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149 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 26, 2019
Emerald Fire is a tale of revenge and love. It follows Loriann, a girl who has magical powers of fire and ice. Due to a prophecy long ago foretold, King Cedric wants her dead, and much of Loriann’s childhood is spent trying to escape from death. Through her life, she finds friends and family in her search to achieve a peaceful life.
My greatest issue with Emerald Fire is the pacing, that is specifically how the time in the story is handled. The Emerald Fire is a quick book. Years sometimes pass in between chapters, which makes many of the scenes very shallow, and countless chapters are nearly full of narrative summary. This can work well in stories, but in the case of Emerald Fire, it creates distance between the reader and the characters, making it hard to feel sympathy and connection.
Some plot points also struggle because of this, since people change too quickly for what would make sense. Luckily, the last half of the book is more focused on specific scenes, which enhances the story greatly.
The world Kathryn has set up has some interesting locations and people, and I’m excited about what she brings in the continuation of the story.