This book was a huge disappointment to me. I thought I had found a hidden gem in a second-hand bookshop but ended up getting more and more irritated with it as I read on. It felt promising in the first chapters but for me it had several major flaws :
THE TELLING BUT NOT SHOWING
The novel gives us several supposedly boundless, depthless, eternal loves. The loved ones are everything the lovers ever wanted, the only person they could ever love, their reason for living and dying, for “succumbing to obsessions stronger than life itself”. However, the author fails to immerse us in these all-consuming passions. We know that they exist only because she tells us so. We don’t experience them happening, taking root, growing, developing and taking over the lovers in all their “awful”, tragic glory.
While I could still be moved by Indranath Roy’s undying love for his silent, ethereal wife, withdrawn from the world into herself, too pure and refined in spirit to be touched, his son is another matter.
When telling us about Debendranath Roy’s (using his full name throughout the novel makes him seem even more pedantic than he already is) fathomless passion for his aloof and haughty sister-in-law Reba who diminishes everyone around by her grace and regal bearing and of whose true feelings he has no idea, the author is getting quite overwrought, going on about the “sublime expanse of her loneliness”, his “trying to cherish her memory without agony”, “holding her memory sacred”, etc. etc.
Then there is his niece Niharika who meets her fate in Oxford in the person of Daniel Faraday. She’s incredibly beautiful and intelligent and has a great sense of humour and he’s gorgeous and suave and interesting and a man of the world and inevitably they fall in love with each other the first time they meet (or so we are told).
Niharika moves to the US and ends up being best friends with manic-depressive gay Morgan, another victim of Daniel Faraday's irresistibleness and - united in their impossible love for the man - they worship together at his shrine.
THE SOAP OPERA ELEMENTS
Daniel Faraday is conveniently married and conveniently unwilling to leave his wife and son which is of course the perfect starting point for a tragic, heartbreaking love story.
Niharika is back in India, in the huge old crumbling family mansion called “Mandalay”. There, just before leaving for England, she meets this young doctor, good-looking, intelligent, sensitive and devoted to helping the poor who is conveniently not married so here’s Niharika’s chance to free herself from her doomed love for Daniel Faraday and live a happy, fulfilling life at the doctor’s side, turning part of “Mandalay” into a clinic for the poor etc. etc.
Back in England she decides to marry the young doctor but guess what, just before moving back to India there’s Daniel Faraday on her doorstep who in the meantime has inherited his late depressed friend Morgan’s millions and though "his motives are clothed in the sweet mercury of reflected sin” there’s “the awful depth of their love”, “part of their destiny that nothing could deny”.
There is also mild, doormat-like Jennifer, the British wife, so lacking in self-confidence and so grateful to her husband for letting her love him. Despite all the wrongs and cruelties committed against her by Debendranath Roy, including faking his own death and spending 20 years tucked away in a Himalayan hill-station, renouncing everything but his love for Reba and “devoted to the perfect contemplation of her” Jennifer lets bygones be bygones and welcomes the chance to dedicate her life to caring for him in his blindness, old age and lack of money which are the reasons for his return to the land of the living.
THE STRAINED ANALOGIES AND CHOICE OF VOCABULARY
“Memories fell through him like pieces of tarnished cutlery.”
“The hot August nights stamped through her like herds of panting buffalo.”
“Words like an army of ragged claws upon his tongue.”
“desuetude”, “aceramic”, “coruscating”, “nectareous” ?
THE UNSPEAKABLE POMPOUSNESS
“Now” she says “you have come to destroy all that I have attempted to create, to crush in your palms the fruit of the pain that I have nursed for so long, but if it must be so, so be it, for there is no one like you, and without you I can only call back the shadows of what I would have as my fate, only that these shadows are beautiful and mellow…..”
“My beloved” he says, kissing her upon her closed eyes “can you not keep me as a secret dream within you, a flow of lava beneath the quiet crater, never threatening only there, free to bubble sometimes through some unwary crack and char you a little, but nothing more. Can you not go back to your saint, your holy mendicant, your strolling player, with me in your heart ? Can you not return unsanctified to that temple, am I not worth that .”
To quote Jack Lemmon to Tony Curtis in “Some like it hot” : “NOBODY TALKS LIKE THAT !”