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Taking Another Chance: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet have suffered profound heartache in the fourteen years since parting in Lambton when word of Lydia's folly reached her family. At the age of forty, Darcy is now a widower raising a teenage daughter, whilst Elizabeth, a spinster, has spent the intervening years in service. Unexpectedly thrown into each other's company by circumstances not of their making, has time stood still when it comes to matters of the heart? Can their timeless love survive the newest obstacles to their happiness?
290 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 11, 2019
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Brenda J. Webb
11 books105 followersWelcome to my author page; let me tell you a little about myself.
First, I have never followed soap operas, I hardly have time to watch television at all. Thus, if any of my characters match names of soap opera characters, I assure you it is a coincidence. I come up with the names all by myself. Now that that is addressed, I shall move on. "big smile"
I worked for years in the accounting world until I traded my career for life on a small farm. A voracious reader and romance movie aficionada, one day I happened to notice that one of my favorite Jane Austen books had been made into a movie. It was the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice and I went to the theatre to see it instead of waiting, as usual, for the DVD or online video release. Nothing can compare to seeing this production on the big screen. It captured my imagination and made me want more of these beloved characters or others like them. I began buying all of Jane Austen's novels on Amazon.com and discovered the Jane Austen Fan Fiction genre.
I read everything I could find and then decided to write a story of my own, which was posted on a fan fiction site. A nice response from my readers convinced me to publish the story. I began a forum, DarcyandLizzy.Com, where I post my stories before they are published. It features many other writers as well.
First, I have never followed soap operas, I hardly have time to watch television at all. Thus, if any of my characters match names of soap opera characters, I assure you it is a coincidence. I come up with the names all by myself. Now that that is addressed, I shall move on. "big smile"
I worked for years in the accounting world until I traded my career for life on a small farm. A voracious reader and romance movie aficionada, one day I happened to notice that one of my favorite Jane Austen books had been made into a movie. It was the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice and I went to the theatre to see it instead of waiting, as usual, for the DVD or online video release. Nothing can compare to seeing this production on the big screen. It captured my imagination and made me want more of these beloved characters or others like them. I began buying all of Jane Austen's novels on Amazon.com and discovered the Jane Austen Fan Fiction genre.
I read everything I could find and then decided to write a story of my own, which was posted on a fan fiction site. A nice response from my readers convinced me to publish the story. I began a forum, DarcyandLizzy.Com, where I post my stories before they are published. It features many other writers as well.
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October 5, 2019
This is a book which I had a problem putting down last night. I have enjoyed all of this author's stories and highly recommend that you read this and the others. This is another version in which Elizabeth becomes a governess, although not for Darcy's child.
Fourteen years later, as the author's blurb tells us, Darcy has a teenage (step) daughter. His wife died in childbirth along with the child she bore. (And that is a story in itself.) Elizabeth refuses to be a burden to any of her sisters when their parents die and all of them have their own lives. She was, first, a companion and now a governess. Ironically the Colonel, who is now Lord Matlock, becomes her employer when his mother-in-law tries her hand at hiring a governess who will have more success than the three previous governesses for his daughters. Elizabeth puts a condition on that hiring...if any of his family is or becomes uncomfortable with her in this position she will immediately vacate such.
Elizabeth and Darcy repeat the pattern of not completely communicating their feelings or putting off that conversation only to then have others take matters into their hands and create further separations and misunderstandings for ODC. Richard becomes cupid in this story and it is not an easy job. One person, in particular, (a new character) is successful in putting up a block to the relationship. Her success sends Elizabeth away.
Elizabeth's beliefs as to why she never heard from nor saw Darcy after receiving Jane's letter in Lambton are deeply distressing. She is sure that the shame of Lydia's choice of with whom to elope has quashed any possibility of Darcy wanting to remain in contact much less "in love" with the fallen woman's family. While on the other hand, Darcy's reason for his disappearance is another anxious part for the reader and it not only affected that relationship with Elizabeth 14 years ago but also then comes to seem to Darcy as part of why she looks on him as a man she would not wish to be attached to...physically or emotionally.
I highly recommend this story. There is a bedroom scene near the end but for me it was a natural flow to the story.
As I recently received a paperback copy of this book I had to reread it. I only give 5 stars to books I want to reread at sometime.
Fourteen years later, as the author's blurb tells us, Darcy has a teenage (step) daughter. His wife died in childbirth along with the child she bore. (And that is a story in itself.) Elizabeth refuses to be a burden to any of her sisters when their parents die and all of them have their own lives. She was, first, a companion and now a governess. Ironically the Colonel, who is now Lord Matlock, becomes her employer when his mother-in-law tries her hand at hiring a governess who will have more success than the three previous governesses for his daughters. Elizabeth puts a condition on that hiring...if any of his family is or becomes uncomfortable with her in this position she will immediately vacate such.
Elizabeth and Darcy repeat the pattern of not completely communicating their feelings or putting off that conversation only to then have others take matters into their hands and create further separations and misunderstandings for ODC. Richard becomes cupid in this story and it is not an easy job. One person, in particular, (a new character) is successful in putting up a block to the relationship. Her success sends Elizabeth away.
Elizabeth's beliefs as to why she never heard from nor saw Darcy after receiving Jane's letter in Lambton are deeply distressing. She is sure that the shame of Lydia's choice of with whom to elope has quashed any possibility of Darcy wanting to remain in contact much less "in love" with the fallen woman's family. While on the other hand, Darcy's reason for his disappearance is another anxious part for the reader and it not only affected that relationship with Elizabeth 14 years ago but also then comes to seem to Darcy as part of why she looks on him as a man she would not wish to be attached to...physically or emotionally.
I highly recommend this story. There is a bedroom scene near the end but for me it was a natural flow to the story.
As I recently received a paperback copy of this book I had to reread it. I only give 5 stars to books I want to reread at sometime.
July 6, 2019
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
I enjoyed much of this book, which has a fresh take on the trope of Elizabeth being a governess and encountering Darcy years after their parting upon her receipt of Jane's letter about Lydia. In this case, it's MANY years after--fourteen, to be exact.
Darcy had not reached Wickham and Lydia. The youngest Bennet sister headed off to the Americas, but the others have managed to make respectable matches despite her folly--all except Elizabeth, who still refuses to marry without love. The man she loves, Fitzwilliam Darcy, is out of her reach since Lydia's disgrace. In fact, he'd married another.
But Darcy now is a widower with a teenage stepdaughter, Marianne. Marianne's best friend is her cousin, Lady Marjorie (whose father, Lord Matlock, is the former Colonel Fitzwilliam). Elizabeth becomes the governess to Marjorie and her younger siblings, and Marianne comes for a visit along with her papa, Darcy.
The story proceeds from there with obstacles and misunderstandings between Miss Bennet and Mr. Darcy. A jealous rival, Lady Matlock's sister Amy, plays a major role in creating them. Eventually, these are fully resolved with a big assist by Lord Matlock. This is about 3/4ths of the way through the book.
I found the characterizations for the secondary characters to be excellent, especially the children. Marianne, Marjorie, Ellen, Evelyn, and Emily all are completely believable for their ages. Lady Gordon (Lord Matlock's mother-in-law) is a solid, no-nonsense type, though it's hard to understand how the irredeemable Amy is her daughter. Lord Matlock is exactly as we would hope Colonel Fitzwilliam to be in the future: still amiable, still devoted to his cousin, and, thankfully, happily married to Isabelle (Lady Matlock). Lady Gwendolyn Tolbert is a young lady quite interested in Darcy who manages to be entertaining without becoming a stereotype.
However, I found myself annoyed with Elizabeth and Darcy, who get in their own way here in unconvincing fashion.
Additionally, the book goes on long past the turning point, climax and resolution. And on. And on. And when the final chapter ends, there's an epilogue. The last quarter of the book is nothing more than an overly-long HEA. For those who love all the engagement, wedding, and honeymoon details, everyone's reactions to the match, etc., etc., you'll certainly get your fill here.
There is one MA bedroom scene after Elizabeth and Darcy have married.
Overall, it's a great premise that's developed well in the early chapters, but it lost its charm for me at about halfway through.
I enjoyed much of this book, which has a fresh take on the trope of Elizabeth being a governess and encountering Darcy years after their parting upon her receipt of Jane's letter about Lydia. In this case, it's MANY years after--fourteen, to be exact.
Darcy had not reached Wickham and Lydia. The youngest Bennet sister headed off to the Americas, but the others have managed to make respectable matches despite her folly--all except Elizabeth, who still refuses to marry without love. The man she loves, Fitzwilliam Darcy, is out of her reach since Lydia's disgrace. In fact, he'd married another.
But Darcy now is a widower with a teenage stepdaughter, Marianne. Marianne's best friend is her cousin, Lady Marjorie (whose father, Lord Matlock, is the former Colonel Fitzwilliam). Elizabeth becomes the governess to Marjorie and her younger siblings, and Marianne comes for a visit along with her papa, Darcy.
The story proceeds from there with obstacles and misunderstandings between Miss Bennet and Mr. Darcy. A jealous rival, Lady Matlock's sister Amy, plays a major role in creating them. Eventually, these are fully resolved with a big assist by Lord Matlock. This is about 3/4ths of the way through the book.
I found the characterizations for the secondary characters to be excellent, especially the children. Marianne, Marjorie, Ellen, Evelyn, and Emily all are completely believable for their ages. Lady Gordon (Lord Matlock's mother-in-law) is a solid, no-nonsense type, though it's hard to understand how the irredeemable Amy is her daughter. Lord Matlock is exactly as we would hope Colonel Fitzwilliam to be in the future: still amiable, still devoted to his cousin, and, thankfully, happily married to Isabelle (Lady Matlock). Lady Gwendolyn Tolbert is a young lady quite interested in Darcy who manages to be entertaining without becoming a stereotype.
However, I found myself annoyed with Elizabeth and Darcy, who get in their own way here in unconvincing fashion.
Additionally, the book goes on long past the turning point, climax and resolution. And on. And on. And when the final chapter ends, there's an epilogue. The last quarter of the book is nothing more than an overly-long HEA. For those who love all the engagement, wedding, and honeymoon details, everyone's reactions to the match, etc., etc., you'll certainly get your fill here.
There is one MA bedroom scene after Elizabeth and Darcy have married.
Overall, it's a great premise that's developed well in the early chapters, but it lost its charm for me at about halfway through.
March 23, 2023
Wonderful story
A great story, hard to put down. I love the author’s body of work and this a grand addition.
14 years after Lydia’s elopement and neither Darcy or Lizzy have forgotten the other.
What have their lives been like? How will they meet? Will either of them be available? So many new characters most who are well thought out and presented. It will be a shame if we never read of them again.
I recommend the book highly. My notes for the book are spoilers so don’t read them until you read the book. I wanted to share my experience reading a story by an author who never lets us down, with my JAFF friends.
A great story, hard to put down. I love the author’s body of work and this a grand addition.
14 years after Lydia’s elopement and neither Darcy or Lizzy have forgotten the other.
What have their lives been like? How will they meet? Will either of them be available? So many new characters most who are well thought out and presented. It will be a shame if we never read of them again.
I recommend the book highly. My notes for the book are spoilers so don’t read them until you read the book. I wanted to share my experience reading a story by an author who never lets us down, with my JAFF friends.
July 12, 2019
“In case you never get a second chance: don’t be afraid!” “And what if you do get a second chance?” “You take it!” –C. JoyBell C.
It would be helpful if the reader had background knowledge of Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. I think our author explained the relationships of our canon characters to the extent you could possibly read this as a stand-alone.
Fourteen years have passed since Elizabeth first received Jane’s letter about Lydia’s shameful actions. Not long after not finding Lydia, both Bennet parents died and over the years the remaining Bennet sisters were happily married and were raising families. Darcy and Elizabeth attempted to live their separate lives despite their disappointment in their fates. Elizabeth had gone into service as a governess and Darcy, who had married a widow with a young child, was now a widower and was raising a daughter that was not his. We had our Caroline Bingley clone who thought she should be the next mistress of Pemberley and she played her part well. Where Caroline was merely a tradesman’s daughter, Lady Amy had the wealth, clout, and prestige that Caroline could only dream of. She was a determined b-witch and used every means at her disposal to worm her way into Darcy’s path, including using his daughter against him.
“It is perhaps, plausible that a man in this situation, impressed with the unconcern of the universe, should see the innumerable flaws of his life and have them taste wickedly in his mind and wish for another chance.” –Stephen Crane, The Open Boat
I knew this was going to be a long haul and I was not wrong. There were ups and downs, interference from others and I just had to hold on and ride out the angst of disappointed hopes and grief from separations with ODC [our dear couple]. Within Regency romance stories, Darcy and Elizabeth have to be the most stubborn of all the lovers portrayed. Five minutes, five freaking minutes together with honest conversation and everything could be settled. They just couldn’t get a break and face their fears long enough to face each other.
Ever the flight risk, Elizabeth ran at the first hint of Darcy’s renewed affection when she completely misunderstood his intentions. Forever guarding his heart against the hurt and pain of rejection, Darcy ran at the first hint of disappointment without finding out what happened to cause the disappointment and the why of it. They were each so sure of what the other was thinking and feeling, that they ignored what was obvious to everyone around them. They each viewed the other and their situation through lenses skewed in different directions. Both were fueled by guilt, self-recrimination, and overshadowed by an unhealthy dose of shame. I wanted to scream. I did not want to put it down but forced myself to finally go to bed. I am too old to pull an all-nighter. Besides, my battery was running low… um… on my device, not me.
The story began to drag a bit in a few places. I suppose it was my anxious desire to see ODC finally reach their happiness. There was ONE scene [the wedding night] that placed the rating on this story in the MA: Mature Audience category. It felt completely unnecessary to the overall story. It was just there and could have easily been left out with no changes to the story. It can be skipped over easy enough without any problem.
7-1-19 I won a copy of this book from a random drawing during the blog tour at Ceri’s Babblings of a Bookworm website. The views expressed are my own. I highly recommend this story if you enjoy a feel-good HEA.
It would be helpful if the reader had background knowledge of Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. I think our author explained the relationships of our canon characters to the extent you could possibly read this as a stand-alone.
Fourteen years have passed since Elizabeth first received Jane’s letter about Lydia’s shameful actions. Not long after not finding Lydia, both Bennet parents died and over the years the remaining Bennet sisters were happily married and were raising families. Darcy and Elizabeth attempted to live their separate lives despite their disappointment in their fates. Elizabeth had gone into service as a governess and Darcy, who had married a widow with a young child, was now a widower and was raising a daughter that was not his. We had our Caroline Bingley clone who thought she should be the next mistress of Pemberley and she played her part well. Where Caroline was merely a tradesman’s daughter, Lady Amy had the wealth, clout, and prestige that Caroline could only dream of. She was a determined b-witch and used every means at her disposal to worm her way into Darcy’s path, including using his daughter against him.
“It is perhaps, plausible that a man in this situation, impressed with the unconcern of the universe, should see the innumerable flaws of his life and have them taste wickedly in his mind and wish for another chance.” –Stephen Crane, The Open Boat
I knew this was going to be a long haul and I was not wrong. There were ups and downs, interference from others and I just had to hold on and ride out the angst of disappointed hopes and grief from separations with ODC [our dear couple]. Within Regency romance stories, Darcy and Elizabeth have to be the most stubborn of all the lovers portrayed. Five minutes, five freaking minutes together with honest conversation and everything could be settled. They just couldn’t get a break and face their fears long enough to face each other.
Ever the flight risk, Elizabeth ran at the first hint of Darcy’s renewed affection when she completely misunderstood his intentions. Forever guarding his heart against the hurt and pain of rejection, Darcy ran at the first hint of disappointment without finding out what happened to cause the disappointment and the why of it. They were each so sure of what the other was thinking and feeling, that they ignored what was obvious to everyone around them. They each viewed the other and their situation through lenses skewed in different directions. Both were fueled by guilt, self-recrimination, and overshadowed by an unhealthy dose of shame. I wanted to scream. I did not want to put it down but forced myself to finally go to bed. I am too old to pull an all-nighter. Besides, my battery was running low… um… on my device, not me.
The story began to drag a bit in a few places. I suppose it was my anxious desire to see ODC finally reach their happiness. There was ONE scene [the wedding night] that placed the rating on this story in the MA: Mature Audience category. It felt completely unnecessary to the overall story. It was just there and could have easily been left out with no changes to the story. It can be skipped over easy enough without any problem.
7-1-19 I won a copy of this book from a random drawing during the blog tour at Ceri’s Babblings of a Bookworm website. The views expressed are my own. I highly recommend this story if you enjoy a feel-good HEA.
April 22, 2026
Good things come to those who wait!
It is said that ‘good things come to those who wait’—even if it’s not their choice! Fourteen years of lost love is the result that follows an effort on Darcy’s part to help Elizabeth’s family. An accident and injury, along with preconceived notions on the part of our dear couple keeps them separated for so long. Just as they encounter one another again and agree to be together, others will plot to keep them apart. Sighhh. Thank goodness for the new Earl of Matlock! An excellent story—well written and filled with good dialogue, and accented by a touch of angst will grab your attention from start to finish.
Mature content.
Highly recommend.
May 4, 2023 - Audiobook
‘Good things come to those who wait’, as does ‘wishes really do come true’, applies to the audio version of this book too. Readers of this wonderful author, Brenda J. Webb, have been hoping for an audiobook from her for some time, and her choice of Stevie Zimmerman is an excellent one. I hope this is the first of many. This audiobook is definitely worth a credit and your time. I highly recommend it.
It is said that ‘good things come to those who wait’—even if it’s not their choice! Fourteen years of lost love is the result that follows an effort on Darcy’s part to help Elizabeth’s family. An accident and injury, along with preconceived notions on the part of our dear couple keeps them separated for so long. Just as they encounter one another again and agree to be together, others will plot to keep them apart. Sighhh. Thank goodness for the new Earl of Matlock! An excellent story—well written and filled with good dialogue, and accented by a touch of angst will grab your attention from start to finish.
Mature content.
Highly recommend.
May 4, 2023 - Audiobook
‘Good things come to those who wait’, as does ‘wishes really do come true’, applies to the audio version of this book too. Readers of this wonderful author, Brenda J. Webb, have been hoping for an audiobook from her for some time, and her choice of Stevie Zimmerman is an excellent one. I hope this is the first of many. This audiobook is definitely worth a credit and your time. I highly recommend it.
July 13, 2019
The same passions in man and woman nonetheless differ in tempo; hence man and woman do not cease misunderstanding one another. ~ Friedrich Nietzsche
Sometimes, when I read P&P variations, I just want to hit Our Dear Couple upside the head and make them stop their conclusion-jumping and TALK to each other.
This is another story with conclusion-jumping in abundance.
Fourteen years after the Disastrous Hunsford Proposal, Darcy and Elizabeth meet again. He was married, widowed, and left to raise his wife’s daughter from her first marriage. Elizabeth has never married and works as a governess. Fears and misunderstandings seem insurmountable.
Fortunately for them, someone plays the role of hero and hits them upside the head.
The story is well-written and proofread. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
It is impossible to speak in such a way that you cannot be misunderstood. ~ Karl Popper
Sometimes, when I read P&P variations, I just want to hit Our Dear Couple upside the head and make them stop their conclusion-jumping and TALK to each other.
This is another story with conclusion-jumping in abundance.
Fourteen years after the Disastrous Hunsford Proposal, Darcy and Elizabeth meet again. He was married, widowed, and left to raise his wife’s daughter from her first marriage. Elizabeth has never married and works as a governess. Fears and misunderstandings seem insurmountable.
Fortunately for them, someone plays the role of hero and hits them upside the head.
The story is well-written and proofread. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
It is impossible to speak in such a way that you cannot be misunderstood. ~ Karl Popper
June 15, 2019
Angst on steroids.
I have to admit the angst here was a bit much for me. I generally enjoy a book with a healthy dose of obstacles to overcome, but the treachery of a few individuals was so heartbreaking... it felt a bit over the top. It’s a fine line, and others may not feel that way at all. I didn’t love this very broken-to-the-point-of-martyrdom Elizabeth and I ended up getting very frustrated with her - to the point where I became rather ambivalent about whether or when the HEA would be secured. By then I was just skimming the book. I do recommend the book, but if angst and frustration aren’t your thing, you aren’t going to make it through this one.
I have to admit the angst here was a bit much for me. I generally enjoy a book with a healthy dose of obstacles to overcome, but the treachery of a few individuals was so heartbreaking... it felt a bit over the top. It’s a fine line, and others may not feel that way at all. I didn’t love this very broken-to-the-point-of-martyrdom Elizabeth and I ended up getting very frustrated with her - to the point where I became rather ambivalent about whether or when the HEA would be secured. By then I was just skimming the book. I do recommend the book, but if angst and frustration aren’t your thing, you aren’t going to make it through this one.
June 13, 2019
Another lovely Brenda Webb story
This book takes place 14 years after the original. It is a tale of lost love being reclaimed. It left me with a smile on my face after I finished reading it, which I think indicates a good happy read.
This book takes place 14 years after the original. It is a tale of lost love being reclaimed. It left me with a smile on my face after I finished reading it, which I think indicates a good happy read.
October 9, 2019
I was excited to read this story because I enjoy books about Darcy & Elizabeth second chances as older, wiser persons. In this book Darcy is forty and the parent of a 16 year old step child. Lizzy is 34 and a companion / governess.
The book turns everything on it's ear, because Lydia is never recovered. Bingley didn't marry Jane and obviously Darcy did marry.
Now since it is a Brenda Webb book you can be sure that there is going to be loads of angst and misunderstandings and lots of trips around the county. I swear this author writes with an atlas by her side... when all else fails pack everyone into a carriage and see where they end up.
There's a theme / trope in P&P variations that I am exhausted by and that is "Depressive Darcy / martyr Darcy". Maybe I am an a cynic, okay okay definitely I am a cynic, but while I can stomach a mopey dopey Darcy for a few weeks or a few months but not 14 years!! Are You Serious?? Unless you are a saint you can't keep blaming yourself over things for 14 years because eventually your brain will rebel and point out that maybe, just maybe, Lizzy could have written your sister, or your sister could have written Lizzy. Or your rector could have written to Lizzy's rector or you could have written the Gardiners. Oh FFS you could have written Mrs. Collins or stopped by during your annual Rosings visit.
And does a 40 year old man, who has been in the world, still think like an introverted 27 year old?
And then there was a Amos begat Uriel type epilogue.
Additionally I cannot classify this as clean or chaste there is a mildly graphic love scene between OD Married C.
The book turns everything on it's ear, because Lydia is never recovered. Bingley didn't marry Jane and obviously Darcy did marry.
Now since it is a Brenda Webb book you can be sure that there is going to be loads of angst and misunderstandings and lots of trips around the county. I swear this author writes with an atlas by her side... when all else fails pack everyone into a carriage and see where they end up.
There's a theme / trope in P&P variations that I am exhausted by and that is "Depressive Darcy / martyr Darcy". Maybe I am an a cynic, okay okay definitely I am a cynic, but while I can stomach a mopey dopey Darcy for a few weeks or a few months but not 14 years!! Are You Serious?? Unless you are a saint you can't keep blaming yourself over things for 14 years because eventually your brain will rebel and point out that maybe, just maybe, Lizzy could have written your sister, or your sister could have written Lizzy. Or your rector could have written to Lizzy's rector or you could have written the Gardiners. Oh FFS you could have written Mrs. Collins or stopped by during your annual Rosings visit.
And does a 40 year old man, who has been in the world, still think like an introverted 27 year old?
And then there was a Amos begat Uriel type epilogue.
Additionally I cannot classify this as clean or chaste there is a mildly graphic love scene between OD Married C.
August 2, 2019
This book grabbed my attention and held it in an iron grip, despite my lack of enthusiasm for the plot. Webb's excellent storytelling skills, drew me in from page one.
Fourteen years had passed since Elizabeth visited Pemberley. M/M Bennet had passed and while her sisters had married, Elizabeth had chosen to go into service.
Time and distance had not diminished their love but their communication skills had unfortunately not improved either.
Their emotions proved to pronounced to conceal which created jealousy and a cunning plan was set into action to drive them apart.
It went one circumvention too far for my taste.
The angsty first three quarters was amply rewarded with a lovely and satisfying happy ending.
Heartily recommend this book!
Fourteen years had passed since Elizabeth visited Pemberley. M/M Bennet had passed and while her sisters had married, Elizabeth had chosen to go into service.
Time and distance had not diminished their love but their communication skills had unfortunately not improved either.
Their emotions proved to pronounced to conceal which created jealousy and a cunning plan was set into action to drive them apart.
It went one circumvention too far for my taste.
The angsty first three quarters was amply rewarded with a lovely and satisfying happy ending.
Heartily recommend this book!
June 19, 2019
Wonderful Must Read Story
Loved it! From the angst, love, drama, even the new characters, this was a fantastic book, I am not giving spoilers so people can just go read the book!
Loved it! From the angst, love, drama, even the new characters, this was a fantastic book, I am not giving spoilers so people can just go read the book!
June 15, 2019
What a wonderful novel!!!! It kept me glued to the novel and I didn't want to put it down. It is well written about the love story of Darcy and Lizzy and goes back to their past and brings them together again after fourteen years.
I always love when Colonel Richard, now Lord Matlock, is involved in Darcy's life. The author did a great job of including him as the mediator between Darcy and Lizzy bringing them back together again.
I always enjoy when children are involved in the plot because they bring the story to life and how important they are to this family on both sides. I especially loved Ellen and Darcy's relationship and the humor involved between the two cousins, one child, one grown-up.
The plot was interesting and full of depth with each character.
I also loved the fact that it was an older version of the couple rather than a younger couple.
I also enjoyed the description of of the family's offspring near the end of the novel of their marriages and grandchildren.
Thank you Brenda Webb for a wonderful and delightful novel that I thoroughly enjoyed and will read again and again!!!!!!
I always love when Colonel Richard, now Lord Matlock, is involved in Darcy's life. The author did a great job of including him as the mediator between Darcy and Lizzy bringing them back together again.
I always enjoy when children are involved in the plot because they bring the story to life and how important they are to this family on both sides. I especially loved Ellen and Darcy's relationship and the humor involved between the two cousins, one child, one grown-up.
The plot was interesting and full of depth with each character.
I also loved the fact that it was an older version of the couple rather than a younger couple.
I also enjoyed the description of of the family's offspring near the end of the novel of their marriages and grandchildren.
Thank you Brenda Webb for a wonderful and delightful novel that I thoroughly enjoyed and will read again and again!!!!!!
June 23, 2019
Awesome story
Loved loved loved this story! Could not put it down! In my opinion it’s a 5+ story!
Definitely worth reading!
Loved loved loved this story! Could not put it down! In my opinion it’s a 5+ story!
Definitely worth reading!
October 5, 2019
This is a book which I had a problem putting down last night. I have enjoyed all of this author's stories and highly recommend that you read this and the others. This is another version in which Elizabeth becomes a governess, although not for Darcy's child.
Fourteen years later, as the author's blurb tells us, Darcy has a teenage (step) daughter. His wife died in childbirth along with the child she bore. (And that is a story in itself.) Elizabeth refuses to be a burden to any of her sisters when their parents die and all of them have their own lives. She was, first, a companion and now a governess. Ironically the Colonel, who is now Lord Matlock, becomes her employer when his mother-in-law tries her hand at hiring a governess who will have more success than the three previous governesses for his daughters. Elizabeth puts a condition on that hiring...if any of his family is or becomes uncomfortable with her in this position she will immediately vacate such.
Elizabeth and Darcy repeat the pattern of not completely communicating their feelings or putting off that conversation only to then have others take matters into their hands and create further separations and misunderstandings for ODC. Richard becomes cupid in this story and it is not an easy job. One person, in particular, (a new character) is successful in putting up a block to the relationship. Her success sends Elizabeth away.
Elizabeth's beliefs as to why she never heard from nor saw Darcy after receiving Jane's letter in Lambton are deeply distressing. She is sure that the shame of Lydia's choice of with whom to elope has quashed any possibility of Darcy wanting to remain in contact much less "in love" with the fallen woman's family. While on the other hand, Darcy's reason for his disappearance is another anxious part for the reader and it not only affected that relationship with Elizabeth 14 years ago but also then comes to seem to Darcy as part of why she looks on him as a man she would not wish to be attached to...physically or emotionally.
I highly recommend this story. There is a bedroom scene near the end but for me it was a natural flow to the story.
As I recently received a paperback copy of this book I had to reread it. I only give 5 stars to books I want to reread at sometime.
Fourteen years later, as the author's blurb tells us, Darcy has a teenage (step) daughter. His wife died in childbirth along with the child she bore. (And that is a story in itself.) Elizabeth refuses to be a burden to any of her sisters when their parents die and all of them have their own lives. She was, first, a companion and now a governess. Ironically the Colonel, who is now Lord Matlock, becomes her employer when his mother-in-law tries her hand at hiring a governess who will have more success than the three previous governesses for his daughters. Elizabeth puts a condition on that hiring...if any of his family is or becomes uncomfortable with her in this position she will immediately vacate such.
Elizabeth and Darcy repeat the pattern of not completely communicating their feelings or putting off that conversation only to then have others take matters into their hands and create further separations and misunderstandings for ODC. Richard becomes cupid in this story and it is not an easy job. One person, in particular, (a new character) is successful in putting up a block to the relationship. Her success sends Elizabeth away.
Elizabeth's beliefs as to why she never heard from nor saw Darcy after receiving Jane's letter in Lambton are deeply distressing. She is sure that the shame of Lydia's choice of with whom to elope has quashed any possibility of Darcy wanting to remain in contact much less "in love" with the fallen woman's family. While on the other hand, Darcy's reason for his disappearance is another anxious part for the reader and it not only affected that relationship with Elizabeth 14 years ago but also then comes to seem to Darcy as part of why she looks on him as a man she would not wish to be attached to...physically or emotionally.
I highly recommend this story. There is a bedroom scene near the end but for me it was a natural flow to the story.
As I recently received a paperback copy of this book I had to reread it. I only give 5 stars to books I want to reread at sometime.
July 13, 2019
My Rating: 3.5* rounded up to 4*
"Right or wrong, the heart chooses whom it will love." (quote from the book)
I am always excited to read a Pride and Prejudice variation from Brenda J. Webb. There is always over-the-top drama and villains that do their darndest to come between Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. It certainly makes for entertaining reading.
However, in this variation, Time and Misunderstanding have been the biggest villains. It has been fourteen years since Elizabeth and Darcy last saw each other at Pemberley. It isn't until they meet again, when Elizabeth is hired as a governess for the new Lord Matlock's children, when they both must face their past before moving forward. Hope briefly flares, but of course, things do not work out as smoothly as they wished. Another adversary who wants Darcy starts her manipulations.
What I enjoyed most from this story were the children, especially Ellen, and their interactions with Elizabeth, Darcy and Lord Matlock. I found this a much lighter and less angst-filled, rendition from Ms. Webb's other novels. At times, I found some circumstances to be too contrived. However, I did enjoy the older Darcy and Elizabeth premise.
I was fortunate to win this book in a giveaway with no expectation for a review.
August 27, 2022
I enjoyed this book. It has a Jane Eyre feel about it but isn't gothic! Its been 14 years since Elizabeth and Darcy last saw each other. He had an accident while chasing Lydia and Wickham which meant he wasn't involved and didn't return to Elizabeth. She has been working as a governess when their paths cross again. There is still room for plenty of misunderstandings owing to a lack of communication and interference by others.
Although I enjoyed this book, Darcy and Elizabeth don't spend much time together and 14 years apart with no contact seems too long for the speed of the ending. Not my favourite by this author but still a good read!
Although I enjoyed this book, Darcy and Elizabeth don't spend much time together and 14 years apart with no contact seems too long for the speed of the ending. Not my favourite by this author but still a good read!
January 4, 2020
What If Elizabeth Became a Governess After Lydia’s Elopement?
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins fourteen years after Lydia fled Brighton with Wickham
SYNOPSIS:
In Brenda J. Webb’s latest Pride and Prejudice variation Mr. Darcy never returns to Meryton with Mr. Bingley after encountering Elizabeth in Pemberly. And soon after Lydia’s elopement, tragedy strikes the Bennet family, changing the lives of the Bennet daughters forever. Remaining constant to her heart, Elizabeth never marries, and has spent the last fourteen years serving as a governess. After accepting a new position that seems almost too-good-to-be-true, Elizabeth learns that the family she will be serving is one that is familiar to her…See what happens when Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy encounter each other for the first time after fourteen years with such greatly changed circumstances and so much left unsaid.
WHAT I LOVED:
- Another Unique and Poignant Premise: I love the lapse in time for this premise – of course it is gut-wrenching to think about our beloved couple being unhappy and not together for so long, but I love the uniqueness of seeing Darcy and Elizabeth re-encounter each other a lot later in life. Not many stories illustrate the romance between a 40 year-old Darcy and 32 year-old Elizabeth or the circumstances of Elizabeth being a governess this late in life and Darcy living on the only way he can.
- Love is Constant: I love how this story highlighted the strength and undiminished intensity of this couple’s love for each other. This story proves that both men and women can claim the privilege “of loving longest, when existence or when hope is gone.” It was inspiring to see how fervently devoted both were to each other – the portrait, the handkerchief, etc. And I loved the achingly beautiful scenes were they are finally together – talk about ardent embraces!
- A Collection of Original Characters: In this variation we see encounter several new characters including some different spouses to Jane Austen’s characters and their progeny. Everyone was well-drawn and interesting, and the children were adorable. I especially enjoyed seeing Darcy and Elizabeth interact with these children. In addition, there were some determined females chasing after Mr. Darcy, who both added some tension and drama to this tale.
- Richard Fitzwilliam: Oh I absolutely adored our boy Richard in this story. Seeing him has a husband, father, and emotional guardian for his cousin was just wonderful. I love all that he did to assist these obstinate lovers. He is a determined man of action that does more than charm the ladies and rib Darcy!
- Insecurities and Stubbornness: Unlike Ms. Webb’s other stories where there are devious villainous and external forces that prevent Darcy and Elizabeth from being together, this tale illustrates what happens when Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are burdened by their past, labor under false assumptions, and stubbornly allow their fears to dictate their actions. It was interesting to see Ms. Webb implement more internal conflicts with her writing. In most twists of this story I understand and could sympathize with Darcy and Elizabeth’s hesitations and fears.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Quick Developments: I enjoyed the plot progression for this tale, but I did feel like some things developed a little too quickly – such as everyone assuming things about Darcy and Elizabeth after one encounter or some characters’ rapid change of heart. Perhaps I am used to Ms. Webb’s other stories that have more leisurely paced plots.
NOTE: There is one scene best suited for Mature Audiences towards the end of this story.
CONCLUSION:
Taking Another Chance is an enthralling tale that carries some familiar themes from Jane Austen’s Persuasion – such as second chances and enduring love – and skillfully implements them between Darcy and Elizabeth. A well-balanced tale that combines poignant heartache, adorable interactions with children, despairing internal struggles, and all-consuming devotion.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins fourteen years after Lydia fled Brighton with Wickham
SYNOPSIS:
In Brenda J. Webb’s latest Pride and Prejudice variation Mr. Darcy never returns to Meryton with Mr. Bingley after encountering Elizabeth in Pemberly. And soon after Lydia’s elopement, tragedy strikes the Bennet family, changing the lives of the Bennet daughters forever. Remaining constant to her heart, Elizabeth never marries, and has spent the last fourteen years serving as a governess. After accepting a new position that seems almost too-good-to-be-true, Elizabeth learns that the family she will be serving is one that is familiar to her…See what happens when Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy encounter each other for the first time after fourteen years with such greatly changed circumstances and so much left unsaid.
WHAT I LOVED:
- Another Unique and Poignant Premise: I love the lapse in time for this premise – of course it is gut-wrenching to think about our beloved couple being unhappy and not together for so long, but I love the uniqueness of seeing Darcy and Elizabeth re-encounter each other a lot later in life. Not many stories illustrate the romance between a 40 year-old Darcy and 32 year-old Elizabeth or the circumstances of Elizabeth being a governess this late in life and Darcy living on the only way he can.
- Love is Constant: I love how this story highlighted the strength and undiminished intensity of this couple’s love for each other. This story proves that both men and women can claim the privilege “of loving longest, when existence or when hope is gone.” It was inspiring to see how fervently devoted both were to each other – the portrait, the handkerchief, etc. And I loved the achingly beautiful scenes were they are finally together – talk about ardent embraces!
- A Collection of Original Characters: In this variation we see encounter several new characters including some different spouses to Jane Austen’s characters and their progeny. Everyone was well-drawn and interesting, and the children were adorable. I especially enjoyed seeing Darcy and Elizabeth interact with these children. In addition, there were some determined females chasing after Mr. Darcy, who both added some tension and drama to this tale.
- Richard Fitzwilliam: Oh I absolutely adored our boy Richard in this story. Seeing him has a husband, father, and emotional guardian for his cousin was just wonderful. I love all that he did to assist these obstinate lovers. He is a determined man of action that does more than charm the ladies and rib Darcy!
- Insecurities and Stubbornness: Unlike Ms. Webb’s other stories where there are devious villainous and external forces that prevent Darcy and Elizabeth from being together, this tale illustrates what happens when Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are burdened by their past, labor under false assumptions, and stubbornly allow their fears to dictate their actions. It was interesting to see Ms. Webb implement more internal conflicts with her writing. In most twists of this story I understand and could sympathize with Darcy and Elizabeth’s hesitations and fears.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Quick Developments: I enjoyed the plot progression for this tale, but I did feel like some things developed a little too quickly – such as everyone assuming things about Darcy and Elizabeth after one encounter or some characters’ rapid change of heart. Perhaps I am used to Ms. Webb’s other stories that have more leisurely paced plots.
NOTE: There is one scene best suited for Mature Audiences towards the end of this story.
CONCLUSION:
Taking Another Chance is an enthralling tale that carries some familiar themes from Jane Austen’s Persuasion – such as second chances and enduring love – and skillfully implements them between Darcy and Elizabeth. A well-balanced tale that combines poignant heartache, adorable interactions with children, despairing internal struggles, and all-consuming devotion.
Austenesque Reviews
December 15, 2024
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In this Pride and Prejudice variation, the story takes a different turn when Darcy has a carriage accident while attempting to rescue Lydia. Unfortunately, this incident not only prevents him from saving her but also keeps him from visiting Longbourn. As a result, 14 years pass with Darcy and Elizabeth living separate lives, both silently longing for each other.
The narrative picks up 14 years later, with Elizabeth now working as a governess and Darcy, a widower from a loveless marriage, struggling to raise his teenage stepdaughter. Despite all the time that has passed, their love for each other never faded so when Darcy visits Lord Matlock (formerly Colonel Fitzwilliam) and sees Elizabeth working as a governess, the feelings they had for each other is rekindled.
But new challenges arise as a villain tries to keep them apart and Elizabeth feels unworthy of Darcy, while he believes she blames him for Lydia’s past mistakes.
I always love when the obstacle to Darcy and Elizabeth’s love is internal, and this book explored that perfectly. Even though there was a villain that contributed for their separation earlier in the story, it was their feelings and fears of unrequited love that kept them apart, and I absolutely love that because it makes their romance much more intense and engaging.
I love the fact that these characters are more mature, and this maturity shines through in their dialogues and reactions. Darcy, in particular, is even more charming and irresistible with the life experience he has gained, and I found myself wanting to comfort him throughout the story. He is swoon worthy! Even better than the original I would say 🙂
This is the first full-length book I’ve read by Brenda Webb, and I was truly impressed by her writing style and the intensity she is able to put in each scene, each word and each look the characters share. The plot and Webb’s writing had so much potential that I expected the romance to take up more space in the book, not having these characters together more times in the story was a missed opportunity in my opinion. Even so, it was an amazing read that left me craving for more.
There are plenty of chapters after Elizabeth and Darcy are married, so I believe readers will be satisfied with their page time in the end of the book, and even if I don’t usually care about what happens after they are married, I also enjoyed it because Webb’s writing is indeed compelling.
Summing up, Taking Another Change is a gripping novel which I felt compelled to read non-stop. The plot is incredible and creates the opportunity for a memorable love story that is enhanced by the authors writing style. I highly recommend it to those who like intense love stories between Darcy and Elziabeth and appreciate when they are mature and experienced people.
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In this Pride and Prejudice variation, the story takes a different turn when Darcy has a carriage accident while attempting to rescue Lydia. Unfortunately, this incident not only prevents him from saving her but also keeps him from visiting Longbourn. As a result, 14 years pass with Darcy and Elizabeth living separate lives, both silently longing for each other.
The narrative picks up 14 years later, with Elizabeth now working as a governess and Darcy, a widower from a loveless marriage, struggling to raise his teenage stepdaughter. Despite all the time that has passed, their love for each other never faded so when Darcy visits Lord Matlock (formerly Colonel Fitzwilliam) and sees Elizabeth working as a governess, the feelings they had for each other is rekindled.
But new challenges arise as a villain tries to keep them apart and Elizabeth feels unworthy of Darcy, while he believes she blames him for Lydia’s past mistakes.
I always love when the obstacle to Darcy and Elizabeth’s love is internal, and this book explored that perfectly. Even though there was a villain that contributed for their separation earlier in the story, it was their feelings and fears of unrequited love that kept them apart, and I absolutely love that because it makes their romance much more intense and engaging.
I love the fact that these characters are more mature, and this maturity shines through in their dialogues and reactions. Darcy, in particular, is even more charming and irresistible with the life experience he has gained, and I found myself wanting to comfort him throughout the story. He is swoon worthy! Even better than the original I would say 🙂
This is the first full-length book I’ve read by Brenda Webb, and I was truly impressed by her writing style and the intensity she is able to put in each scene, each word and each look the characters share. The plot and Webb’s writing had so much potential that I expected the romance to take up more space in the book, not having these characters together more times in the story was a missed opportunity in my opinion. Even so, it was an amazing read that left me craving for more.
There are plenty of chapters after Elizabeth and Darcy are married, so I believe readers will be satisfied with their page time in the end of the book, and even if I don’t usually care about what happens after they are married, I also enjoyed it because Webb’s writing is indeed compelling.
Summing up, Taking Another Change is a gripping novel which I felt compelled to read non-stop. The plot is incredible and creates the opportunity for a memorable love story that is enhanced by the authors writing style. I highly recommend it to those who like intense love stories between Darcy and Elziabeth and appreciate when they are mature and experienced people.
June 15, 2019
I loved it!!!
I loved it!!!.... I have read all Brenda Webb books, none have disappointed and this one is no exception. Darcy has an accident and doesn’t make it to “save” Lydia, and of course never makes it back to Elizabeth, fast forward 14 years and Darcy & Elizabeth’s paths cross again. Life has not been great for either and of course their path to happiness is not easy. I laughed (Ellen Fitzwilliam is priceless). I cried both happy and sad, Col Fitzwilliam (now Lord Matlock) is a hero for the couple. Enjoyed the whole way through!!
I loved it!!!.... I have read all Brenda Webb books, none have disappointed and this one is no exception. Darcy has an accident and doesn’t make it to “save” Lydia, and of course never makes it back to Elizabeth, fast forward 14 years and Darcy & Elizabeth’s paths cross again. Life has not been great for either and of course their path to happiness is not easy. I laughed (Ellen Fitzwilliam is priceless). I cried both happy and sad, Col Fitzwilliam (now Lord Matlock) is a hero for the couple. Enjoyed the whole way through!!
July 2, 2024
Excellent audio book. Great narration from Stevie Zimmerman.
August 9, 2020
Heavy action by Colonel Fitzwilliam which bumps this up to 5 stars for me.
Reread: I wish I knew what happened with Bingley!
Reread: I wish I knew what happened with Bingley!
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December 9, 2023Good plot but way too wordy. DNF
October 4, 2023
What if Darcy and Elizabeth had meet again ...
... much later in life?
Fourteen years after their last meeting in Lambton, Darcy and Elizabeth meet again by chance. Darcy, now a widower with a teenage daughter, never returned to Elizabeth because he was not able to find Lydia and Wickham due to a carriage accident and felt guilty.
Elizabeth's parents had died and her sisters are all married, she earns her living as governess. But she had never forget Darcy and regrets having refused Darcy's offer of marriage. When they now meet at the house of Darcy's cousin Richard (where Elizabeth is employed as governess) time is standing still. Is there still a chance for their love? Will they be able to overcome previous misunderstandings and find their happy ever after?
What I like most about this lovely audiobook? Definitely Richard ❤️. I was so glad for his interference in the matter and his concern for both Darcy and Elizabeth. I like his way of carrying for Darcy even when the latter does not want to be taken care of. He his like the brother Darcy never had.
While listening to the story I often felt wistful about the time lost for Darcy and Elizabeth. But I also felt hope that they will finally find a way to be together. The happy ever after is definitely deserved.
The story is narrated by Stevie Zimmerman. She is one of the narrators I like most and, as always, she narrates in her own, lovely way. I like the way she gives every person a particular voice and that I am thus able to recognize them all. With her narration she makes the feelings in the book even more palpable.
I highly recommend this audiobook, it was so lovely and left me feeling happy after listening to it.
I received a free copy from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
... much later in life?
Fourteen years after their last meeting in Lambton, Darcy and Elizabeth meet again by chance. Darcy, now a widower with a teenage daughter, never returned to Elizabeth because he was not able to find Lydia and Wickham due to a carriage accident and felt guilty.
Elizabeth's parents had died and her sisters are all married, she earns her living as governess. But she had never forget Darcy and regrets having refused Darcy's offer of marriage. When they now meet at the house of Darcy's cousin Richard (where Elizabeth is employed as governess) time is standing still. Is there still a chance for their love? Will they be able to overcome previous misunderstandings and find their happy ever after?
What I like most about this lovely audiobook? Definitely Richard ❤️. I was so glad for his interference in the matter and his concern for both Darcy and Elizabeth. I like his way of carrying for Darcy even when the latter does not want to be taken care of. He his like the brother Darcy never had.
While listening to the story I often felt wistful about the time lost for Darcy and Elizabeth. But I also felt hope that they will finally find a way to be together. The happy ever after is definitely deserved.
The story is narrated by Stevie Zimmerman. She is one of the narrators I like most and, as always, she narrates in her own, lovely way. I like the way she gives every person a particular voice and that I am thus able to recognize them all. With her narration she makes the feelings in the book even more palpable.
I highly recommend this audiobook, it was so lovely and left me feeling happy after listening to it.
I received a free copy from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 21, 2019
A wonderful second chance!
Once more I find myself enchanted by Brenda Webb's storytelling talent. She has the ability to make me feel like I'm right there, being a witness to the story.
Keeping the characters' personalities and traits true to the original ones, she made me, again, fall in love with Darcy and Elizabeth, as well as with Lord Matlock, the former Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I truly can't recommend this book enough!
Once more I find myself enchanted by Brenda Webb's storytelling talent. She has the ability to make me feel like I'm right there, being a witness to the story.
Keeping the characters' personalities and traits true to the original ones, she made me, again, fall in love with Darcy and Elizabeth, as well as with Lord Matlock, the former Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I truly can't recommend this book enough!
June 13, 2023
Elizabeth gets a new position as a governess for the Colonel Fitzwilliam's children who is now Lord Matlock after she got fired at her previous place. As luck has it, she encounters Darcy after 14 years when they all traveled to the Matlock Estate in Derbyshire. Who is now a widower with a step daughter.
We get to know from Darcy's POV Why he never returned to Hertfordshire after the Gardiners and Elizabeth left Lampton, early on, or at least bits of it which what I found good. From Elizabeth POV we get to know what she thinks and why she took a position as governess.
The book certainly has his ups and downs, and as soon as ODC are finally talking together and almost coming to a decision to meet again, something happens. Sometimes frustrating. And I didn't recognized Elizabeth at all, at every Disappointment she fled. There is a Caroline 2.0 (Lady Amy) she got her to the point to flee only by overhearing something. Afterwards she fled London.
Where was the Girl with 'my courage always rises with every attempt to intimidate me'?
One of the best characters was as always the Colonel. (Lord Matlock, sorry, habit.) He was playing cupid.
Angst level was a little high to be honest.
Over all I liked it.
We get to know from Darcy's POV Why he never returned to Hertfordshire after the Gardiners and Elizabeth left Lampton, early on, or at least bits of it which what I found good. From Elizabeth POV we get to know what she thinks and why she took a position as governess.
The book certainly has his ups and downs, and as soon as ODC are finally talking together and almost coming to a decision to meet again, something happens. Sometimes frustrating. And I didn't recognized Elizabeth at all, at every Disappointment she fled. There is a Caroline 2.0 (Lady Amy) she got her to the point to flee only by overhearing something. Afterwards she fled London.
Where was the Girl with 'my courage always rises with every attempt to intimidate me'?
One of the best characters was as always the Colonel. (Lord Matlock, sorry, habit.) He was playing cupid.
Angst level was a little high to be honest.
Over all I liked it.
October 31, 2023
Very disappointing overall - a nice idea but not well executed
I confess myself very disappointed in this book. This was an excellent plot idea but it just didn't deliver at all. The plot was just completely lost in a ridiculous number of misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth as if they were children rather than mature adults.
I found the constant reference throughout to "William" rather than "Darcy" grated significantly as it seemed so out of place as did the reliance to move the plot forward using silly teenage daughters and a petulant young widow.
There were too many period errors as well which frustrated me hugely. A couple of examples, although not an exhaustive list by any means,
- how could Darcy aged 40 have a godson who had 4 children and was marrying again? Darcy would have been a young child when the godson was born and would not have been asked to be a godfather.
- the wedding which took place outside on the beach just could not have happened. It is only in very recent times (2021) that weddings have been permitted in such locations in the UK .
This was a very clear miss for me.
I confess myself very disappointed in this book. This was an excellent plot idea but it just didn't deliver at all. The plot was just completely lost in a ridiculous number of misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth as if they were children rather than mature adults.
I found the constant reference throughout to "William" rather than "Darcy" grated significantly as it seemed so out of place as did the reliance to move the plot forward using silly teenage daughters and a petulant young widow.
There were too many period errors as well which frustrated me hugely. A couple of examples, although not an exhaustive list by any means,
- how could Darcy aged 40 have a godson who had 4 children and was marrying again? Darcy would have been a young child when the godson was born and would not have been asked to be a godfather.
- the wedding which took place outside on the beach just could not have happened. It is only in very recent times (2021) that weddings have been permitted in such locations in the UK .
This was a very clear miss for me.
February 5, 2021
Loved every word
Absolutely fell in love with variation of P & P.
It finds Lizzie and Darcy older and both beat up by the trials and tribulations of their lives. A scandal and an accident separated them in the beginning and marriage and death force their lives in different directions. When they meet up again, Lizzie is a governess and Darcy a widower and parent to a teenage daughter. As they are about to reconcile, a fire at Pemberly calls Darcy home. While Darcy us away, a “lady “ set on having Darcy schemes to keep them apart by using her nieces, one of which is Darcy’s own daughter. It seems as though her plan maybe successful when Elizabeth overhears a conversation she was meant to hear an flees her position as governess and returns to London. A spy, a Lord and fate help to reveal the “lady’s “ interference and bring Darcy and Lizzie back together.
Absolutely fell in love with variation of P & P.
It finds Lizzie and Darcy older and both beat up by the trials and tribulations of their lives. A scandal and an accident separated them in the beginning and marriage and death force their lives in different directions. When they meet up again, Lizzie is a governess and Darcy a widower and parent to a teenage daughter. As they are about to reconcile, a fire at Pemberly calls Darcy home. While Darcy us away, a “lady “ set on having Darcy schemes to keep them apart by using her nieces, one of which is Darcy’s own daughter. It seems as though her plan maybe successful when Elizabeth overhears a conversation she was meant to hear an flees her position as governess and returns to London. A spy, a Lord and fate help to reveal the “lady’s “ interference and bring Darcy and Lizzie back together.
May 8, 2023
The story starts 14 years after Lizzy gets Jane’s letter about Lydia and from there everything changes from canon. It is an emotional journey that thankfully ends very well but there were several big bumps, hiccups and misunderstandings along the way. I agree with others that thankfully for Col Fitzwilliam (granted he now has his father’s title) realized what was going on and made it his mission for the two of them to just talk and clear up any misconceptions and mercifully it worked. Stevie Zimmerman hit this one out of the ballpark again as she was able to gently age our favorite characters and bring them to life.
July 31, 2019
Normally I'm not a huge fan of stories that have a long delay between the cannon plot and D&E reuniting, but this one was a pleasant surprise. The author found an interesting way to get these two back into each other's paths, and keeps true to their characters. I also love the role that Richard gets to play in this as he advocates for their relationship, but its a bit hard to watch both D&E be so hesitant to being bold and taking the risk to try and be together. However, they get their eventually, and in enough time for us readers to have a nice glimpse into their happily ever after.
June 27, 2019
Not worth 6.99
When I see a Brenda j Webb I know I wanna read it
Her villains are so evil 😈. So I was looking forward to seeing how they were going weave their evil web. I was kinda disappointed. One reason because of true 17 year olds don’t turn around so quick (that is as close to a spoiler as it is going to get) I was expecting more 🤔. All the excitement in the beginning just fizzles out toward the end.
When I see a Brenda j Webb I know I wanna read it
Her villains are so evil 😈. So I was looking forward to seeing how they were going weave their evil web. I was kinda disappointed. One reason because of true 17 year olds don’t turn around so quick (that is as close to a spoiler as it is going to get) I was expecting more 🤔. All the excitement in the beginning just fizzles out toward the end.
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