Ugh.
Alright. So… the first couple of books were ok. But at this point it’s just dumb. The drama is a stretch, and it is becoming more and more soap opera like. Not only that, but the authors continued refusal to do any research into things that are not horses is beyond frustrating.
In this book, all sorts of trouble is afoot. Most notably, Lex and Amanda’s refusal to talk to one another about anything. It’s just dumb.
Add in a long lost cousin, a villainous mother who apparently is the cat who walks through freaking walls, and the story is a frustrating read.
The way the author handles bank and securities fraud is laughably stupid. If an investment house lost that much money through fraudulent actions of their employee, they would have the SEC and the FBI crawling over every inch of the place. They wouldn’t just say ‘whoops, guess we will have to look into it’. The same with the bank. In the other books when Hubert stole money through wire fraud, the banks wouldn’t have been so blasé about it. In this book, Amanda’s entire TRUST WAS APPARENTLY WITHDRAWN IN A SINGLE ACTION. Which makes no sense whatsoever. A trust like that would probably need lawyers and multiple transactions to dismantle down.
Then the mother. Somehow because a nurse, her brother, and some random woman pretending to be her daughter said that she should be released she was? I’m 99% sure that that is not how criminally insane people are treated or handled. Then that somehow no one noticed or alerted any of her victims that she was released? And released early apparently?
Like, this is so much that I can’t even do the next book. The blerb says there’s another long lost sibling or cousin or something? This isn’t a romance any more. It’s a bad soap opera. That’s how it reads, and it’s not enjoyable.
The characters are there and could be fun. It’s nice to read about the family. What is not nice is the insane escalation of inability to communicate until the very end of the book, the stupid melodramatic villains, and the unrealistic plots. I guess I won’t get to read about the next time that Lex randomly assaults some random person instead of behaving like a normal member of society.