I adored Brooke’s Mom. She is forthcoming and straight to the point. Her dad is warm, protective but not obsessively so. Her other siblings aren’t featured as much as her twin, but it reads like Brooke has a close, supportive family. The events in the middle of the book had me sitting it down in shock for a few moments and Hawk’s support in the aftermath was lovely.
Hawk reads as a solid character for the most part. He is kind, volunteers for his community and goes after what he wants, which is Brooke.
I like that the motorcycle club was written with a softer hand. Many MC books I’ve read are gritty and the plot revolves around the ‘old lady’ fitting in with the bikers and this maintained the plot on Brooke and Hawk.
I expected things to go bad with certain characters, but they didn’t which was a relief.
Brooke put up with far more of Hawk’s bad attitude than I would have, but she found her spine spectacularly.
I was confused when Brooke said she earned her associate degree in social services, but it was mentioned once then she took a job in a clothing store instead of in social services somewhere. There were some slight inconsistencies when Brooke was talking about Caden and Katie. When they announced their pregnancy Katie said they didn’t want to know the sex, but later in the book, Brooke mentions they wanted to know then changed their minds. The use of loose in place of lose was distracting and the overall dialogue read more formal. The use of each recipient's name in text messages to that person seemed out of place, like the character needed to let the person they were texting know they were texting them.
This was a nice introduction to the Gates of Hell MC series, even if their actions seem more angelic than devilish.