Oh, I hate to give this book a negative review because it's obvious the author put a lot of heart into these poems. However, the writing style just seemed overly simplistic to me. The rhymes are expected and there are a lot of commas where there shouldn't be commas. (I did receive an ARC, so this may be changed in the final edition, but that doesn't change the rhymes.)
Here's an example of a poem so you can see what I mean. These verses are pulled from "Toxic."
Whispering in my ear
A woman, whom I fear
Ear and fear are quite simple rhymes, and you don't need the comma between woman and whom. Later in the poem:
A kiss of poison sweets
Piercing, my hearts sheath
"Hearts" needs an apostrophe, and you don't need the comma after "piercing." Plus, this couplet doesn't have any significant meaning in relation to the rest of the poem, in my opinion. Here's one more example from the poem "Friendship."
There was a little boy,
Staring quietly, without coy.
Upon, seeing his friend,
His eyes light up, end to end.
I read this a couple times because I was waiting for it to make sense. But I can't figure out what it's trying to say. Honestly, this collection just isn't my cup of tea. The rhymes come across as trite and unnecessary, leaving me unable to connect with the content. I hate to leave a negative review, I really do. I'm sure there are readers out there who will love this collection, so my recommendation is to read some of the poems and see for yourself.
*Thank you to NetGalley for providing me with a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for a review.*