I have two editions of this book, which is one of the earliest Darkover Books written, and was rewritten in a later edition, to bring it more in line with the series as it developed.
The rewriting is not very obvious in this title, and it's sometimes difficult to realize what has changed. But the copy I read this time is the earlier edition.
In terms of internal chronology, this is set during the childhood of Kennard Alton. At this time, Valdir Alton lived at Armida in winter, and (mostly) at the later-destroyed Alton townhouse in summer. Kennard, it should be noted, was Valdir's younger son; the older brother, Lewis, was evidently sent to Arilinn at a fairly young age, and probably died with Cleindori, whose son he fathered. Cleindori was fostered at Armida, though it's not clear when she went there.
This edition has, as many books at the time had, very misleading cover art. Nothing remotely like what's pictured on the cover features in the book. The cover is credited to Jack Gaughan, who perhaps also drew the picture of what are probably Kennard and Larry (later styled Lerrys) Montray, being menaced by what is apparently meant to be a banshee bird. Neither are anything like what's described in the book, so I suppose the artist did not, in fact, read the book. This was not uncommon at the time.
The dedication reads: "To my son Patrick, but for whose help this book would have been written much sooner"--apparently a wry reference to the fact that child care is a much more time-consuming job than novices expect it to be.
This volume is fairly deliberately disingenuous. Why Wade Montray felt he had to conceal his previous history on Darkover (including the fact that Larry had a sister, Elaine, and that their mother was of Aldaran ancestry), I don't know. I would guess that Wade's relationship with his wife was not untroubled, and that they divorced after the birth of their younger child (I THINK Larry was the younger). I'm not sure when Larry & Elaine's mother died, but I think she might have been still alive when Kennard went to be fostered on Earth.
I conclude that Larry was the younger because he seems to have had little knowledge of his mother, though it doesn't necessarily follow. It looks as if custody was split, and as if Larry had little if any contact with his mother and sister after the divorce.
Wade Montray appears in the Darkover timeline around about the time of the beginning of the Forbidden Tower. He has a one-night stand (one day, really) with Margali n'ha Ysabet during her housebound time in Thendara House, and at the time he mentions that he's planning to go off to Aldaran, where the then Lord Aldaran (Kermiac? Either him or his predecessor, likely) had asked for some technical aid. He also goes off to fight the fire menacing Armida at the time. But though he married one of the Aldarans, he seems to have had very little to do with the leroni, so it's likely from his mother that Larry inherited the laran he has.
Kennard at the time is about 15--but though he assumes that Larry is his agemate, he is probably a few years older (Darkovan years are about a month longer than Earth years, and Darkovan days are 28 hours long--which means, by the way, that a tenday is more nearly a third of a month on Darkover). Kennard's mother was still alive at the time, and is offstage in several scenes, though she never appears onstage in any scene. Kennard is doing his stint as a Guard cadet, which is how he meets Larry, because he referees a fight between Larry and the champion of a group of street toughs who are harassing him. Kennard is rather contemptuously insular--but also rather uneasily so. It's evident that he had been in the habit of hanging about the spaceport for some time before Larry arrived, but that he hadn't managed to strike up an acquaintance with any of the Terran children, because they were every bit as insular as the Darkovans.
It's also evident that Valdir had already been maturing the idea of importing lensgrinding technology and expertise before Larry and Kennard became friends. One of the things Kennard asks Larry for is books about Terran photographic techniques, and about starships. Picture books, because Kennard, at this point, was illiterate both in Terran and Darkovan scripts. Bradley's uneasiness about the rejection of literacy by Darkovans is made clear even this early in her imagination of Darkover--the rationalizations for said lack of written lore are quite defensive; and where you find defensiveness, there's evidence of a feeling of shame about something. The odds are the Darkovans themselves didn't know why they had (largely) abandoned written texts, and, when they were challenged on the subject, defended themselves reflexively, even while recognizing that they had been deliberately kept ignorant of things their ancestors wanted kept secret, and that this was seriously hampering betimes. Case in point: the Terran ancestors of the majority of Darkovan humans undoubtedly knew of the technique of cloud-seeding. But the knowledge had to be (re)introduced to their descendants in this book.
In this book, as in quite a few others, the 'bandits' are introduced as monstra ad machina, to menace the visiting Larry. There are hints that a lot of backcountry Darkovan (small d) domains turned to preying on passersby in troubled times, or were taken over by roving bands of bandits, and that there was no coordinated attempt to dislodge them from their holdings until Valdir's time. But this is still a matter of dislocation. Bandits can't sustain themselves. They need supplies. And there's not much use in stealing money if you can't SPEND it somewhere. The Dry Towns are a partial answer: it's evident that they acted as suppliers and fences for the bandits. And they probably did so in order to keep the people south of the Kadarin from advancing and meddling in what they regarded as their own business. But there are still missing elements, and the rationales still ring a bit hollow.
Talking of rings, by the way, it's occurred to me that the metal-poor Darkovans seem to have a lot of bells and gongs. Where do THEY come from? Nevarsin?
This is also the origin of the oft-repeated (and often scoffed-at) encounter between Larry Montray, Kennard Alton, and a chieri. Most lowland Darkovans treat tales of chieri as fairy-tales. But those six-fingered hands (and six-toed feet?) in some Darkovan families didn't come from nowhere, after all.