Waited For You

by Cora Crawford

Short Story- Matt has been waiting so long for his beloved alpha to come home from the war, but when David is wounded in action, their reunion isn't quite what they planned. Can Matt heal his mate's heart as well as his own insecurities?

Genres: Short Stories

Unknown Binding

Reviews

[The Celtic Rebel (Richard) · Rating 3 out of 5]

This quick read could have been much better if it had just been longer and better edited. There isn't enough there to really get invested in the relationship and care if they have their happy for now ending or not. And the sex scene was just too confusing at times as to which person she was referring to and I couldn't tell if she mixed up the names or what. I finally just didn't care enough to figure it out. I liked the start and the set-up but after that it was just way too rushed.

[Garth Mailman · Rating 2 out of 5]

The term MPREG was one I had to look up online. I know that in Greek mythology Zeus pulled a baby out of his thigh and I’ve read a novel about a teen with ambiguous genitalia who was raped by his cruel cousin but the idea of a pregnant male is rather high concept. A woman writing about a man in labour pains....

When the Alpha returns and the inevitable bedroom scene ensues the author seems to get confused as to who was inserting body parts into whom. Just saying. The short had no description and I took a flyer, my bad.

[Haz · Rating 1 out of 5]

I'm sorry to say this was most weirdest story I've ever read I was just trying to get my head around it , one question and the this might sound stupid to ask but how did Matt deliver his baby, what hole cause the only one a man got is his rear one

[Annemarie · Rating 4 out of 5]

I've read a lot of mpreg and omegaverse stories. I liked this little short. I wish it would've been a bit longer. Having David adjusting to being back home. Them adjusting to having baby Ava at home. I could see at least a few more chapters, but I loved what I read!!

[Sue Wolz · Rating 1 out of 5]

I really did not get it. It was about two men but Matt was eight months pregnant!!!! He had a baby girl and named her Ava. David and Matt were mates. The book was only one chapter long.

[Miss · Rating 3 out of 5]

It has a good intent & is definitely aiming to be a heartwarming story. With how short it is, though, it ends up being overly sweet & a tad rushed.

[Stacie · Rating 4 out of 5]

❤❤❤

[Tammy Crawford · Rating 4 out of 5]

Enjoyed this short sweet romance.