Bermuda Triangle

Atlantis #2

by Greg Donegan (Pseudonym), Bob Mayer

When a nuclear missile is launched from the waters of the Bermuda Triangle, ex-Green Beret Eric Dane must lead a team into the mysterious depths to confront an enemy which has but one objective -- the total annihilation of all life on Earth.

Genres: Science Fiction, Fiction, Thriller, Military Fiction, Fantasy, Action, Suspense

304 pages, Mass Market Paperback

First published May 1, 2000

About the author

Pen name for Bob Mayer.

Reviews

[Scott Gregory · Rating 4 out of 5]

This didn't complete any part of the story at all. I am interested in finding out what is going to happen so I'm moving on to the next book. But I would much rather have had some sort of a ending in this book.

[Brandon Luffman · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was a little torn about how to rate this one. I feel like I need to explain it a bit.

For me, a four star rating is a good book. Five is something I reserve for the absolute best, something that I know I'll go back to and read again someday. But, four is good. Three stars, well, that's for books that aren't really all that good, but aren't something that I actually DISLIKED. Less than that, and it's a book that I really didn't care for.

This should have been a solid four star book. The writing was generally okay. Not spectacular, but I would call it "well-written". However, the editing on this was just terrible. I mean, it is not an exaggeration to say that there was at least one typo (usually several) on every page.

Bob Mayer is a professional. He's got 60 or more books under his belt, both traditionally published and indie. He knows the business and he knows how to do it right. So what the heck is going on here?

I've tried and tried to come up with a rational reason for why this book is so riddled with errors. They range from incorrect spelling to grammatical errors, oddball punctuation, repeated words and phrases - the whole gamut of things a beta reader would find, much less an actual editor. And, again, these were errors that appeared on every page of the book, each one breaking the immersion and taking me out of the story while my brain worked out what he was trying to say instead of what he actually had on the page.

In the end, while I enjoyed the story well enough, I had to decide how I was going to rate this one. I'm still convinced that Bob Mayer, who can score blurbs from the likes of W.E.B. Griffin*, Stephen Coonts, and Terry Brooks, is not the sort to leave a book in such a poorly done state.

However, after giving it careful thought, I came to the conclusion that whatever the reason for the errors in this book, ultimately it is up to Mr. Mayer to make sure that his final product reaches the reader in a polished state. I remain convinced that there's got to be a good reason for it - but that doesn't excuse an author not checking to make sure his book is the best it can be.

Typos happen. I'm a writer, and I know all too well how hard it is to stamp them all out. It's almost impossible to get them all out of a novel-length work. Hell, there's probably at least a few in this review! But the errors in this book were so numerous, it's mind-boggling to imagine there being a first draft in this state, much less a finished release.

I won't let this stop me from trying more of Mr. Mayer's work, but I can't help but wonder what the heck happened to this book.


*An amusing footnote: The errors continued beyond the story into the "also by this author" part, where a blurb from W.E.B. Griffin featured his name spelled incorrectly.

[Lizzie · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story narrative is in the past and the present. The present has too much science. If i wanted to know physics I would get a textbook. The lengthy explanations detract from the story telling. I almost quit my reading but decided to skip those parts and stick to the meat of the story. If only the author had made the same choice.

I wrote the above while I was reading it and my opinion did not change as I continued. I liked the past story portion better than the present.

This book is the 2nd in the series. The first made me feel the same way. The initial plot is exciting, the it becomes bogged down in too much technical information and explanation, then suddenly the ending is there and wrapping up the story. I want a book where my enjoyment is maintained at close to the same level from beginning to end. I will continue the series, but probably not until some future date.

[Margreet Nannenberg · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just like Atlantis, is Atlantis Bermuda Triangle also an exciting sci-fi with fascinating phenomena and 'keep you on the edge of your seat'- happenings.
I also like the characters which the author had created: both the men and women are intelligent and courageous.

Haven't finished it yet, but that won't take long!

[Chris The Lizard from Planet X · Rating 4 out of 5]

Atlantis: Bermuda Triangle is a strong follow-up novel to the first in the series, "Atlantis". This second novel in the series opens with the Dark Ones launching a missile with nuclear warheads against the Mid-Atlantic Ridge. Once again we have a great book full of action, adventure, high tech weapons and past mysteries. Inside the book we follow TWO plot lines, one set in 999 AD and the other set in our own time. Vikings, nuclear powered subs and underwater pyramids are just SOME of the things you'll find within the covers of this great book. Military thriller mixed with ancient civilizations and a evil alien race trying to destroy us. What more can you want?

Bob Mayer has done it again, this book fascinated me from beginning to end. The beauty of this book is that Mayer is giving the reader insight from two different perspectives and from different times. This is an excellent sequel and I do not believe any reader will be disappointed. This book has it all, from military to Norse mythology etc.

The charm of this novel lies in its two very different settings. The Viking era and our modern time are the backgrounds to a fight that has two sides: mankind and an anonymous enemy. It has been an eternal fight - thus the two settings. The switching between the two time levels guarantees pace and thrilling suspense. All those who favor hardcore SF will like the modern time situation with all its technical devices. All those fantasy freaks will enjoy the Vikings and their wandering in a hostile world. The fans of both will be attracted by the successful combination of two genres. This book has made me hungry for more of its kind.


Greg Donegan presents us with a round story that is fully completed and does not necessarily need a sequel. But both books are very good. This one is a trifle better even than the "Bermuda Triangle". What I think very good is that the author does not make the same mistake as many modern SF authors: he does not indulge in painfully long descriptions of technical devices that do not exist, but writes a story for the story's sake. And it is a story full of suspense with characters that are credible and alive. In this book the techno thriller action elements are missing that give such a decisive character to the first book. But here the characters and a well constructed plot take over and make this novel a unique experience. I am waiting for number three now and I am certain that it will be as good as the first two.

Overall, Atlantis: Bermuda Triangle, a fast-paced action story which keeps the reader guessing until the end.

[Steve Pillinger · Rating 2 out of 5]

The basic plot is good, and I could have carried on; but just short of 40% I decided I'd had enough of the amateurish way it was written. There are long stretches of description and explanation by the author, often lacking even the rudimentary disguise of being put in the mouth or thoughts of a character.

From the fact that I could no longer find this version in the GR database—but did>/i> find other versions called Bermuda Triangle by Bob Mayer (who used "Robert Doherty" as a pseudonym), I think this must have been an earlier attempt at this book, now superseded.

Maybe one day I'll try one of the later versions…

[Julian Black · Rating 2 out of 5]

Plagued by the same timeline inconsistencies, technical errors, and one-dimensional characters as its predecessor, 'Atlantis Bermuda Triangle' leaves a dissatisfying taste in the reader's mouth. The storytelling itself, as in the first book, is engaging, but the glaring mistakes and lack of charger development take the reader out of the story again and again. If you're able to overlook these inadequacies, then you'll likely find this a quick and mostly enjoyable read.

[Sophie Chen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Bermuda triangle is the most dangerous place you do not go there you can just read about it and just don't do a 24 hours there this is the most thing just this ocean and Allen test land because it's just dangerous many many things disappeared planes both things everything just please stay safe bye

[RICHARD C MAZZARELLA · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am thoroughly enjoying this

Science fiction but with unique twists! No time travel but the ancient story and characters that lead to this moment. And now the age old battle between darkness and light. Can't put this down. Going for Book 3 now!

[David · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good follow up from first book.

[Robert Lewter · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another great one

Edge of your seat all the way. Start with the first one and read the series. I know I'm doing that.

[Karen Puc · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was very interesting in the story. But I just got lost sometimes because it change like the time and the people they are talking. I kinda got used to it almost at the end of the book.

[Hrishabh · Rating 4 out of 5]

Connecting two time streams in parallel, beautifully written, with real stakes and well thought out dangers with basis in science. A throughly enjoyable read.

[Scott · Rating 1 out of 5]

This book has a horrible story, a stupid plot and cardboard characters. On a cold January day like today, the only thing good for this book is to help start a fire.

[Tim Coleman · Rating 5 out of 5]

A master weaver of tales.

Bob Mayer can weave a tale that is fresh and compelling.
His knowledge of history and grasp of science fiction and military procedures and tactics all come together to create a wonderful and Fresh retelling of "old and at times, seem like worn out, beat you over the head, I'm tired of hearing about it", different perspective on these legends that we have all heard in some worn out form, with a new way of looking at it.
I have read The Nightstalkers Series, Area 51 Series, (all 9 books), and now I am getting ready to start the third installment of the Atlantis Series.
I have read each series from start to finish, and simply could not put them down.
The characters are intriguing, the stories are somewhat familiar, at first...but, soon, the familiar changes, like it should.

[Tamara · Rating 3 out of 5]

There is just something about these books, and this one in particular that makes it hard to get into them. I loved the Area 51 series by this author and that's why I started reading the Atlantis series. Unfortunately I can't quite put my finger on it but these just aren't as good as the Area 51 books. The plot is good and there is plenty of action. The characters have potential but they never quite get flushed out. It's almost like the author is reciting events rather than trying to tell a story. Whatever the reason I just found it hard to make it through this book, which is a shame since I like this author, I like Atlantis and I like paranormal stuff. This book should be the perfect one for me but it just never quite gets off the ground.

[Lee · Rating 4 out of 5]

I am a fan of books on Atlantis and bought the first part in this series a few days back. As I read page after page I realized the mastery of the writer. Bob Mayer glues you to the story that is fast action adrenalin pumping and you would not want to stop reading. So much so that I read both Atlantis and this the second part in one go. The writing is of the quality comparable with great science fiction writers in league of Arthur Clarke. The amount of the technical research that must have followed to write a book like this is duly outstanding. I cannot wait to read the other books in the series. In fact for the first time I have bought all the books in the series

[Frank Peterson · Rating 5 out of 5]

I couldn't wait to begin this second book in the "Atlantis Gate" series. I was completely entranced by the first installment, and this second volume followed in it's footsteps quite admirably. The first volume set the pitch of urgency well up into the "Red-Zone" of "Dire to Catastrophic." This picked up right where the first left off, never easing up on the critical nature of the crisis. I am led to believe that the entire series will follow suit, which means I have some incredibly great "Reads" in my future! I highly recommend this novel to all those who love fast paced, well written Science Fiction.

[Ms. Just One More Book (Kris Miller) · Rating 5 out of 5]

What if the very thing that destroyed Atlantis years ago came back to threaten our world once again? Mayer takes that very 'what if' and runs with it in a very interesting way. Set in two very different time lines, both modern day, and the days of the Vikings. The mysterious 'Shadow' is coming through their gates to try and destroy our world once and for all. In modern times, Foreman once again sends Eric Dane and a woman named Sin Fen to investigate. In the time of the Vikings, a warrior is approached by a priestess to take her on a strange journey. The author manages to yet again blend history, mythology and Sci-fi into a very fast paced and engrossing book.

[Babette · Rating 5 out of 5]

I'm pretty sure that when the author sat down to write this series, he thought "what would trekbette like?" and wrote that story. Part archeological thriller, part apocalyptic thriller... throw in Vikings and time mysteries. I love everything about is this series and cannot recommend it highly enough.

[Ralph · Rating 5 out of 5]

After reading all six Atlantis books this is another Bob Mayer series that I loved. The Atlantis series is similar in style and approach as the Area 51 series where the author blends history with fiction seamlessly. The story line is great fun with the unknowns being slowly revealed over the course of the series into a conclusion that wraps up the series.

[Tyler · Rating 3 out of 5]

A great part two of an exciting and imaginative series. Mixing the past with the present, science and psudo-science, anthropology, physics, navy submarine warfare, mythology, and mystics; the narrative is enough to keep one interested, and doesn't take much effort. I think its a fun and cool series, and I look forward to reading part three.

[Robert Mills · Rating 3 out of 5]

Great read

The problem is that it needs to be rewritten. The book has several instances of words being inserted where the don't belong. I don't know if this was caused by the transfer of the book to Kindle or if the hard copy also contains the same errors. I did enjoy the premise and adventure though.

[R. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great book. I love the way that the writer ties together all of the major mysteries and paranormal events throughout history such as the Bermuda Triangle, Devil's Gate, Crystal Skulls, Ley Lines, etc.

[Mark Bond · Rating 5 out of 5]

Just like the first book in the series, the author keeps us engaged with the characters and the action, mixing historical fact with scientific conjecture. A very good read. Now, if only I had the next instalment!,

[Richard Tolleson · Rating 4 out of 5]

A fairly exciting sequel. Lots of jumping back and forth between ancient times and the present, but it all makes sense.I liked the first book in the series more, but this intrigued me enough to make me read at least one more in the series.

[Michael Martin · Rating 4 out of 5]

With the completion of Atlantis: Bermuda Triangle I knew I was hooked on the series. It is quite interesting reading Atlantis after Area 51. I'm enjoying the spanning of millennia and seeing what we understand as history and legend play different roles in these excellent series.

[John Walkenford · Rating 5 out of 5]

I read these when they first came out long ago. I have forgotten them enough that is is just as good reading them again. I restarted these (and eventually the Area 51 books) so I can read the new Nightstalkers books.

[Ed Tinkertoy · Rating 1 out of 5]

The review I provided for the previous book in this series applies here. The 6 books should have been combined into one or two at most and all of the repetitive stuff eliminated.

[Cathy · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good book even though it needed a good editor in the worst kind of way. Maybe a Kindle edition problem?