In Some of Tim's Stories, the narrative premise of this very short collection of sequential stories is not immediately apparent, but gradually makes itself known as you follow the main character, Mike, through the third-person perspective.
While Tim himself never makes an appearance and is never mentioned or referred to, his presence is felt through Mike, his on-paper doppelganger. The reader realizes that Tim is the author of these tales, and Mike is his character. In effect, S. E. Hinton writes through a personified filter - the fictional Tim - in order to write about Mike.
It is a Russian doll effect of sorts - a real writer writing as a fictional writer writing about a fictional character who is influenced by the fictional writer's experiences who is influenced by the real writer. As the meme goes, "How Meta."
This technique raises several sets questions for me on two major fronts; the first being what are the effects that this has on the writer's processes - does the real writer experience a mental/emotional distancing or merging result in approach/tone/head space as they speak through the fictional writer/buffer/filter? The second set of questions center around how the fictional writer then influences the fictional stories.
The extensive interviews of S. E. Hinton by Teresa Miller that take place in the second half of the book help to shed some light on the first set of questions. Hinton says {answers are edited to address my question):
Q: Why was it important for you to filter these stories through Tim?
It was a different narration process, and I enjoy being different sometimes...
Q: Did you ever find yourself slipping out of character and writing as S. E. Hinton?
Not with Tim's stories. I was so involved being that narrator that I found myself being Tim when I should have been S. E. Hinton.
To address the second set of questions (how does Tim's voice affect the narration?), see:
Q: How is Tim's writing style different from yours?
When I first started writing from Tim's point of view, I was amazed I couldn't do dialogue, because dialogue is my strong point. But dialogue was the hardest part of fiction writing for Tim. In the earlier stories there's not much. But as he got more relaxed with his writing, he got more comfortable using dialogue, too.
Q: But he still isn't a sophisticated storyteller. What is his strength as a writer?
I think the emotional intensity that he brings to his stories. His stories had to start with an emotion.
Overall I think that it was an experiment worth undergoing, especially from a writerly point of view, however I'm not sure if there is a lot of value for the reader to know about this process. It was a point of interest to muse near the end, when Mike starts talking about taking creative writing classes, whether this set of stories was autobiographical for Mike and perhaps if Mike = Tim and Tim = Mike, but without knowing anything about Tim, I didn't have the ability to contrast and compare the 'real' life of Tim and how he chose to artistically represent himself through Mike. In any event, it was a bit of food for thought.
The stories themselves were moving while being austere; the word count for each entry is under 1000 and as a result many things are implied instead of elaborated in great detail. I actually liked this, as it forced a kind of focus to each tale and character while also allowing the reader to colour in the lines with their imaginations and experiences. The end result were a series of impactful sketches that built on each other and finished leaving the reader satisfied.
The content and subject matter of the stories centers around Mike and his cousin. Both boys lose an uncle and a father after a car accident takes their lives, and both struggle with self-identity and the perils of growing up without a male role model as a result. I liked that Hinton explored Mike past adolescence and that this covered his early adult years as well. The stories also explore the themes of family, brotherhood, guilt, addiction, acceptance, legacy and self-improvement via determination and trial and error. All in all, the stories are about life.
I have always appreciated S. E. Hinton's unflinching and honest portrayals of topics and worldviews that others either refuse to acknowledge or talk about (Socs vs Greasers, anyone?). Sometimes life is hard. Hinton gets that, and she explores it with integrity.
I should also mention that there are some illustrations throughout the book that add some visual interest. They are still life vignettes of a sort, and add to the sense that these stories are sketches.
In addition to the stories, there is also a three part interview series that makes up more than half of the book. Hinton discusses The Outsiders, her following works, her life at University, her experiences with Hollywood, Matt Dillon and Francis Ford Coppola, family life and the things that matter to her. There are some insights into her processes for writing as well as what she finds inspiring. It's worth a read for Hinton fans without a doubt, as well as anyone interested in writing or film.
There are many strong parts, and these are only some of my favourite lines/segments:
1)
"Just a little longer?" they'd whine when their moms made them get out. Their teeth would be chattering, their lips blue, and all they could think of was getting back in.
Mike could remember whining like that. He picked up his cigarettes from the picnic table, tapped another one out.
"He says it's not as bad as you think. His cellmate is fine. They have a window."
Sometimes Mike thought Aunt Jelly must have had a stroke or something, since Terry... left.
She seemed so stunned. Strange. She was not a stupid woman.
Mike knew damn well there was no window.
...
"It's not your fault," Aunt Jelly said suddenly, fiercely. She put her hand on his arm. "Terry knew what he was doing. He knew the risks."
"Yes," Mike said. After all, it was the truth.
"And it's not your fault you're not in there with him."
"Just a little while longer?" the little kids whined.
They could not tell it was cold.
2)
"You got twenty-four hours to get your stuff out of my house."
Those were the exact same words he'd heard six years before, when he thought he had left that house forever.
Mike hoped the step-father remembered saying that.
"Fuck you," he started to add, but then realized Mom had said it for him.
3) When she looked at them, she looked under grime and saw people. She had those kind of eyes.
I would recommend this book for short story lovers, writers, Hinton fans and those who enjoy themes and subjects including relationships between brothers/cousins, guilt, the school of hard knocks, learning to forgive yourself, learning about yourself, coping with alcoholism, navigating the world without role models, the loss of a father, ineffective parenting/parents who 'mean well,' familial legacies and building a life for yourself. From a writing point of view, experimental writing, experimental narration, writing from a male POV.