Simon Strantzas is the author of Nothing is Everything, Burnt Black Suns, Nightingale Songs, Cold to the Touch and Beneath the Surface and has been nominated for the British Fantasy and Shirley Jackson Awards. His work has been appeared in The Mammoth Book of Best New Horror (ed. Stephen Jones), The Year's Best Dark Fantasy & Horror (ed. by Paula Guran), Best Horror of the Year (ed. by Ellen Datlow), Cemetery Dance, and Nightmare. He lives in Toronto, Canada.
Stemming the Tide is an interesting short story, and once again I find myself torn on how to rate it. I enjoyed the writing and the overall premise. However, the main character was pretty horrible, though perhaps that was with intention (the more I think about it, the more convinced I become that this is the case). The ending made me think, but still, I wish that there had been something more too it.
This story has pacing issues, taking too long to establish the stakes, only for the reader to realise there aren't any towards the end. The protagonists are not sympathetic and the story itself goes nowhere. The idea though is excellent but needs to have been fleshed out more before putting to paper.
Any chance I had of enjoying this story was bulldozed by the most insufferable MC imaginable. The author went for the acidic misanthropy and nihilism of Tyler Durden and Patrick Batemen, but swung and missed on the wit and social commentary that makes characters like that...actually entertaining.
I feel like there was more to be unpacked here - too much alluded to, and not enough delivered on. I know horror often uses a lack of information to create the atmosphere, but I think this one needed just a bit more.