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When those you love the most become your worst enemyFitzwilliam Darcy is on the run…with a baby!When an emergency summons Mr. Darcy back to London during the Netherfield ball, he discovers a newborn in his study along with a note. Now, he must guard a secret that could shatter his family and put the child in danger. But that isn’t his biggest challenge. He must find a wife—a woman he can trust with his charge and with his heart.Elizabeth Bennet’s prospects for a marriage based on love are taken away from her when her father makes a deal with Mr. Darcy, a man she despises. When she learns the identity of the baby and the true identity of the man she married, will their marriage of convenience develop into a love for the ages?Together they face slander, intrigue, family pressure, and prison. Will their marriage survive? Will the baby thrive? Or, will forces much larger than themselves destroy everything Darcy and Elizabeth hope for?This Regency variation of Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice by bestselling author, J Dawn King, is appropriate for all ages.

280 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 23, 2019

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J. Dawn King

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I go by the name "Joy". There is a well-published author that uses my full name (including the same middle initial). Imagine that!

I also write as Christie Capps. These are all variations of Pride and Prejudice that are about 100-120 pages in length.

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1,337 reviews125 followers
March 31, 2025
Babies are always more trouble than you thought — and more wonderful. ~ Charles Osgood

I would never recommend buying a book for its cover … but … maybe for this cover! That child could make anyone wish for just one more baby or just one more grandchild. For many of us, it’s better to read the book. So, that’s what I did.

I always enjoy anything from Joy King and this Baby is among her best stories.

Darcy is called away from the Netherfield Ball in response to a message from his cousin, the Colonel. In London, he learns of an infant needing his protection. Since a baby needs a Mother as well as a Father, he knows he must marry quickly. He has been tempted (despite his denial) by the second of the Bennet daughters of Meryton. He returns to Longbourn and arranges the marriage with Mr. Bennet. Elizabeth is allowed no voice in the decision and by mid-morning, she is married and in a carriage bound for Derbyshire.

Even worse: Elizabeth discovers her new, unwanted husband has brought along his mistress and child!

A baby is a blank cheque made payable to the human race. ~ Barbara Christine Seifert

The problem for this baby is that his Grandfather, Lord Matlock, and his Grandmother, Lady Catherine de Bourgh believe the blank cheque is made payable to them. These siblings deserve every evil description available. Each has his/her own interests in claiming the child and none of those interests are in the best interests of the child.

The baby’s identity and origins must remain hidden. The newly-wed Darcys must protect this defenseless child and concurrently fall in love – a large task for anyone.

At that time, babies were confined to the nursery, especially during the winter months. Travel was forbidden until they are older and stronger. Poor little James Alexander! Within hours of his late-November birth, he is taken from his birthplace to Darcy House, then to Meryton and then on the long journey to Pemberley. He lets his distress be known to all within his hearing. Unfortunately, his travels are far from over.

What secret does Lady Catherine hide?
What hidden evil has Lord Matlock done?
How can a baby be saved if his Father is in prison?

I read this originally on-line, then under Kindle Unlimited and then I purchased a copy for my permanent collection. You can see, I Loved It!

A baby is God's opinion that the world should go on. ~ Carl Sandburg
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2,687 reviews201 followers
March 16, 2025
I read this on fanfiction so this is the second time reading it, actually. I am guessing at the dates I first read it as the author would post one or two chapters per week so it was spread out over more time than it usually takes me to read a book.

This is one of those tales which keeps you turning pages and if it is your first time reading it I would warn you that it just might delay you going to bed at your usual time.

I do enjoy angst. I also enjoy marriages which are either due to compromise or forced marriage situations. This book begins with Elizabeth being forced to marry Darcy...by her father. He has sold her and while she is not a willing participant Darcy is (as in canon) under the impression that she loves or, at least, likes him. He does not force himself upon her. (This author would never do that.) However as the story develops and she (and the reader) learns why Darcy rushed into this marriage, she begins to see a side of him which is a contradiction to what she believed from her previous impressions and from Wickham's lies. Darcy is willing to do anything to help and/or protect those he loves.

You would think that this would include the Fitzwilliam side of his family but in this tale that side of the family has more than one viper in it. Both his aunt and his uncle have no love for any one who stands in the way of their search for power and control. The family's background will in the end surprise you: family secrets hidden from just about everyone including their own families.

Don't you love the photo of the baby on the cover? Protecting this baby is at the center of a whole lot of intrigue. And even though Darcy plans ways to keep the baby safe a certain detective is able to find clues which upset plans, force a flight, and reveal the baby's identity. And worse yet is that fact that a man who has worked for and been trusted by the Darcy family for years turns out to betray and possibly send to the gallows Will Darcy.

In the final pages we read of several families having been realigned due to facts revealed or due to new alliances formed.

One of the parts of this story that I enjoyed most was how Jem seemed to quiet when Darcy was the one holding him. Had to melt at that. But I also had tears when the death of one man is quietly spoken about by his widow.

I highly recommend this story.
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1,736 reviews133 followers
March 22, 2021
“… It’s hard to feel like much is wrong in the world when you’re looking into the eyes of a happy baby.” –Lisa Wingate, Tending Roses

Rating: MA: Due to the mature nature of adult discussions. Bawdy behavior, descriptions, and language. Angst Level: medium-to-high, stress that puts the reader on the edge with nail-biting drama, treachery, the mismanagement of political position, scandals, deceit, family drama, and secrets that can destroy lives. La! JDK threw in the sink on this one. OMG! I was shocked and amazed at the drama that just kept coming. One disaster led to another and wave after wave of sabotage, betrayal, and deceit made me crazy. I loved it. Highly recommend this delightful story. Oh, what a wonderful cover picture. I pictured him as I read the story. LA! I wanted to nuzzle my nose under his chin and cuddle him close.

“You know what the great thing about babies is? They are like little bundles of hope. Like the future in a basket.” –Lish McBride, Hold Me Closer, Necromancer

I began reading this on the JDK homepage and then reread it again when it was posted on the fanfiction forums. I knew then that this was one I wanted to own and would reread again and again. This is the third time I have read this. I love-Love-LOVE this Darcy and Elizabeth. OMG!!

“Children are not born for the benefit of their parents, neither are they the property of their family. Children belong to the future.” –Anthon St. Maarten

Let me quickly establish what was what: Lord Matlock and Lady Catherine were cold-heartedly discussing her daughter Anne [there is a surprise about her]. She had recently died in childbirth along with the babe… a son… leaving a distraught husband, our very own Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam. LM and LC were furious that there were no Fitzwilliam heirs to inherit the earldom. Richard was leaving the country for the war right after the funeral and they reasoned that he could be killed in battle. They were further disgusted that Matlock’s eldest son, the viscount, had yet to have any children. If there were no Fitzwilliam heirs, then the earldom would naturally fall to their sister’s son Darcy according to the reminder that allowed it to go through the female line with a legitimate male heir. Lady C declared Darcy’s “progeny will be the future Lord Matlock over my dead body.” Oh, dear.

“Babies come with the power of love to create their own world in our hearts and in the universe.” –ApolloM

This is a MUST read JAFF and is so very different than what we usually see. The cadence and the language used between ODC were simply amazing. True to her intelligence and wit, Elizabeth quickly came to understand Darcy in a way we don’t normally see in her character. Usually, there is forced angst where the reader has to suffer several chapters [if not half the book] before Elizabeth suddenly realizes she was wrong and they make nice. Not so here. Our dear author led us quickly toward an understanding with rational logic that even Elizabeth could appreciate. Normally, Darcy has a habit of withholding information and brooding in a bottle… not here. He quickly saw and understood that Elizabeth would not tolerate nor respond well to such behavior. She was smart, his equal in intelligence and understanding, and would react negatively to any other approach. Darcy answered all questions with honesty even when his answers hurt. Mr. Bennet of Longbourn had secrets of which his family had no knowledge and Elizabeth was devastated to learn the truth of their situation. Darcy had acted honorably and perhaps saved her family with his actions. She would have never known otherwise. What type of man had she married?

This style of writing was amazing. It was minimalistic in nature and yet conveyed a plethora of information in its delivery and intensity. Even if the reader didn’t have a basic knowledge of P&P, they could still read this and not be lost. What background was needed was quickly provided via letters, a quick discussion, or a character in retrospection. This was amazing. The first letter set Darcy in motion and he didn’t stop the remainder of the story.

This is a [NSNG] not-so-nice Georgiana story as well. She was such a little snot with her actions toward Elizabeth. Well, guess what, little miss? Elizabeth Darcy née Bennet grew up with two younger sisters just like you. Elizabeth knows exactly what to do in order to handle you. Bet you didn’t expect her to call you on your actions… huh? And in front of your brother. Serves you right you little snit. Oh, and one more thing, “I hate you” doesn’t fly either. So, get over yourself and grow up.

As the title suggests… there is a baby involved. And Darcy and Elizabeth have to decide what to do in order to keep him and his nurse safe from the dastardly machinations of Lord Matlock and Lady Catherine. We soon learn that Richard has been captured and held prisoner in France. The French allow him to receive mail with the hopes of trinkets and or money [which they pilfer]. Richard finally received sketches of Mrs. Milford—Mansfield with Jem and a lock of his hair. I wanted to weep with him.

This was an Elizabeth we can all love. She was spunky, intelligent, and not swayed by the drama of the Fitzwilliam family. Good grief, she grew up with Mrs. Bennet, for goodness’ sake. She could handle an out-of-control Lord and his supercilious sister. OMG! I keep going back to that scene where they tried to intimidate Elizabeth and… oh, I can’t say. I will just read it again… excuse me. Please read this.
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Author 29 books213 followers
October 25, 2019
Joy Dawn King reaches new heights with this book. Delicious angst and lovely romance balance perfectly in my favorite of all her books! Slow burn romance, misunderstandings by honest people who are smart enough to talk them through, and sacrifices made out of love and honor make this a thrilling read. If you already love Joy Dawn King, this will become your new favorite, too! If you haven’t fallen in love with her yet... but who am I kidding? Everyone loves JDK!
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1,432 reviews
November 3, 2019
Great story, definitely rereadable

Lots of bad guys in the story.

Wickham being a pain in the behind to the Darcys. Not much of a bad guy though. Cunning but stupid.

Lady Catherine is really loud, really mean and is willing to take brawlers with her to enforce her edicts. In the end though she is a woman so she doesn’t count.

Lord Matlock. A full fledged Earl and is not stupid. Used to throwing around his power. He is THE monster in this horror movie.

The story was 4.5 stars. There were a few places I found it unbelievable. The writing was A1. I love the authors writing style.

Lord Matlock is way stronger than any of the good guys but since evils characters are always without trusted supporters, no honor among thieves, the myriad of good actions from all the good guys finally saves the day.

I recommend the book highly.
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1,680 reviews79 followers
November 16, 2019
5+ stars

This book is an angst-filled gem with a totally original storyline. I don't think I had any fingernails left by the time I finished reading it the first time.

We start with Elizabeth Bennet as a VERY unhappy bride. Mr. Darcy has "bought" her, with Mr. Bennet agreeing and signing the marriage settlement papers. She does not take kindly to being treated like chattel, especially when it chains her to the haughty, unlikable Mr. Darcy for life. Naturally, her displeasure is evident, and Darcy is taken aback when he discovers how much she loathes him. Her opinion of him sinks even lower when he stops at an inn outside Meryton to pick up a lovely young woman and a baby.

It doesn't take long for her misconceptions regarding his character to be corrected, but these scenes kick off a plot that has Mr. and the new Mrs. Darcy facing harrowing challenges as they work together to protect news of the existence and identity of the baby from becoming known. Mr. Wickham is only a minor player here - the primary evildoers are Lady Catherine deBourgh and Lord Matlock, Darcy's maternal aunt and uncle. Colonel Fitzwilliam, on deployment to France fighting Napoleon's army, is dealing with life-threatening problems of his own.

It has the feel of an action movie. At one point, Darcy's in danger of being hanged for kidnapping, Elizabeth is being "escorted" to face Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam is imprisoned in France, and Mrs. Milford (an important new character) is on a perilous journey with baby Jem. YIKES!!

The romance is lovely, too. In sharing such serious adversities, Elizabeth and Darcy develop a scorching chemistry. What I particularly love is that these difficulties are true obstacles rather than simple misconceptions about each other... at least once we get past the first couple of chapters. It's tense melodrama that never feels manufactured.

Ms. King's writing engages the reader completely. I was thoroughly invested in these characters and their fates, and the tension just kept building and building. At one point, it seems things for Darcy are on the verge of being fixed, and then... whoosh!... carpet is pulled out from under him - and the reader.

This is a book that definitely earns a spot on my "2019-great-books" GoodReads shelf!
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1,224 reviews60 followers
August 11, 2024
Listening to this as an audiobook, I am still struck with how quickly E finds herself in love with D. However, it really isn't the bulk of the story.
The drama and intrigue doesn't let up and creates a highly engaging read/listen!

While I am not a fan of characters falling in love so quickly in a story, or of Mr. B's behavior, this was a good read. The story was driven and had lots of action and drama to offer.
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1,333 reviews78 followers
March 22, 2021
Another gem by J. Dawn King!
Reviewed in Canada on October 26, 2019
This will be one of my favorites for this author to date. I loved the story. Very well written. There’s angst, but not the overwhelming kind. Some very touching emotional moments. Highly recommend.

March 21-22, 2021 - Audiobook
This still remains my favourite J. Dawn King book. Stevie Zimmerman does a fabulous narration for the audiobook.
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Author 24 books158 followers
November 28, 2019
Action-packed thriller

Although this was an action-packed thriller, it was not excruciatingly angsty but had plenty of suspense. The story had an undertow that made me feel that everything would be well in the end, despite the dire circumstances...

Mr Darcy was on the run with a baby and needed a wife, quickly. He found one but she was perhaps not as welcoming as he had imagined.
They were up against wickedly, evil forces in this fast-paced suspenser, teamwork was crucial...

The plot with the baby was unique and creative. I didn't read any reviews upfront so the plot took me by pleasant surprise and I have never seen anything quite like this before.

Recommend!

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2,147 reviews1 follower
November 26, 2019
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Elizabeth and Darcy get married the day after the Netherfield Ball. He rolls into town after an emergency trip to London, walks in with a special license, and negotiates with Mr Bennet. This is followed by a quick wedding before the other Bennet sisters are even out of bed. Imagine Elizabeth's surprise for the whole topic but then a woman with a small baby get in the carriage as well. What a start!!!

Elizabeth must learn about this man that she married and also the baby situation. Much of it is rooted in the evil that is Earl Matlock and Lady Catherine. Luckily our dear couple finds their way as they try to protect their young charge. There is a lot of angst, lots of betrayal and lots of love. This is a great story that I could not put down.
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471 reviews13 followers
October 27, 2022
Wow great read

I loved this book and the twists and turns were awesome, I could barely keep up. The beginning was a pageturner, but as the book got almost half way I couldn't believe what was happening. Lord matlock was a Seine and lady Catherine worse. The Bennett's except Mary and Jane horrible.!! Wow can't wait to read it again slowly.!!
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970 reviews4 followers
January 1, 2020
I enjoyed this book but kept wondering why Col Fitzwilliam didn't take care of everything by himself all along. Plus, and I can't believe I am thinking this, I missed Jane!
899 reviews70 followers
March 29, 2020

What an adventure! What a ride!

In the early morning hours just after the Netherfield Ball, Elizabeth Bennet is quickly married to the proud, taciturn Mr. Darcy! She had just refused Mr. Collins and was supported by her father in her refusal. Why hours later, would he demand she marry Mr. Darcy? And, before leaving Meryton, they stop at the inn for Mr. Darcy to escort a young woman and an infant into a second carriage? Is she his mistress and their child? So many questions and so few answers.

"How had everything she had thought was right with her world have gone so completely wrong?" (quote from the book)

But this is only the beginning! The intrigue, manipulations, fears and cover-ups keep coming. How could this be happening? How can Mr. and Mrs. Darcy come together as a united couple?

Dear Reader, how can one not melt at the sight of Mr. Darcy holding an infant? You are in for a treat when you read their story. Despite the surplus of villains in this story, Elizabeth Darcy is a force to be reckoned with. She is woman who rises at every attempt to intimidate her.

"Her eyes shot from her husband's lips to his eyes. what she read there was...it was heartrending. Pain of loss melded with awe. Joy mixed with wonder. Behind it all was a love so intense it hurt Elizabeth to see it. This man would be a fierce protector, a warrior." (quote from the book)

Be prepared for the anguish, the pain, the deviousness of those who will stop at nothing to gain their goals. Be prepared for quick wit, cleverness and ultimate joy!
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237 reviews2 followers
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October 28, 2019
Ohmygoodness!!! Honestly that adorable baby on the cover sold this book to me more than anything 😍😍😍😭
I mean LOOK AT HIM!!!
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757 reviews21 followers
November 11, 2019
3.25 stars. Contains spoilers.

I began reading this Pride and Prejudice variation with certain expectations about the type of story it would be, because of the title and cover image. If you pick up this book thinking it will be a sweet and innocent story, let me tell you it is not, though there is definitely a focus here on a baby and on his care.

Please note, many of my problems with this novel are personal preference. What I dislike about it may be exactly what another reader is looking for. The plot moves along, and the writing itself, the putting of words together, is skillful. My biggest disappointments are with the premise of the story and the characters, and that I personally found it a little too black and white in its approach. Those are again mostly matters of preference.

The characters seem extremely polarized, in that each seems to be either an angel or a devil, some of the devils quite monstrous and some of the angels too good to be true. I don't find most of them convincing.

The villains seem way out there, and I don't understand most of their motivations. Why go to such extremes to keep a title from going extinct but at the same time cast the family name into the flames by causing a huge scandal against one of its members, in fact the most valid member? But then the good guys rarely make sense in this story either.

I have trouble believing the colonel would voluntarily go off to the war just then, and he did seem to have a choice. Since that's the point the story jumps off from, it starts off on a shaky premise, for me.

Darcy's lecture to Georgiana on truth-telling seems hypocritical, given that at the time he's concealing a huge secret from her, cloaked in a lie, buried under a scandal that could affect her. Even though the motivations are quite different, with a real teenager I don't think it would be so easy for her to accept the truth when it came time to reveal it.

The save at the end felt too Deus ex machina for me.

Recommended for its entertainment value, with all the above caveats. It's a fast read, and that was what I wanted at the time. It is an intriguing story that deals with some heavy subject matter, and in a sense brings to vivid life the problem of vulnerable human beings being considered commodities, or even disposable, by those who only care about money, position, or power. In that respect it's as much a reflection on our modern era as on the Regency era, though there is more melodrama here than profundity.
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14 reviews4 followers
July 13, 2020
The book had wonderful plot twists and had the perfect conclusion. :) I do not believe I can say more without giving away all the juicy details! The book is definitely worth the read and like her other books I see it becoming a great favorite to reread in the future.
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997 reviews345 followers
October 23, 2020
What If Mr. Darcy Needed to Care for a Baby?

Rating: 4 out of 5 stars

Source: Review Copy from Author


TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

TIME FRAME: Begins at the Netherfield Ball and progresses 3 months following (plus epilogue)

SYNOPSIS: Mr. Darcy’s life takes an abrupt turn when he is given guardianship of a newborn and asked to: protect this child, hide its true identity from others, and treat him as his own. Not knowing how long this very important responsibility is assigned him, Darcy feels his first order of business is to marry. And since his head has already been full of Elizabeth Bennet for weeks, he knows just the lady with whom he wants to share this urgent and intricate assignment. But what happens when Darcy learns his new wife has a decidedly poor opinion of him? What happens when the baby’s identity is discovered? How can Darcy protect his little family when he faces some extreme trials and tribulations?!?

WHAT I LOVED:

- Shocking and Sinister: What a premise! This story starts off like no other with Darcy taking on the protection and care of a child and marrying an unwilling Elizabeth Bennet the very next day! It was a most gripping and consuming adventure! I knew from the very first chapter the course of this journey would be anything but smooth – and I was eagerly anticipating all the bumps and thorny situations we would see play out. I loved the originality and uniqueness of this premise. I don’t think I’ve seen Darcy and his family in a situation quite like this before!

- Baby Jem: Oh my goodness! What a sweet baby and what a lovely opportunity to see Mr. Darcy be adorable, gentle, and unequivocally swoon-worthy! His scenes with little Jem were my favorite up until Jem encountered another relation and they shared some of the most precious and heart-seizing moments together. What a sweet dear this child is, I loved having him be such a prominent character in this tale!

- Heartwarming Relationships: There are some sweetly developed relationships both past and present in this novel. I loved learned about some characters’ loving and devoted marriages, witnessing the emerging relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth, and seeing the friendships between both Elizabeth and Georgiana and Elizabeth and Mrs. Mansfield (who serves as Jem’s wet-nurse). In addition, I particularly enjoyed seeing Mrs. Mansfield and one other character share a special relationship as well. Not all relationships developed at the same speed or with the same ease, but all were heartfelt and satisfying to observe.

- Shocking Twists: Not only does this story begin with shocking twists…it ends that way too! What delicious fun Ms. King must’ve had throwing us some unexpected curve balls at the end! I most definitely did not see any of them coming and was completely entranced by all the high drama, revelations, and surprising developments! What a roller coaster ride! Well done, Ms. King!

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

- Hasty yet Smooth: I LOVE stories that have Darcy and Elizabeth marry before they come to an understanding or in a forced marriage scenario. And this story starts off with them marrying so early and for such unique reasons. I was looking forward to seeing all the steps their relationship would take as they grow and learn to understand each other, and some of the drawbacks to them marrying unexpectedly. But their relationship progressed smoothly and easily. I would have loved to see Darcy and Elizabeth experience a little more of an adjustment period for their new marriage, but I think that the reason we don’t see that is because the tension and drama was already coming from other angles in this story.

- Suspension of Disbelief: There are a lot of steps Ms. King had characters take to set her story and premise in motion and make it work. She capably pulls it off, but there are some moments and actions that can give you pause and raise some questions. It is probably best not to follow those lines of questions and instead just suspend your disbelief for this tale and enjoy the ride.

CONCLUSION:

A Baby for Mr. Darcy is a riveting and touching tale that places sinister schemes, intensifying family drama, and heartwarming relationships all around the existence of a sweet child. I applaud J. Dawn King for her endless creativity in crafting such unique and surprising adventure for Darcy and Elizabeth!!

Austenesque Reviews
363 reviews8 followers
September 1, 2022
My entire review could be considered a spoiler so I'm warning anyone reading this right now.

Whenever I'm reading a Joy King book I feel like I'm reading my most favorite, until the next one I pick up and then that one is my favorite. She has given us some fantastically unique tales.

I highly recommend this to all JAFF fans, but I think you could easily enjoy this with no prior knowledge of Pride and Prejudice.
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1,020 reviews7 followers
October 29, 2019
Absolutely wonderful and this book must have the cutest cover ever. A great way to spend A few hours.
Will return again and again.
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273 reviews4 followers
July 4, 2020
The book was a very fast read but I did enjoy it immensely. I am glad Elizabeth was able to recognize right away how wrong she had been in her judgment of Mr Darcy, Mr Bennet and Mr Wickham. I also enjoyed the way Mr Darcy was able to swallow his pride and get rid of his arrogance and aloofness and was able to meet his new wife's forthrightness with his own truthfulness so they could build a solid foundation for their marriage and be able to battle the the false accusations and preservere against the injustice. I am glad Mr Wickham, Hugh Fitzwilliam, Earl of Matlock and Lady Catherine got their just desserts.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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1,163 reviews9 followers
June 7, 2022
I LOVE P&P, it is one of my all time favorites. Therefore, I’m not sure why it never occurred to me that like so many of my other classics their would exist a seemingly endless supply of variations, re-tellings, &/or fan-fiction on the subject. I’m not at all embarrassed when I say this is consecutive variation novel number 15.
While I did enjoy number 15, I didn’t feel as though it was quite as centered around romance as other variations or even the original itself. However, perhaps it’s safer to say the others can only be categorized as romance whereas this novel was both romance & ….maybe a crime drama? I wouldn’t go so far as to call it a thriller & neither is it a mystery. However, I did feel like the romance took a backseat here to the unfolding plots, secrets, betrayals & machinations of those set out against the Darcy’s.
I will say with each variation I read it’s always fun to see which characters will turn up as an antagonist or even a villain. Thus far in my reading very few characters have been safe from being turned into antagonists. In fact, the ones in this book are sure to surprise & infuriate you. However, it likewise goes the opposite way too; characters who were previously relegated to the background or were previously antagonists themselves are given entirely new roles.
I will say due to this books altered focus we do miss out on a lot of characters & character interaction normally seen. For instance, I don’t think Charlotte was even a character in this book.
….I know that’s a weird place to end my review & I did have more to it, but GR glitched & erased the rest of it. So this will have to suffice.
55 reviews1 follower
October 26, 2019
One of her best yet!

In my opinion, this is one of Ms. King's best books yet that I have read. I honestly didn't want to put it down until I discovered all the twists and turns. Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock were a royal mess with all the conniving they pulled not just on Darcy, Colonel Fitwilliam, and his brother, but also what they pulled on each other. They just didn't seem to have a conscience.
I'm not saying that this is the best Ms. King has ever written, but it is one of my favorites by her.
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352 reviews8 followers
February 4, 2024
This was way more entertaining than I thought it would be! Enjoyed listening to this audiobook.
1,391 reviews4 followers
October 27, 2019
Great, intriguing, well done

This story has a little of everything. Darcy and Elizabeth choose a path that was hard, but worth the effort. Even in the form of Wickham, Lady Catherine, and Lord Matlock. You will enjoy this greatly
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303 reviews
June 4, 2020
My first impression was mild distaste at the attempts at Austen prose but which only comes across as false and much too modern. The story itself just couldn't hold me. I pressed on till the end because of the glowing reviews but the longer I read, the more my bafflement at the utter ridiculousness of the tale grew.

(Mild spoilers ahead)
The story has so many strange plotholes. I have a million questions. At the top of those concerns are those about the author's ideas about succession and inheritance as well as their judicial system and what exactly constitutes acceptable behavior for gentry in that time period. I also wasn't delighted with what the author did to the few minor characters that made it into the book. Abigail was a nice addition but her character wasn't really fleshed out long enough to make an impact.

Furthermore, I just cannot understand why the baby's father didn't retire before his marriage or at least legally settle the guardianship of his child before departure thereby nullifying all the hullabaloo that followed in the book.

It was so silly that even the sweet moments with our dear couple made me roll my eyes at times.

It was eventful though, I'll give you that. I wouldn't necessarily recommend it unless you are a fan of this author's style.
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340 reviews25 followers
July 29, 2020
Sadly DNFed at 61%.

The earlier part of the book held promise, but as soon as Darcy was arrested, I just got too annoyed to continue.


Maybe all these things are addressed later on, but the fact it even got so far as an arrest was irritating me, and I listened as long as I could before I lost patience, I'm afraid.
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652 reviews32 followers
December 17, 2019
This is my favorite J. Dawn King book! It was so sweet and tender yet full of adventure and suspense. Lots of exciting and unexpected twists and turns. Lady C and Lord Matlock are pure evil in this one and Lizzy's family isn't much better as they basically sell her to Darcy for financial security. ODC have some tremendous obstacles to overcome after a rocky start of things, but the adversity unites them establishes a strong and solid foundation that they will need to endure the difficulties they must face, at least they face them together! Loved this book!
91 reviews1 follower
December 1, 2019
An Adventure

In this story Fitzwilliam Darcy temporarily has the child of someone else, his cousin Richard Fitzwilliam. The premise of this story is unbelievable as is most of the plot. The story felt contrived and did not fit together or flow well. The plot just wasn’t very good. Most of the characters behaved in a way that did not fit the regency period. I wouldn’t waste my time on this story.
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