I have a lot of thoughts about this one. Mainly the characters, as the story is good, even if it is multi faceted. I know some people don't like having characters all over the place, with narration that has to jump around between them all, but they're kinda needed for big fantasy stories like these.
Anyway, characters.
Cergorn is a dick.
Gillerra is a dick.
Presval is a creepy, pervy dick.
Zavahal has grown on me, but I'm sure he's still a dick.
Kaz is almost a dick, because his attitude is annoying (but he's a fucking firedrake, so who cares right?)
Rochella better not end up with Presval. It doesn't even have to have a romantic end for her, so long as she doesn't shack up with the nonce.
Tormon is amazing.
Seriema is just bleh.
Veldan is okay.
Elion and Veldan need to have angry sex (or maybe not so angry anymore, whatever)
Toulac has her moments.
Galveron is Mr Darcy or something.
Kaita is great.
Aliana is also great.
^ hopefully there is NOT a love triangle here. I get why the women love Galervon but please, no.
Grim and Dark are interesting and I'm intrigued to see more.
Horseys are amazing (especially the sefraians - I spelt that wrong, who cares)
More horseys please. Maybe a doggo or two as well?
Alestan is a dick and could ruin everything. Get it together boy.
Veldan being Blade/Amarurn's daughter was like the worst kept secret ever (I'm not sure it was supposed to be a secret tbh, it's so obvious).
Book two in a nutshell.