This book started off a bit slow, but improved in the middle. But then, towards the end, bombed. I totally got angry with the direction the story went & almost put the book up! I really don't like the main character, Lilith. I actually liked Alfred, Eli & Marco. When she gets "involved" with Alfred -& says she's "in love with him", but the minute he leaves for work with her father for a few months, she's off flirting around with Eli & inviting him over & then going back to Marco's bar by herself to pursue him, then spending a week with Marco, this really just turned my stomache. Lilith seemed too immature with a jealous streak & bad temper. Her complaining about the ex-boyfriends who didn't do right by her, but she's no better than the ex-boyfriends in her relationships. Lilth Is only concerned with her self. This character was a total turn off to me. It left me frustrated that I wasted time reading this book. The writing flowed enough to keep me reading for the most part, but had I known it would end the way it did, would not have bothered reading this book. If you like the heroines in your romances to be mature & loyal & endings with HEA's, don't bother reading this. I know I won't bother picking up the remaining 6 books in the series from this author.