*may contain spoilers by accident*
One word. Ugh.
For those who said this is a good book, I’d hate to see what a bad book is to you.
As a journalist and writer, there are some basic things you follow when writing a story. That is a very clear story, which this really doesn’t have. I’m barely a quarter of the way through, and I cannot keep track of anything because the storyline jumps so badly, its like a 4 yr old is telling the story. There is zero continuity, far too much building up of a feeling that we can’t get, because it’s one dimensionally written.
I have lived in haunted houses, had multiple paranormal experiences, and I can tell you I would outline my story with a background, family history, then get to the story. I would not start with a story, jump back to the beginning, then jump ahead to the end, then back again. This not only loses your reader, it makes them wonder what you were drinking when writing this book. It’s very obvious that there was no clear idea—just experiences that were likely jotted in a journal, and that’s what I’m reading. There is far too much narrative and zero action, things are poorly described (a crawl space but an attic? Which is it?) Poor grammar which should have been corrected by an editor, lacking punctuation, the list goes on.
At this rate, everything that has occurred in the story is explained by science. I have yet to hear of anything that merits paranormal experience. Does that mean the person did not experience them? No, not at all, but the way it’s told, it sure doesn’t. That’s because the writer is imposing their personal feelings into the story rather than relaying the information and painting a picture. Writing is about show and tell. This is tell only, and badly.
I’ve seen information written about this house online, in paranormal studies. Oddly enough, alleged evidence went missing/is reported to have never had any. Hmmmm. That’s not suspicious. Obviously there was bad energy on the land. That’s obvious. I had to find that out from a YouTube video! The author never sections her book about her family life first, the history of the house then their experiences! We start with them looking at the house, then go back to where she is today and where her kids are at, then back to when she got married...omg. I’m honestly surprised an publishing company printed this!
I may change my review when I am done, but right now I am beyond frustrated with the fact this story reads like a bowl of alphagetti—yes, gobble-de-goop.