This fanfic was so amazing and enjoyable! The author completely nailed the characterizations and it felt just like watching the show. David and Patrick's relationship was captivating and adorable to read and just gave me all of the warm fuzzies.
My one "complaint" (which is more just an observation) is that it could use a light Canuckpicking; there's a few references to stores that we don't have here in Canada (we don't have Target (Target Canada crashed and burned within two years), we have Winners, not Kohl's, Wetzel's Pretzels isn't really a thing here (well, with the exception of 4 in Edmonton apparently, which was news to me), etc.) These stood out to me because I am Canadian, but they didn't really detract from my enjoyment. This really is a fantastic fanfic!