Renee likes to be in charge, both in the boardroom and in the bedroom. What would it take to get her to submit? After a sexy office romp in her office, a mysterious witness comes forward to test her boundaries in every way.
This is 18 pages of amateurish smut, uploaded to be sold as if it were a professional quality book. Even Erotica should have some standards one would think.
The writing is wooden and pedestrian, very definitely amateurish and lazy. I've read fan-fiction that had a much higher quality of writing than this garbage. I've read better amateur smut sent in to adult magazines. This reads like a young teen boy wrote it.
And selling a very, very short story singularly as if it were a book is a crap move. Save your $, you can read better smut than this for free.
I really enjoyed this because I personally identify with the main character. But that aside, all the scenes are well thought-out with very little repetitive descriptions or actions.
This author is very skilled and creative, which is she’s quickly becoming one of my favorites!
A quick and steamy read that takes you from lust to blackmail and an intricate setup. Renee likes to be in charge but the boss has other plans. The setup is great and the climax just as good.
Deliciously playful. Each character trying to gain the upper hand in sexy twist after sexy twist. Knowing this is just the first story makes it all the more appetizing.
This was my introduction to this author, and while I appreciate a quick read, and don't mind paying for it, I was lucky enough to get this for free. I enjoyed it, it got my juices flowing, but I had some issues with the writing itself.
I read this on another review, "...all the scenes are well thought-out with very little repetitive descriptions or actions"
This isn't true. That was my biggest issue with the story. The descriptions were all the same for everything. Everything was "plunged" in, everybody "bucked" with pleasure. It got old quick. It would be to the author's benefit to maybe check a thesaurus next time.
Otherwise, kinky, sexy, steamy, and I always appreciate a good squirter!
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Thinking this be a good read, I read it. I feel book could've been better expressed by extending storyline way more. Book is short, I read it in less than 20 minutes. The sex scenes between Rene and the mysterious man was hot, and the plot was fair. Some of the lines are the same with over and over repeats which I did my best to run by, but wasn't easy to ignore. Still I feel the storyline itself needs much improvement. The author only writes books of sexual genre, this is what she seems to solely dedicates on. So she should know that when it comes to sexual explosive content, there should be more than just sex in the story not all sex. In real life there is more to life than sex.
This is a quickie that delivers what it promises. What a place to work! For a short story, it's packed with intrigue, sex, unexpected twists...and did I say sex? Loved it. Renee has an unexpected sexual encounter with her boss, throw in a peeping Tom with a camera...and you're all set up for blackmail. A must read, and I hope the author churns out an entire series of sequels.
This story delivered a variety show of tantalizing boot-knocking. Office sex? Check. Power dynamic? Check. Threesomes? Check. Another threesome? Why the heck not—the more the merrier.
Great, titillating short read. Repetitive words are my only beef, but the story’s so hot, you really don’t notice.
Action is heavy from the start, just the right amount of dialogue and background scenes. The intimacy is thrilling and fast paced, great for a bedtime story.
This is my first time reading something like this, and I can say it was very entertaining. I enjoyed the read, but im more into paranormal books. This author should keep writing and keep up the good work!
While the characters were more interesting than others, and a new aspect of sex culture was explored, there wasn't much story. I'm not sure if that's a genre wide phenomenon but there could easily be more.