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Welcome to Grail, Louisiana -- next to nothing and just beyond reality -- where hoodoo meets Jesus, and townsfolk pray to both. This dark fantasy delves into the psychological and motivational depths of Grail and its residents. Miss Sedele mixes up green cocktails called 'cryptoverdes' at Le Bon Chance. Vida Dumars, owner of the Moonlight Diner, peers into the deepest realms of her customers' hearts as though they were picture windows. Town spirit Good Gray Man has promised good fortune to the town as long as it hangs onto tradition. A quirky, fantastical town's heart and soul are slowly, often painfully revealed in this dark and captivating novella.

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144 pages, Hardcover

First published April 1, 2003

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Lucius Shepard

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Brief biographies are, like history texts, too organized to be other than orderly misrepresentations of the truth. So when it's written that Lucius Shepard was born in August of 1947 to Lucy and William Shepard in Lynchburg, Virginia, and raised thereafter in Daytona Beach, Florida, it provides a statistical hit and gives you nothing of the difficult childhood from which he frequently attempted to escape, eventually succeeding at the age of fifteen, when he traveled to Ireland aboard a freighter and thereafter spent several years in Europe, North Africa, and Asia, working in a cigarette factory in Germany, in the black market of Cairo's Khan al Khalili bazaar, as a night club bouncer in Spain, and in numerous other countries at numerous other occupations. On returning to the United States, Shepard entered the University of North Carolina, where for one semester he served as the co-editor of the Carolina Quarterly. Either he did not feel challenged by the curriculum, or else he found other pursuits more challenging. Whichever the case, he dropped out several times and traveled to Spain, Southeast Asia (at a time when tourism there was generally discouraged), and South and Central America. He ended his academic career as a tenth-semester sophomore with a heightened political sensibility, a fairly extensive knowledge of Latin American culture and some pleasant memories.

Toward the beginning of his stay at the university, Shepard met Joy Wolf, a fellow student, and they were married, a union that eventually produced one son, Gullivar, now an architect in New York City. While traveling cross-country to California, they had their car break down in Detroit and were forced to take jobs in order to pay for repairs. As fortune would have it, Shepard joined a band, and passed the better part of the 1970s playing rock and roll in the Midwest. When an opportunity presented itself, usually in the form of a band break-up, he would revisit Central America, developing a particular affection for the people of Honduras. He intermittently took odd jobs, working as a janitor, a laborer, a sealer of driveways, and, in a nearly soul-destroying few months, a correspondent for Blue Cross/Blue Shield, a position that compelled him to call the infirm and the terminally ill to inform them they had misfiled certain forms and so were being denied their benefits.

In 1980 Shepard attended the Clarion Writers’ Workshop at Michigan State University and thereafter embarked upon a writing career. He sold his first story, "Black Coral," in 1981 to New Dimensions, an anthology edited by Marta Randall. During a prolonged trip to Central America, covering a period from 1981-1982, he worked as a freelance journalist focusing on the civil war in El Salvador. Since that time he has mainly devoted himself to the writing of fiction. His novels and stories have earned numerous awards in both the genre and the mainstream.

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409 reviews174 followers
August 4, 2023
Grotesque, dark and surrealistic trip to a small-town American south full of voodoo. Good that it was short.
Profile Image for Craig.
6,412 reviews181 followers
August 30, 2020
This is a well written short novel by Shepard, but not really what I was expecting or the kind of story I generally like. I've enjoyed much of Shepard's science fiction, but this is an odd mix of near-horror and failed-romance set in a Sookie Stackhouse small town called (heavy-handedly) Grail. Short version: Jack Mustaine finds his true love, Vida Dumars (who used to be pretty much of a mess), but he is too weak to keep or help her, or face any kind of responsibility or commitment. It's a pretty bleak and depressing work with a Southern Gothic vibe. There are several supporting characters that are interesting, but they're kind of messed up and hopeless, too. The horror aspect is secondary and not too well defined, and there's a fixation on the theme of U.S. troops in Vietnam with prostitutes that I didn't get at all. The setting is quite well described, and the book has an introduction by Poppy Z. Brite and very nice illustrations from J.K. Potter. Give it a shot if you have a good mood that needs to be toned down.
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465 reviews8 followers
April 29, 2017
Il y a quelques mois, mon abonnement à Bifrost arrivait à son terme quand j’ai reçu une offre de réabonnement du Bélial’ me proposant de recevoir en cadeau un roman à choisir dans une liste. Il fallait classer une dizaine de bouquins par ordre de préférence, mais comme j’en connaissais aucun j’ai fait ça au feeling, c’était un peu le loto ! Et voilà donc que je reçois Louisiana Breakdown de Lucius Shepard (merci).

Il a trainé un moment dans ma bibliothèque, et je suis retombé dessus il y a quelques jours… Hésitation, reniflage de couverture, bon, ça a l’air pas mal, on plonge. Louisiana Breakdown, comme son nom l’indique, se passe en Breakdown, euh, non, pardon, en Louisiane. On y suit Jack Mustaine, un musicien qui faisait route vers la Floride quand il tombe en panne devant la ville de Graal. Il va être forcé de passer un jour ou deux dans le patelin le temps que sa caisse soit réparée, et c’est là que tout va partir en sucette, il va tomber amoureux, il va picoler, il va croiser des mediums et des forces obscures et maléfiques. Le roman est très court et il serait dommage de vous en dire plus sur l’histoire.

La principale réussite de Louisiana Breakdown est son ambiance. L’auteur arrive à retranscrire l’atmosphère moite et envoutante des bayous sud-américains, il travaille chaque détail pour immerger le lecteur dans son univers pour mieux distiller ses éléments fantastiques et bizarres au compte-goutte. On visite le bistrot du coin avec les vieux en salopettes qui sirotent leur bière, on va dans les marécages pour découvrir des secrets cachés. On va bien sûr voir apparaitre une forme de sorcellerie et des croyances étranges, et un secret qui se cache derrière les habitants de Graal qui frisent souvent le grand-guignol, tous plus tarés les uns que les autres. Les personnages sont très attachants, on suit Jack et Vida avec grand plaisir, leur rencontre et leur combat nous happent et on dévore le livre en une fois (il fait 170 pages, ça aide). Tout roule tout seul.

Mais arrivé à la fin, il reste une petite déception en travers de la gorge et il faut un petit temps de digestion pour mettre le doigt dessus, et finalement ça m’a frappé. Derrière cette formidable ambiance de Louisiane se cache un scénario fantastique tellement classique et déjà-vu que j’en garde un souvenir en demi-teinte, le livre m’a embarqué mais ne m’a jamais surpris par les évènements qu’il conte : Le type qui tombe en panne dans une ville bizarre qui cache un secret (au secours), la nana dont il tombe amoureux et qui court un grand danger (re-au secours), les personnages mystérieux/mediums qui sentent un graaaand pouvoir autour du héros, le grand méchant mystérieux…

Cette avalanche de clichés, c’est le coup du chevalier qui vient sauver la demoiselle en détresse et l’emmener loin du méchant dragon, ou alors c’est un niveau de Super Mario Bros, mais c’est foutrement peu ambitieux dans la trame. La fin a tout de même un twist rigolo mais aussi un peu catapulté (et décevant), c’est à ce moment que j’ai lâché notre protagoniste pour rester dubitatif en refermant le roman. Mais au final on se demande, est-ce que c’était pas le but de l’écrivain de faire un exercice de style en reprenant des gros clichés pareils pour en faire une petite variation amusante ? Si c’est le cas, j’ai pas tout à fait accroché à la démarche, peut-être que d’autres s’en amuseront mais il faut savoir où on met les pieds.

Louisiana Breakdown est un beau voyage au cœur de la Louisiane, avec une galerie de personnages sympathiques (ou flippants, c’est selon) et hauts en couleur, mais il manque une histoire intéressante pour passer du gros cliché fantastique à quelque chose de vraiment plus enthousiasmant.

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1,381 reviews21 followers
January 19, 2009
Much as I like Lucius Shepard (especially Green Eyes and Life During Wartime), I was sort of disappointed with this book. It wasn't bad and I'll probably read it again someday, but I feel like he either should have taken the plot further or cut it down into a short story.
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287 reviews7 followers
October 15, 2021
Wonderfully written novella reminiscent of Shirley jackson's The Lottery in tone and setting. Small town has periodic ritual to ensure good times continue. The Midsummer Queens 20 year reign is coming to an end.
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36 reviews3 followers
August 7, 2018
Welcome to Grail, Louisiana! A little hole of a town near the Gulf - next to nothing and just beyond reality - where hoodoo meets Jesus and the townsfolk pray to them all. That's what it says on the inside jacket cover of this beautifully presented hardback from Golden Gryphon and it pretty much sums what you can expect from the always entertaining Lucius Shepard.
Jack Mustaine's car breaks down just outside Grail and he ends up staying longer than expected in the steamy environs of the town, getting slowly but surely sucked into the scheming lives of its inhabitants. He hooks up with Vida Dumars at the Le Bon Chance bar and things get hot and heavy very fast.
Vida is the town's Midsummer Queen and she's about to hand the title over the following evening. However, the whole ceremony is anything but symbolic and is connected to a deal made with the very shady Good Gray Man a couple of hundred years ago. As the ceremony approaches, Jack becomes more and more entangled with the potential consequences of the event. Darkness gathers and the Good Gray Man comes callin'.
In terms of atmosphere, Louisiana Breakdown shares many elements with The Big Easy, Blood Simple, Fargo, Red Rock West and U-Turn, to mention but a few examples. You can smell the swamp, you can hear the people tawk, you can sense the isolation, you can feel the impending doom approach with inexorable slowness. This novel begs to be filmed.
While not quite up to the mark of his work in The Jaguar Hunter and Barnacle Bill the Spacer collections, it's very, very good and the series of wonderfully evocative paintings by J.K. Potter doesn't hurt either. Highly recommended.
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476 reviews6 followers
December 11, 2013
Une lecture intrigante. Une plongée dans la Louisiane profonde, dans l'occulte, les rites, à la limite de l'étouffement. L'écriture nous y envoie directement. On visualise très bien les lieux.

L'histoire, elle, est très vague. Tout se déroule en très peu de temps, mais on navigue entre l'onirique et le réel, sans trop savoir ce qu'il se passe vraiment.

La conclusion est à l'avenant, ouverte, sans forcément de réponses. Louisiana Breakdown, c'est simplement une halte dans la ville de Graal, la découverte d'un autre univers, puis le retour à la normale, sans savoir si c'était un rêve ou pas.
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Author 26 books61 followers
December 26, 2014
This is a short, but well done, book. Grail, Louisiana is a creepy little place. Dark secrets lurk in the shadows, voodoo and Christianity are both part of the town. From Crytpverdes being served at the local bar, to the Moonshine Diner, nothing is quite what it seems.

It's a short but powerful piece. Shepard accomplishes a lot with the fewest words possible. It's less than 150 pages, so there's really no good reason to not check it out.

Recommended for fans of well done horror.
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121 reviews23 followers
November 2, 2010
I couldn't put it down. This is barely longer than a novella, and the economy of storytelling helps propel the sense that there's no place to run during a local celebration where evil is going to rise among the tainted characters and their earthy neighbors of the bayou. Shepard's voice actually seems cranky at times...and somehow it works for him. I highly recommend this little dark fantasy gem.
Profile Image for Dalibor Dado Ivanovic.
424 reviews25 followers
June 8, 2021
Bas mi je legla ova knjiga. Onako nemam pojma niti zasto sam ju uzeo, niti kako sam dosao do ideje da je citam.
Uglavnom pocinje bas kao rockerski road roman...onako, tip svira u klubu, ima dugu kosu, gitaru i onda dolazi ona. I radnja stvarno ide zanimljivo do samog kraja, kao da gledam dobar film iz osamdesetih.
Inace Lucius super pise, inace je i poznat po svojoj prozi.
Profile Image for Christian ZIX.
8 reviews
May 5, 2025
Jack Mustaine est un guitariste égaré dans la ville de Graal. Cette ville de fiction se situe dans les profondeurs rurales de la Nouvelle-Orléans. Il y rencontre la belle Vida, la "reine du solstice". Il va être confronté aussi aux superstitions de la population. Le récit se déroule dans une ambiance glauque de marécages, de nuits brumeuses, d'apparitions hallucinantes, sans que l'on puisse faire une distinction claire entre la réalité et le rêve ou plutôt le cauchemar.
Ce roman appartient à la catégorie du réalisme magique. J'ai été frappé par le style percutant, imagé, violent, de l'auteur. Superbe traduction d'Henry-Luc Planchat, dont les notes de bas de page apportent des renseignements utiles sur les traditions et coutumes de cette région désolée de la côte du golfe du Mexique.
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52 reviews
November 13, 2012
Au final un très bon roman, assez court et très bien construit. On y trouve quelques éléments fantastiques dans l'ambiance lourde du bayou de Louisiane.
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