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212 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 18, 2019
Blobs of ink and glitter drop off Monica and I can't help but laugh, knowing that shit is going to stain her skin for days.Why does the 'I can't help but..' even exist in this sentence? Why not just leave it at '...Monica and I roar with laughter, knowing that that shit is going to stain her skin for days'??
I can't help but look back and notice a slight flicker of jealousy pulsing through her...Again, why the 'I can't help but...'?? Just take it out! 'I glance back and notice..' works so much better!
Noah Cage walks in looking as though he's so damn hot, the ground must melt where he walks.LMAO. It's like the cheesiest of cheesy pickup lines. Thank you for the laugh!