"What's that," asked the author. "You absolutely loved the characters from the first book. Yeah. Fuck you. They're not in this one."
"What's that," asked the author again. "You were really into the story of the first book, and couldn't wait to find out what happened next? Well, fuck you twice. This book has nothing to do with anything that happened in the first book, even though, you know, the apocalypse just started and all."
Raise your hand if you HATE when authors do this.
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Okay. So. I'm a little over 20% done with this book, and it has some seriously huge problems. Two of them being the ones mentioned above. No returning characters from the first book (Kihrin does not count because all he does is offer an occasional comment on the story being told. He is not actually a part of the story.) And it is utterly disconnected from the story of the first book. We had this big epic fight that ended with all of the demons being set free to wake up the imprisoned, sleeping dark god that will destroy the world... and then we start this book straight off with HUNDREDS of pages of irrelevant back story of a character that had maybe 15 pages, if I'm being generous, in the first book. I. DON'T. FUCKING. CARE.
It wouldn't be so bad if Janel was in ANY WAY likeable or interesting. BUT SHE'S NOT!!!!! And her story is fucking boring. There is NOTHING driving it. There is no reason for anything to be happening. She hasn't even bothered to say what her goal in doing anything even is! The author has forgotten three of the most basic things in storytelling. She forgot to give me a reason to care about her protagonist. She forgot to give her protagonist any sort of motivation as a character. And she forgot to add in any sort of driving force moving the plot forward. Which makes trying to read this book EXTREMELY boring and frustrating, because I have no reason to care about the character or anything happening to her, and I have nothing within the story to hook me; something to make me care.
Not only is it a bit of a slap in the face that this book is NOT a continuation from the end of the first book, but the story we're being given instead is just not very good. The book starts off with Kihrin asking Janel what's going on, and Janel is like, "oh, I can't just tell you, or you might take it out of context, let me give you my entire life's story first." Funny that the author should mention context like that to justify her story to us, seeing as how she keeps using all kinds of weird fantasy words without giving any context for their meaning in this book. I don't remember that being a thing in the first book. And, uh, I’m not really all that in to horses. All the horse talk, the horse terms, the everything in life being compared to horses, yeah, that’s really starting to grate on me. Just one more thing that I absolutely do not care about in this book.
Also, one more thing. This book has a serious social justice chip on its shoulder. First, let me say that I usually do not have a problem with social justice at all. IF. And this is a BIG if. If it is done well, well written, and fits the story and setting. This one fails on all of those counts. What I DON'T like is being bludgeoned in the face with it.
Here’s one example: This is something that actually happens in this book. Kihrin and Janel are having a conversation about something completely different, and Janel just out of nowhere starts explaining what transgender means to him. Completely unprovoked, she steps completely away from the story, and starts lecturing the readers about what it means to be transgender. Using, of all the stupid things in this world, horse analogies. Just, why? It’s SOOOOO jarring to have her just, all of a sudden, ignore the conversation that she’s in and go off on this tangential rant that really has nothing to do with what’s going on, or what’s being discussed. The moment you start lecturing your readers is the moment you have stopped telling a story.
Let me reiterate that I have only read about 20% of this book, and this is only ONE instance of MANY in only 20% of the book. This was a HUGE problem with the latest season of Doctor Who. Every. Single. Episode. Had at least one of the characters step out of the story to lecture the audience on the moral of the story. Or The Last Jedi and the Rose's terribly written lecture on slavery, and DJ’s lecture on the fact that the “good guys” are relative. I mean, the Canto Bight side story was already playing havoc with the pacing of the rest of the movie, and that lecture brought even the Canto Bight section to a screeching halt.
I don't mind progressive messages in stories. WHEN. THEY. ARE. DONE. WELL. They have to be competently delivered, and this one is NOT. When a character completely divorces herself from the story to lecture me on the author's opinions, it has stopped being a story. Any character that steps out of a story to lecture me is a character that I instantly dislike. There are better ways to incorporate your social justice message than to have the characters drop everything they're doing and lecture the readers on it. Most writers these days do not seem to understand that you can incorporate your message without just flat out divorcing yourself from everything happening in the story to lecture the readers.
There is such a thing as subtlety. You can weave your ideas into the story without bringing it to a screeching halt, and bashing your readers in the face with it. Go read Gideon the Ninth by Tamsyn Muir (please go read it, it was really really good). That is a book that has an overt social justice message that is woven very well into the story and never bashes you in the face. It’s the most entertaining book I’ve read in years. This one is, by comparison, is just so inept. It makes the author look like a flippin' amateur. The REALLY annoying thing, is that I know for a fact that this author CAN be subtle with her social justice messages, and make them just as impactful, because she did it in the first book with homosexuality and slavery. God, this book is so frustrating!
AGAIN. IT IS NOT THAT I HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THE CHARACTER BEING TRANSGENDER. IT IS WITH THE COMPLETELY INEPT AND INCOMPETENT WAY THAT THE AUTHOR PORTRAYS THIS CHARACTER, AND CROWBARS HER HEAVY-HANDED PSA ABOUT IT INTO THE STORY AT MORE THAN ONE POINT IN THE PORTION OF THE BOOK THAT I READ. (this paragraph exists because dumb assholes take everything I say out of context and start hate campaigns against me because of it.)
I don't know. This book is extremely hard for me to enjoy. I've been toying with the idea of just putting it down and forgetting about this series. The beginning of this book is THAT BAD. Just. What the hell was she thinking? Let's take everything good about the story and toss it out for this mediocre, boring mess? It's so frustrating, because I really, really loved the first book, and the characters in it. Talon, especially. And instead of continuing the story, we get this. Uhg! The author VASTLY overestimated how much I care about the mystery behind this character that briefly showed up in the first book. I don’t. I don’t need to find out about her life. Especially when the character is not, in any way, compelling, she has no motivation within the story, and the story itself has nothing driving it forward.
After slogging through to almost halfway, I give up. This book is not for me. Mostly just all of the problems I stated above continuing on and showing no signs of getting better. I just thoroughly dislike Janel. She literally has not one single likable or sympathetic aspect to her character, and her constant preaching is really starting to get annoying. I’m not mad at this book. It’s not so far up its own ass that it can see daylight from the other end like a certain other second book in a popular fantasy trilogy that shall remain nameless. I’m just really, really disappointed. I’m disappointed that the author decided not to continue the story I was enjoying, with the characters that I knew and loved. I’m disappointed that this story didn’t have even half of the life and color of the first book. If it had been, in any way, a good story about a good character, I would have been annoyed, but I’d have read it, and probably liked it. But it feels so soulless compared to the first book. I’m disappointed that this mysterious character that was briefly introduced near the end of the first book turned out to be so boring and unlikable. I’m disappointed that the publisher’s summary flat out lies about what this book is about. It’s almost like they knew this book wouldn’t sell if we knew it was not a direct continuation of the first book or something... oh, right... fuck them. And just, for the love of god, can you stop talking about horses for two goddamn sentences? Please?
With all that said, I think I’m just walking away from this series. It just feels like the author does not respect me as her reader, and there are plenty of other authors out there that do. I’m trading this one back to audible for another book that I will hopefully enjoy more than I did this one. I don’t want the author to keep my money. She didn’t earn it. This book breaks the promise made by the first book in the series.