Debbie's Gift: An Erotic Story Of Female Dominance

by Amity Harris

Debbie has a special surprise for her loving lawyer husband, Ron. After a passionate night of lovemaking Ron dreamily agrees to become Debbie's slave. The next morning a harsh reality sets in as Ron is netted and carted away to be trained in the arts of sexual slavery. Frightened, confused, and angry, Ron endures all forms of degradation and humiliation. The secret slave training facility is a masterpiece of torture technology. Ron must endure exhausting, homoerotic trials as Debbie watches his progress on a TV monitor. An erotic tale of sacrifice, slavery and love.

376 pages, Paperback

First published April 1, 2005

Reviews

[Zakfar Magni · Rating 1 out of 5]

I don't understand why some authors declare a book Femdom when there is more Gaydom there than Femdom. In fact, why can't they understand that Femdom and Gaydom are entirely different orientations? Some people can like both, but most people into one type have serious hard limits for the other. The book's first short chapter had a brief Femdom scene, and then the story became entirely Gaydom. And it remained that for many chapters. Later when a dominant female entered the story, all of her scenes were infused with Gaydom presence. Hence, all those scenes are also irritating and frustrating for pure Femdom readers.

There are numerous other problems with the book as well. A submissive man teaching a woman to become a dominant? Really? The author seriously needs to check what's 'topping from the bottom'. Hence, the whole second story of the woman is destroyed, which also delivers only frustration.

There is literally zero characterization and buildup of the story, which is kind of shocking, as the book length is really big.

This is the first story of Amity Harris I read, and I'm deeply disappointed. Maybe her writing would be satisfactory for someone into Femdom and Gaydom both, and who don't mind reading numerous mindless smuts involving random characters. I believe for anyone interested a properly written Femdom Erotica she would miserably fail only.