A Clever Alliance is book 1 in the Regency Brides: A Promise of Love series. This is apparently a spinoff series of the Ladies of Miss Bell's Finishing School series and I wish I had known this before I started this book. The secondary characters feature prominently in A Clever Alliance but had their own story in book 2 of Miss Bell's series. I would have preferred to read their story first because I definitely felt like I was missing out. What is Penelope's business that she apparently runs in Regency world? How did the Duke and Duchess meet? What obstacles did they overcome to be together to be able to dish advice? Seems like this story should have been in the same series. Oh well.
So here we have Lady Madalene Ramsbury being called home to London from Miss Bell's Finishing School in Bath at the request of her uncle, her guardian. He surprises Madalene with news that she will marry the Viscount Tattershell and the betrothal will be announced at a garden party in four days. Not only does Tattershell arrive to the party late, he is drunk and can't even get her name right. Her uncle finds their meeting comical, and Tattershell's parents just kind of shrug it off, but Madalene knows she has to escape. And she does, by running from the party, climbing a tree and falling right into the curricle of Everett, the Marquess of Northampton.
When Madalene makes her entrance, er... landing, Everett assumes she's just another debutante trying to compromise marriage out of him but he quickly sees that Madalene is in a situation and he's able to help her. Taking her to the Duke and Duchess of Blackbourne's home (because the Duchess is Madalene's friend from Miss Bell's book 2) Madalene finds sanctuary while the Duke and Everett get the whole story and confront Madalene's uncle.
After hearing everything, Everett sees an opportunity to help both himself and Madalene. They become engaged, meanwhile giving her a season to meet other potential suitors, while keeping the match-making mamas and their daughters at bay. At the end of the season, Madalene can cry off with Everett and, with her sizeable dowry, be free to choose a husband. All that sounds well and good, except Tattershell begins stalking Madalene, her father's will needs to be found, and feelings might be starting to grow between Everett and Madalene.
I enjoyed this book and was entertained, but I truly have to wonder how an author with so many books under her belt in this genre could get some things so very wrong. First of all, Gretna Green is the proper name of a real place and the two times the author refers to it she calls it Gretna Greens. She also confuses the vast property of a country estate with a small city footprint of a London townhouse. In an early scene, Madeline is at her family's London townhouse, yet she went out riding that morning without an escort but it's ok because she stayed on their lands... surrounded by woodlands. Ummm... what private land do they have behind their townhouse for riding? Next up... the lions at the menagerie are three years old and were presented to his Majesty in 1800. But the actual story begins in Bath in 1812. I mean, this is stupid stuff to get wrong. I won't get into all the anachronisms and use of "morning" instead of good morning and correct word usage (pertinent vs. impertinent, etc.). But be aware there is a very contemporary spin on the dialogue. It also felt juvenile in many places. At the beginning of the story, the author goes overboard with the use of unnecessary dialogue tags. She bantered, joked, admitted, remarked... all useless when describing dialogue that was just spoken. Fortunately she reined it in and it wasn't as noticeable later in the story. One thing I found lacking were the physical descriptions of the characters. There wasn't much to go on. She was beautiful, he was handsome, etc., etc. Her hair was always piled high on top of her head. Ok, not always, but four times it was. We don't even learn her eyes are green until chapter 9 but we are told four times his are blue. I don't know. It was hard to conjure a picture in my head of the main characters.
Overall, I did enjoy this story, really I did. It has its flaws and it's formulaic and rather predictable but I liked the elements of villainy and wanted to see what would happen next.
This is a sweet, clean read, with kisses and embraces only. 3.5 stars from me rounded up. I will be moving on to the next book in the series, The Reluctant Guardian.