The summary was a bit dramatic and childish, what with it not being a ghost, but the ghost of a witch, and it scaring Jenny with spiders, snakes, and crazily enough, dragons. But since it's Betty Ren Wright, I bought it.
Jenny's dad has died, and her great-grandma was friends with a lady who left her house to Jenny and her mom when she died. The house is scary-looking, the owner reported to have been a witch. The very first time Jenny goes there with her friend Chris, the door slams by itself, Chris feels she's being watch, and a door opens on its own.
Jenny is skinny and a neighbor woman remarked that Jenny's mom needs a son who can do things around the house for her. Jenny is understandably upset and wants to prove that she's as brave as that lady's son.
I was afraid that this was going to be too juvenile, and that was certainly the case. Jenny looked into the mirror and saw a hairy dragon head, then she and Chris saw a lamp turned into a snake. The base of the lamp had a bunch of wooden rings stacked up and then it was a snake leaping out at them. It was bizarre, and this is coming from someone who believes in ghosts. I don't believe that things like this can happen.
Chris said she was never going into the house again, even if it means they're not best friends anymore. Jenny's mom wouldn't believe her and made her go back to the house and look at the lamp. She commented that maybe Chris will write ghost stories when she grows up, because she felt Chris was making it up to Jenny. It's weird, in a ghost story, that a character would make a comment about writing ghost stories. Wright has done this before and it's awkward and jars me out of the story.
Chris told her cousin about the snake, and she came to the conclusion that it's the ghost of a witch. Chris pronounced that it's the worst thing she's ever heard of and that was a moment of humor.
I did feel bad for Jenny, because her mom didn't believe her, her friend was threatening to break it off. The son of her mom's friend heard them talking about Jenny being afraid of the ghostly activity, so he dressed up like a ghost and jumped out at her. He also left a rubber snake in front of her apartment and waited with a friend to laugh at her.
Her mom was really making me mad. She not only didn't believe anything Jenny said, she got mad about it. Jenny wanted to help her mom in the basement so she wouldn't have to be upstairs alone, and her mom said she wasn't a baby and everyone has to be alone sometimes.
It was such a ridiculous moment when Jenny saw a crocodile in the hallway. It was like the author sat down and thought of every scary creature she could, but it made no sense. I don't believe that you can see things like this so it really took away from it. To make it worse, the jaws were huge, the picture taking up the entire page, and Rufus the cat jumped right into the mouth. This caused the crocodile to disappear into a puff of smoke. It was insane.
The witch is the grandmother of Miss Nagle. She wasn't intimidating in the least. The way she spoke was juvenile. Jenny told her it's mean to scare people and she replied "Mean shmean." She sounded like a child.
I couldn't wait for her mom to get the scare of her life and feel bad that she didn't believe her daughter. But the witch said her mom didn't believe in ghosts and she'd disappear if her mom came near, so there went that. It became clear Jenny was alone in dealing with it.
I felt bad for Jenny because she feared she would end up like Miss Nagle and be a loner in her house with no friends, just Rufus.
It was an unexpected twist that Jenny had the idea to use the witch. Mr. Barker, a man who goes around recycling and stuff for charity, was planning to make a haunted house for the kids. Jenny knew he needed to raise money and would feel bad if kids didn't like it, so she bravely went back to Miss Nagle's to propose to the witch her idea. (An elephant's head appeared in the kitchen, loudly trumpeting...also a spider the size of a tire...so stupid). Jenny was complimenting the witch, challenging her to be good at scaring the kids. I didn't like this turn of events. I wanted the witch gone, not put to work.
Her bargain was that the witch was only to scare people on Halloween and never bother anyone in the house again. The witch asked Jenny why she should do it, and Jenny said because she wouldn't have anyone to scare because when her and her mom move in Jenny won't be scared of her tricks anymore and won't invite her friends over.
The school had a Halloween party but it was wasted because Jenny was so worried about the haunted house later. Her mom had found the witch's old clothes for Jenny to wear, so she looked like a Victorian girl. I thought the witch would get mad but nothing happened. I thought Jenny would win the costume contest, since everyone had to walk across the stage, but there was no winner. Then at the haunted house, all Jenny did was stand outside the entire time. She didn't even go in. I was dumbfounded. Chris got mad and didn't want to go at all, but they just stood outside and listened to people's reactions. They talked of skeletons coming down the stairs, brewing something in the kitchen, bats swooping down, big spiders, and headless men. The witch especially scared Bobby with a crocodile, so it was good the little jerk got scared so bad he ran out. People saw a gorilla, an elephant and a lion. It was so juvenile and outlandish but a really bad idea not to have Jenny experience it. Of course Mr. Barker was confused, knowing he didn't have any of that stuff in there, but he raised a lot of money for Christmas presents for children this year. That was so goody two shoes and too perfect that he made all that money. By the end, Mr. Barkin needed someone to blow out the candles and Jenny agreed to go in and help, while Chris wouldn't. Bobby was still outside and his mouth dropped open when he heard that, so he got his comeuppance. Jenny wasn't too scared to go in and she proved herself.
She saw the witch one last time. She was tired from all her tricks and said she'd need a year just to work on new ones. That was really convenient that she wouldn't be doing any tricks for a whole year. It's bad though that she was going to stay at Mr. Barkin's parents' house which he inherited. I hoped it would stay empty and she wouldn't scare him. She had one last scare for Jenny too, a mouse the size of a horse. The scares certainly weren't getting any better.
The last line was Jenny saying she was going to move into a house and it wasn't haunted.
Chris wasn't a good friend. The scares were silly and too crazy to even be considered remotely scary.