t make a lot of sense to me), but the monster he became and his fight on the other side (resulting in Dom losing his arm and almost dying) was not explained very well. I’ll admit that this zombie-esque moment was a twist I hadn’t really anticipated, but it wasn’t a good or enjoyable twist so… I think it made me roll my eyes in disbelief and mild amusement (which was assuredly not the goal) instead of being swept away by the plot and how the story was getting wrapped up.
Adding to all of this, was the “Cage.” I wish that this concept (what it was and how it worked) had been explained more. It was hard for me to visualize this machine in my head and how big it was – or why such a large space (where the Cage fit) even existed underground to begin with (because this home was built by the Lockewood’s and not the Guilt’s so the construction of the Cage wasn’t the original purpose of the cavernous pocket so far beneath the home.
Circling back to Dom losing his arm though, this felt like a really weird scene. With all of their powers and magic, it was hard to believe that there was no chance for Dom to have his arm re-attached and healed. Instead, they immediately set the torn off piece of his arm on fire and his arm is officially gone from the elbow down. This was another aspect that I both loved (because the team comes back bruised, bleeding, and scarred as one might expect when they basically have to fight a war to come out on top) and hated. It too, seemed believable and unbelievable in one stroke.
At the end, I also hated how unresolved Lu and the boys still felt. For example, despite Locke being able to study another “sane” vampire, it doesn’t seem that he ever finds out the answer to eternal life outside of vampirism (based on Shane’s vison). That means that he’ll still eventually lose Lu and his brother-husbands while he lives on forever. Since this was something Locke really feared and wanted really badly to find a solution to, he just kind of gets left hanging for eternity and, while everyone else ages, he'll stay looking his same twenty-something self. It was a loose end that never got tied up and that him and Lu (and the guys) didn’t really have a lot more conversation about. I just hated how it was left (not necessarily the fact that Lu will remain mortal, but the feeling of it being swept under the rug as a non-issue).
I also disliked the fact that only Roman and Dominic are going to have kids with Lu (Lu will have 2 kids total). Locke may have been out of the running, but I hated the fact that Shane wouldn’t have a baby with Lu in the future and we never even got his view/feelings about eventually having (or not having) kids with Lu to begin with (we never even know if this was something he wanted). It was like he was forgotten – except for the fact that HE was the one having all of these grand visions of the future. To me, his character felt “used” by the author in that sense.
There were certainly things that drove me crazy during this novel, but overall (and based on the other works from the author I’ve read), this wasn’t a bad novel to conclude her trilogy. I still have some of the same complaints about this book as I did the others, and I disliked how many unanswered questions there still seemed to be, but it was a happily-ever-after ending as a whole.