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The Boyfriend Diaries #1
Mommy's Ex
The doctor's growly, gorgeous, and totally off-limits.
George Pappanapolis is a Greek physician looking to stay in the United States. He's angling for a green card by getting married to the vivacious blonde Victoria ...
... but Victoria has a daughter.
Kayla's nothing like her mom. She's sassy, curvy, and utterly irresistible. She gives as good as she gets, and suddenly George finds himself in a whirlwind of confusion when it comes to his family life.
This short story is a steamy tale filled with an OTT alpha male and a feisty curvy girl with a strong will. No cheating, no cliffhangers, and always an HEA!
George Pappanapolis is a Greek physician looking to stay in the United States. He's angling for a green card by getting married to the vivacious blonde Victoria ...
... but Victoria has a daughter.
Kayla's nothing like her mom. She's sassy, curvy, and utterly irresistible. She gives as good as she gets, and suddenly George finds himself in a whirlwind of confusion when it comes to his family life.
This short story is a steamy tale filled with an OTT alpha male and a feisty curvy girl with a strong will. No cheating, no cliffhangers, and always an HEA!
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First published October 24, 2019
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December 9, 2019
This was just one big what the fuck. I'm all for taboo stories, and was super excited when I saw this one. But hot damn was this one not my cup of tea. I don't know if I read something different from the other reviewers, but this wasn't it at all.
The writing style was super repetitive and several times the same thing was said over and over--like we get it fam. And I'm sorry but who in the world can take that much their first time with anal sex? For a doctor, our hero should have known better. I wished the sex was better, and that their was an actual build up to the relationship rather than it being wam-bam. There was no connection between any of the characters and I had a hard time connecting with any of them because we never got a chance to grow with them.
And if those things weren't enough-- as a bisexual female myself, I didn't appreciate how the story depicted the mother:
Bisexuals and lesbians are two very different orientations. Just because a bisexual is with another women, does not make them lesbians or lesbian fantasies. This isn't the only instance that rubbed me the wrong way and the only reason I didn't DNF was because the book is only 50ish pages long, and I was basically almost done.
The writing style was super repetitive and several times the same thing was said over and over--like we get it fam. And I'm sorry but who in the world can take that much their first time with anal sex? For a doctor, our hero should have known better. I wished the sex was better, and that their was an actual build up to the relationship rather than it being wam-bam. There was no connection between any of the characters and I had a hard time connecting with any of them because we never got a chance to grow with them.
And if those things weren't enough-- as a bisexual female myself, I didn't appreciate how the story depicted the mother:
"This is a marriage of convenience, where he gets a green card and she gets a lifestyle upgrade. Not only that, but my mom is likely bisexual, and is using this opportunity to explore her lesbian fantasies, probably with George's approval."
Bisexuals and lesbians are two very different orientations. Just because a bisexual is with another women, does not make them lesbians or lesbian fantasies. This isn't the only instance that rubbed me the wrong way and the only reason I didn't DNF was because the book is only 50ish pages long, and I was basically almost done.
March 15, 2021
Meh. Maybe a full review to come? Don't know. It was a freebie on Amazon and thought I'd get a quick and steamy read. It was quick, but it did nothing for me. It wasn't awful and I did laugh at a few parts. Maybe not the parts that were meant to get a chuckle. Sadly the writing was . . . repetitive and uninspired. The sex scene did nothing for me, and the taboo aspect of it was left to do ALL the heavy lifting. I was actually more interested in the lead's mom's sexual life. These kind of reads should give you goose bumps along with . . . other feelings. Nope. Nothing. Uninspired and honestly very boring. It is a skill to pull a reader into a story like this and make you FEEL. So hats off to the all the amazing authors' works I've read before that nail it. *winks*
November 23, 2019
A bit disappointed
I’ve read this author before and that book was smoking hot so I thought this would be too. It kinda fell flat. They only had anal sex in the book, which was ok but there was also no sense of claiming and connection. And it would have been sexier and more taboo had her ex stepdad claimed her virginity for himself, which he doesn’t. Just meh.
I’ve read this author before and that book was smoking hot so I thought this would be too. It kinda fell flat. They only had anal sex in the book, which was ok but there was also no sense of claiming and connection. And it would have been sexier and more taboo had her ex stepdad claimed her virginity for himself, which he doesn’t. Just meh.
January 3, 2020
Mommy’s ex is book one in the boyfriend diaries series. This story is short, fast paced and a quick read. I read this book in one sitting and was satisfied throughout. I found the writing style easy to follow, the characters likeable and the storyline entertaining. Kayla isn’t surprised when her mother turns up with another new boyfriend. What she is shocked by is their quick engagement and marriage. Kayla can’t help but be attracted to her mom’s new husband. George is a successful daughter. As a Greek, he needed to marry for a green card, that is where Kayla’s mother comes in. George knows it is wrong but he is attracted to his new stepdaughter. Four years later and George is divorced but still sharing a house with his ex wife and stepdaughter. When Kayla returns from college, sparks fly between Kayla and George, will they finally give into their desires?
The chemistry between George and Kayla is clear to see and I liked them as a couple.
I really liked the ending and the epilogue for this story.
The storyline for this book is easy to follow and it is an enjoyable read.
The chemistry between George and Kayla is clear to see and I liked them as a couple.
I really liked the ending and the epilogue for this story.
The storyline for this book is easy to follow and it is an enjoyable read.
April 11, 2022
3/5 STARS. They had one scene together before her mom and George got married as a marriage of convenience. Kayla’s mother got married to George the same day they met. George and Kayla desired each other but neither made a physical move towards each other. Kayla would always tempt him especially after the divorce. One day after 4 years of them all living together Kayla is playing with a vibrator and she gets it stuck and deicides to ask George for help and he does. Soon help turns into full on back door sex to help her reach an orgasm to get the toy out and during that time they say their I love yous and shit and I was like woah that’s way to early but it’s been 4 years of conversations and feelings so I get it. Sort of. In the epilogue they get married and turns out Kayla’s mother Victoria is gay or bisexual idk.
SMUT: 3/5 Only back door is shown.
SMUT: 3/5 Only back door is shown.
December 20, 2019
Awful
The whole book was repetitive and going on and on about things that had nothing to do with the story. I doubt I will purchase another book by this author!
The whole book was repetitive and going on and on about things that had nothing to do with the story. I doubt I will purchase another book by this author!
December 31, 2019
When she's 16, Kayla's mother, Victoria, marries George, a Greek doctor, so he can stay in the country. It's totally a marriage of convenience, but Kayla is uncomfortable because of her own attraction to George. There's not much to worry about as it turns out, since they hardly ever see each other and he and her mother divorce after his green card comes through. But four years later, when Kayla comes home from college, she has a little problem that needs a doctor's attention and George and Kayla finally realize that the attraction is completely mutual.
What the what? I read this because it seemed kinky, smutty and short and played an interesting little "all-in-the-family" dynamic. In execution, this just didn't work. First of all, for me, smut must be at least somewhat plausible. And this had me rolling my eyes like crazy. First of all, Kayla loses a 2-inch vibrator in her vagina. So I'm suspending disbelief for a moment. Well she can't fish it out and doesn't have the thought to google it like everyone else would. So she seeks out hot and sexy, older, former step-father, George. He doesn't suggest she simply squat and push (because that would definitely do it)...so let's assume he skipped his female anatomy classes. He goes digging for it and can't even touch it. How the fuck long is this girl's vagina anyway? Or are his fingers spectacularly short? So he suggests the only way to get it out is to have anal sex with him...then when she cums, it'll just pop out. So he shoves his virgin ex-stepdaughter down on to his 10-inch cock for her first anal sex experience, she starts out of the blue calling him "daddy" and she comes (of course), and out that little vibrator pops. Then they're shouting out their love for one another (after spending 10 whole minutes together ) and they're celebrating their marriage in the epilogue at the same tacky Vegas chapel he married her mother in.
So this had some sexiness factor, which is why we're at 2 stars, but the ridiculously contrived situation, the Daddy kink, the fact that we jump straight into anal sex, they never even kiss and then they suddenly "love" each other? These are all too much for me to handle.
What the what? I read this because it seemed kinky, smutty and short and played an interesting little "all-in-the-family" dynamic. In execution, this just didn't work. First of all, for me, smut must be at least somewhat plausible. And this had me rolling my eyes like crazy. First of all, Kayla loses a 2-inch vibrator in her vagina. So I'm suspending disbelief for a moment. Well she can't fish it out and doesn't have the thought to google it like everyone else would. So she seeks out hot and sexy, older, former step-father, George. He doesn't suggest she simply squat and push (because that would definitely do it)...so let's assume he skipped his female anatomy classes. He goes digging for it and can't even touch it. How the fuck long is this girl's vagina anyway? Or are his fingers spectacularly short? So he suggests the only way to get it out is to have anal sex with him...then when she cums, it'll just pop out. So he shoves his virgin ex-stepdaughter down on to his 10-inch cock for her first anal sex experience, she starts out of the blue calling him "daddy" and she comes (of course), and out that little vibrator pops. Then they're shouting out their love for one another (after spending 10 whole minutes together ) and they're celebrating their marriage in the epilogue at the same tacky Vegas chapel he married her mother in.
So this had some sexiness factor, which is why we're at 2 stars, but the ridiculously contrived situation, the Daddy kink, the fact that we jump straight into anal sex, they never even kiss and then they suddenly "love" each other? These are all too much for me to handle.
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September 29, 2021
Gah, what did i just read? I was looking for something short and fun, as i just read a something recently in this type of genre. However this one has indeed put me in a spot of actually giving something 1 star, the premise of it was not the best and the dirty deeds i would call it was actually not the greatest either.
I do not have much to say for it as i just did not care/like it and not many pages to go off of. Just fast pace and not what i was look forward to be reading. Kinda wished it was a bit different.
I do not have much to say for it as i just did not care/like it and not many pages to go off of. Just fast pace and not what i was look forward to be reading. Kinda wished it was a bit different.
October 24, 2019
I enjoyed this quick, fun and naughty read. Sinfully steamy, Kayla and George's story offers a enticing blend of heat, heart and tension. I highly recommend this book to readers that are fans of the forbidden romance trope. It is also an excellent choice if you need a palate cleanser or want something that is not a time commitment. This is my independent, impartial review.
October 27, 2019
A quick and to the point read. A little drama and a some big time romance. Pretty mild in my opinion compared to Law's other books. But regardless I did like it.
George had a plan on how to stay in the states. And with a little money, the world is his oyster.
Kayla is tired of all the guys her mom parades around. But something is definitely different about this one....
George had a plan on how to stay in the states. And with a little money, the world is his oyster.
Kayla is tired of all the guys her mom parades around. But something is definitely different about this one....
October 23, 2019
ARC review For honest review Kayla mom Victoria works at the silver showdown as a cocktail waitress in Vegas and brings home a man George pappsnspolis a Greek doctor needing a visa now 4 yrs later back from college kayla needs his help . Funny and very cute steamy.
October 27, 2019
This is the 1st book in a new series, and what an introduction this is. George is Greek and need a green card to stay in US, so he marries Victoria, which is all very well until he meets her daughter Kayla. This is a good short story with an older man / younger woman scenario. I recommend for all.
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April 4, 2023
This story was more than just a little unrealistic. A Greek doctor who was in the US in order to practice medicine needed to get married in order to procure a green card so that he didn't get deported. The woman he married was the mother to the FMC (who was a teenager at the time). Both the MMC and the FMC had a secret desire for the other, but neither succumbed to it while the MMC was married to the FMCs mother. Fast forward four years and the FMC was a college student and the MMC was now divorced from her mother.
With the FMC home for a short visit from college, she had an...ahem...issue that she needed her medical ex-stepfather to help her with and, once he had agreed to do so, they became intimate in order to...ahem...correct the problem.
At one point, the MMC thought the FMC must be at least 20 now, but then a few paragraphs later, his thought was that she was at least 22. There were quite a few inconsistencies such as this in the short novella.
This was one of the fastest-paced novellas I've ever read. It happened so fast that it didn't leave room for well, anything. The drama and angst were both short-lived. The spicy scene was over faster than it started, and the ending was so flash-in-the-pan that it was astonishing to read the words, "The END". With it being so abrupt, there was nothing really to critique. Therefore, I couldn't give it more than a one-star rating.
With the FMC home for a short visit from college, she had an...ahem...issue that she needed her medical ex-stepfather to help her with and, once he had agreed to do so, they became intimate in order to...ahem...correct the problem.
At one point, the MMC thought the FMC must be at least 20 now, but then a few paragraphs later, his thought was that she was at least 22. There were quite a few inconsistencies such as this in the short novella.
This was one of the fastest-paced novellas I've ever read. It happened so fast that it didn't leave room for well, anything. The drama and angst were both short-lived. The spicy scene was over faster than it started, and the ending was so flash-in-the-pan that it was astonishing to read the words, "The END". With it being so abrupt, there was nothing really to critique. Therefore, I couldn't give it more than a one-star rating.
January 11, 2020
This story is short and sweet. Victoria is Kayla's mom. Victoria is a waitress on the strip. She makes enough money to keep a roof over their heads. George Pappanoplis is a Doctor from Greece here on a Green card Visa, which is about to run out. He meets Victoria and she agrees to marry him and stay married to him until he gets the Green card Visa straightened out. Then they will get a divorce. George is a Doctor who is serious about his job as a doctor and one who does research. From the first time they met Kayla was attracted to George but she still was too young for their to be anything between them happening. He puts them up in his gorgeous house. The house is big enough for them to live on the second floor while he lived on the first floor. He even pays for Kayla's college tuition. She comes home on a break and things happen to finally throw them together and the rest is their story. Good short read.
October 27, 2019
Short, steamy and seductive taboo romance
Kayla’s mother, Victoria works as a cocktail waitress in a small casino in Las Vegas and goes through men like a knife through butter. Her latest conquest is a Greek doctor who wants to remain in the US to continue his research so he needs a marriage of convenience, which he finds with Victoria. But “Dr. Adonis” has eyes for Kayla. Hmmm…
Loved this short and steamy taboo romance. I love the older man, younger woman trope. If you do too, you will find this a very entertaining story. I volunteered to review an ARC of this book and it comes highly recommended.
Kayla’s mother, Victoria works as a cocktail waitress in a small casino in Las Vegas and goes through men like a knife through butter. Her latest conquest is a Greek doctor who wants to remain in the US to continue his research so he needs a marriage of convenience, which he finds with Victoria. But “Dr. Adonis” has eyes for Kayla. Hmmm…
Loved this short and steamy taboo romance. I love the older man, younger woman trope. If you do too, you will find this a very entertaining story. I volunteered to review an ARC of this book and it comes highly recommended.
March 10, 2021
People/places/things that were personally offended by Regina George:
•Middle aged women with varicose veins.
•60 year old men.
•Paunchy people who have Bar mitzvah.
• The drinks that couldn’t possibly be real at Bar Mitzvahs.
•Bar Mitzvahs
•Greece.
•Greek men.
•Greek People
•Women.
•Shows girls.
•Waitresses.
•Bisexuals and Lesbians (phase).
•“Darkly exotic” Sophia.
•Americans. (She made us look asswholes.)
•America. (Current events.)
•Curvy Women (she referred to herself, a curvy girl, as feeling like “a pig on a stick.” But in a good way of course.)
**And that’s all in the 50% mark. I skimmed the rest of the book so I probably missed more.
•Middle aged women with varicose veins.
•60 year old men.
•Paunchy people who have Bar mitzvah.
• The drinks that couldn’t possibly be real at Bar Mitzvahs.
•Bar Mitzvahs
•Greece.
•Greek men.
•Greek People
•Women.
•Shows girls.
•Waitresses.
•Bisexuals and Lesbians (phase).
•“Darkly exotic” Sophia.
•Americans. (She made us look asswholes.)
•America. (Current events.)
•Curvy Women (she referred to herself, a curvy girl, as feeling like “a pig on a stick.” But in a good way of course.)
**And that’s all in the 50% mark. I skimmed the rest of the book so I probably missed more.
April 28, 2020
Sweetest taboo
George is Kayla's Ex but he is exactly that so he is free to and clear. He was attracted to Kayla from the beginning and he was a gentleman about it, he never cross the line even though he suspected that she felt the same way about him. You love who you love and I don't think it should matter who's ex you were ore anything else as long as you are not purposefully getting hurting anyone or breaking the law. The only opinions that matters are the two people in the relationship. This is a very enjoyable read
George is Kayla's Ex but he is exactly that so he is free to and clear. He was attracted to Kayla from the beginning and he was a gentleman about it, he never cross the line even though he suspected that she felt the same way about him. You love who you love and I don't think it should matter who's ex you were ore anything else as long as you are not purposefully getting hurting anyone or breaking the law. The only opinions that matters are the two people in the relationship. This is a very enjoyable read
July 28, 2021
It's horrible
Oy, I knew it would be bad. The lost vibrator was interesting. The anal not so much. Besides an anal orgasm can be rendered manually and isn't as intense as a vaginal one. Both at the same time is always the best way to go, and he didn't even give her a reach around. The reiteration of the whole mom isn't married to him anymore and it was fake anyway is stupid. The hints of teasing before college should have just been a scene. There are better erotica short stories out there.
Oy, I knew it would be bad. The lost vibrator was interesting. The anal not so much. Besides an anal orgasm can be rendered manually and isn't as intense as a vaginal one. Both at the same time is always the best way to go, and he didn't even give her a reach around. The reiteration of the whole mom isn't married to him anymore and it was fake anyway is stupid. The hints of teasing before college should have just been a scene. There are better erotica short stories out there.
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July 29, 2021
It was just an okay story for me. Kayla’s mother marries George so he can stay in the country and continue pursuing his research as a Doctor. However, there is no attraction there. Purely a marriage of convenience.
Kayla goes away to college, comes home to the house that her and her mother share with George, who is now divorced from her mother. When something rather unfortunate happens to Kayla there is one man who can help her and that his George.
This story is a super quick read, has steam, pretty over the top on how George and Kayla’s relationship goes.
Kayla goes away to college, comes home to the house that her and her mother share with George, who is now divorced from her mother. When something rather unfortunate happens to Kayla there is one man who can help her and that his George.
This story is a super quick read, has steam, pretty over the top on how George and Kayla’s relationship goes.
March 17, 2025
George and Victoria married so that he could stay and fulfill his dreams in the US. While he married Victoria, he had feelings for her daughter who was only a teenager at the time. Now she has grown up and he and Victoria have divorced and parted ways. Kayla had decided to stay with George and now those long forgotten feelings are rearing again. Will this be a second chance for George to have the woman of his dreams and a happily ever after with Kayla? I voluntarily agreed to receive an ARC of this book for an honest review.
November 18, 2019
Amazing short story
Amazing short story love the way the characters interact with each other. Kayla feel in love with her mother's older boyfriend which was a marriage of convenience to help him get a green card. George was a doctor learning medicine in USA because Greece was behind in medical technology. He feel in love with Ksyla when he first meet her. Can they be together or will the mother step in between them.
Amazing short story love the way the characters interact with each other. Kayla feel in love with her mother's older boyfriend which was a marriage of convenience to help him get a green card. George was a doctor learning medicine in USA because Greece was behind in medical technology. He feel in love with Ksyla when he first meet her. Can they be together or will the mother step in between them.
March 13, 2021
Just so immature
I really wanted to like this book as a quick fast read, and it was that. But this book wasn’t even able to use adult terminology. For heavens sake her @$$ was called her back door. Are we in second grade? I think not. A great plot, was destroyed by horrific terms.
I really wanted to like this book as a quick fast read, and it was that. But this book wasn’t even able to use adult terminology. For heavens sake her @$$ was called her back door. Are we in second grade? I think not. A great plot, was destroyed by horrific terms.
June 29, 2021
Teenage love for stepfather
Liked this because Kayla was intrigued by her stepfather but they never acted on their desires until he was divorced from her mother so they no longer had any legal ties. Kayla had always
Had feelings for her stepdad now since her little accident she needs his help to remove her sex toy.
Liked this because Kayla was intrigued by her stepfather but they never acted on their desires until he was divorced from her mother so they no longer had any legal ties. Kayla had always
Had feelings for her stepdad now since her little accident she needs his help to remove her sex toy.
April 24, 2023
This was a quick read. Age difference and the dude is rich af. As always erotica is for the bitches who’s horny.
First: why the hell is name is pappap- something i don’t remember how to spell it.
Second: she was horny while there’s a sex toy up her vagina? I wouldn’t be horny at all BECAUSE THERES A MENTAL UP HER VAGGIE.
Third: GIRL PREGNANT ALREADY???? Wow okay i guess.
First: why the hell is name is pappap- something i don’t remember how to spell it.
Second: she was horny while there’s a sex toy up her vagina? I wouldn’t be horny at all BECAUSE THERES A MENTAL UP HER VAGGIE.
Third: GIRL PREGNANT ALREADY???? Wow okay i guess.
December 11, 2019
Could've done without the product placement
The story is pretty good, the writing is decent, but the little in-story product placement/ads for the Kindle, some other author, a book series, etc., were jarring and unnecessary.
The story is pretty good, the writing is decent, but the little in-story product placement/ads for the Kindle, some other author, a book series, etc., were jarring and unnecessary.
January 29, 2020
Dirty-Hot!
Sizzle on a frying pan. Want to bend and crackle like bacon? Want to wiggle like a flopping fish?Want to writhe in desire while squeezing your own personal toy? Buy this book.YUM 😋!
Sizzle on a frying pan. Want to bend and crackle like bacon? Want to wiggle like a flopping fish?Want to writhe in desire while squeezing your own personal toy? Buy this book.YUM 😋!
June 5, 2020
Insta-lust
This was a great quick read. Kayla and George lusted instantly with each. Only to eventually fall in love and realize it 4 years later. This was great for a good, quick read.
This was a great quick read. Kayla and George lusted instantly with each. Only to eventually fall in love and realize it 4 years later. This was great for a good, quick read.
July 19, 2020
Good
This is another good short story. A little unusual but still a good story. Yummy is what you say when picturing George. Wow. Kayla gets that man for the rest of their lives OMG. Thank you for another steamy and hot book.
This is another good short story. A little unusual but still a good story. Yummy is what you say when picturing George. Wow. Kayla gets that man for the rest of their lives OMG. Thank you for another steamy and hot book.
November 4, 2021
Mishap of the Bullet
Kayla & George
These two meet because of Kayla's mom. It is instant lust between them. Four years later George is divorced from Kayla's mother. This hot doctor is in love with his ex stepdaughter. 👨⚕️❤
Kayla & George
These two meet because of Kayla's mom. It is instant lust between them. Four years later George is divorced from Kayla's mother. This hot doctor is in love with his ex stepdaughter. 👨⚕️❤
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