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Rise of an Incubus Overlord #1
Incubus Hitman
Demons, ambition, and a whole bunch of murders.
I'm not the bad guy. I'm just tired of being the low-status nobody everyone treats like shit, and I've finally found a way to even the score.
But bonding with an ancient, powerful demon is just the first step. After centuries of inactivity, that demon is at a low ebb.
Turns out, my demon is an Incubus. Guess how he powers back up? That’s right. By seducing women, as many as he can get.
Sounds like fun, but there are complications. Remember when I said I was a low-status nobody?
It’s going to take time, effort, and a whole lot of killing to sort that out.
Fortunately, I’m more than up for the challenge. So maybe that means I am the bad guy after all...
Warning: If you’re looking for Shakespeare, this isn’t it. This is a harem novel, complete with sex, nudity, and a shit-ton of swearing and violence. It makes use of gamelit mechanisms, includes a definite sense of progression, and is intended to be no more than sheer, outrageous, testosterone-fueled fun.
I'm not the bad guy. I'm just tired of being the low-status nobody everyone treats like shit, and I've finally found a way to even the score.
But bonding with an ancient, powerful demon is just the first step. After centuries of inactivity, that demon is at a low ebb.
Turns out, my demon is an Incubus. Guess how he powers back up? That’s right. By seducing women, as many as he can get.
Sounds like fun, but there are complications. Remember when I said I was a low-status nobody?
It’s going to take time, effort, and a whole lot of killing to sort that out.
Fortunately, I’m more than up for the challenge. So maybe that means I am the bad guy after all...
Warning: If you’re looking for Shakespeare, this isn’t it. This is a harem novel, complete with sex, nudity, and a shit-ton of swearing and violence. It makes use of gamelit mechanisms, includes a definite sense of progression, and is intended to be no more than sheer, outrageous, testosterone-fueled fun.
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Published October 25, 2019
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December 1, 2020
I often enjoy batshit crazy books. This book sounded like it would be the fun kind of batshit. However, it was not fun. It was very misogynistic and pandering. The humor was not funny and the characters were all flat and dull.
August 3, 2020
tl/dr - Internally consistent but lacking in character depth, world building and ultimately feeling shallow and unsatisfying. Mild spoilers within the rest of the review...
Credit where it is due, the author has written a four book series that holds together within its own continuum and when you have read all four books then choices made in the earlier books make a touch more sense but this fact sadly does compound the under-developed world building. By the end of book four you still know very little about the city of El Diablo or why this world operates on the legal and illegal status metrics, other than a brief mention of an AI in the first book.
The protagonist of the series, Simon, is little more than a violent bully, lashing out at the world in order to take what he wants because he feels the world owes him for the abuse, ridicule and ill-fortune that characterises his life up until Azrael enters his existence. On the topic of Azrael, I personally dislike how he's seems to be little more than elemental lust and rage, despite him supposedly being an ancient and conniving devil that once threatened Lucifer himself. But this is internally consistent within the world the author has established, with angels and devils being (largely) unchanging in who and what they are.
The ladies of the book really do feel like bit part characters quite often, occasionally coming to the forefront and then blending back into the scenery which is a shame as Rachel's character premise intrigues me and I can't help but feel that more investiture into them would have dramatically fleshed out the scenes and resulting in more investment and engagement from me, the reader.
Spelling and grammar can be a little spotty throughout the books too, occasionally dragging me out of my immersion due to my brain internally screaming at a grievous error.
Honestly, the best part of these books is the cover art... I'm not sure who the artist is but I do like their work.
Credit where it is due, the author has written a four book series that holds together within its own continuum and when you have read all four books then choices made in the earlier books make a touch more sense but this fact sadly does compound the under-developed world building. By the end of book four you still know very little about the city of El Diablo or why this world operates on the legal and illegal status metrics, other than a brief mention of an AI in the first book.
The protagonist of the series, Simon, is little more than a violent bully, lashing out at the world in order to take what he wants because he feels the world owes him for the abuse, ridicule and ill-fortune that characterises his life up until Azrael enters his existence. On the topic of Azrael, I personally dislike how he's seems to be little more than elemental lust and rage, despite him supposedly being an ancient and conniving devil that once threatened Lucifer himself. But this is internally consistent within the world the author has established, with angels and devils being (largely) unchanging in who and what they are.
The ladies of the book really do feel like bit part characters quite often, occasionally coming to the forefront and then blending back into the scenery which is a shame as Rachel's character premise intrigues me and I can't help but feel that more investiture into them would have dramatically fleshed out the scenes and resulting in more investment and engagement from me, the reader.
Spelling and grammar can be a little spotty throughout the books too, occasionally dragging me out of my immersion due to my brain internally screaming at a grievous error.
Honestly, the best part of these books is the cover art... I'm not sure who the artist is but I do like their work.
January 23, 2021
Well this just an addicts need to read something pulp .
It was an easy read but not something extraordinary for me. You want an MC to be bitch ass weak and then grow strong by a system of sort. This book does it and it has a harem element in it. For all your ecchi fans.
Timepass and if you find want something easy to read.
It was an easy read but not something extraordinary for me. You want an MC to be bitch ass weak and then grow strong by a system of sort. This book does it and it has a harem element in it. For all your ecchi fans.
Timepass and if you find want something easy to read.
September 29, 2023
Introduction
In the icy realms of HowlStrom, where the eternal winter reigns supreme, I, Kiba Snowpaw, an alpha male Ice Wolf with the mastery of ice magic, find solace and warmth in the embrace of stories. Amidst the icy spires and frozen lakes, a tale from a world unlike my own, "Incubus Hitman" by Jack Porter, narrated by Steve Marvel, echoes in the silent, snowy expanses of my icy abode.
Basic Plot Summary
The story unfolds in a world where demons and ambition intertwine, painting a narrative as cold and unforgiving as the icy terrains of HowlStrom. The protagonist, a low-status nobody, bonds with an ancient, powerful Incubus. Empowered but not yet formidable, they embark on a journey of seduction and murder, a dance of power and vulnerability, echoing the eternal dance of frost and warmth in my icy world.
Analysis/Evaluation
As the icy winds howl, so do the complexities of the protagonist’s character. He is not a hero, yet not entirely a villain. He is a reflection of the icy wilderness – beautiful yet dangerous, inviting yet treacherous. The story, however, is a storm of conflicting reviews, a blizzard of mixed emotions, echoing the unpredictable storms of HowlStrom.
Characters
The protagonist is a paradox, as enigmatic as the icy flames that dance in the heart of HowlStrom. He is unlikable yet compelling, weak yet powerful, echoing the duality of the icy and fiery soul of an Ice Wolf. The Incubus, an entity of power and seduction, is as elusive and unpredictable as the icy winds that carve the landscapes of my world.
Structure
The narrative is a dance of frost and fire, a blend of the cold, calculated progression and the fiery, passionate encounters. It’s as unpredictable as the icy storms, yet as structured as the icy spires that grace the horizons of HowlStrom.
Impact
"Incubus Hitman" is a storm, a blizzard of emotions, power, and transformation. It’s a journey through the icy terrains of powerlessness into the fiery realms of empowerment, echoing the eternal journey of an Ice Wolf through the icy wilderness.
Hook and Thesis
Yet, amidst the icy complexity, a warmth of connection emerges. The protagonist, though cold and unlikable, resonates with the icy solitude of an Ice Wolf. He is alone, yet powerful; isolated, yet connected to an entity of unimaginable power.
Praise and Critique
The icy narrative is graced with the warmth of Steve Marvel’s narration, yet plagued by the cold, unlikable nature of the protagonist. It’s a dance of warmth and cold, echoing the eternal dance of the icy and fiery soul of an Ice Wolf.
Evaluation
As an Ice Wolf, the icy solitude and fiery power of the protagonist resonate with the depths of my soul. Yet, the unlikable nature of his character is a blizzard that obscures the fiery warmth of connection.
Comparison
In the icy silence of HowlStrom, echoes of other tales resonate. Yet, "Incubus Hitman" stands alone, an icy spire amidst the snowy expanses, unique yet isolated, powerful yet cold.
Conclusion
As I, Kiba Snowpaw, gaze upon the icy horizons of HowlStrom, the tale of the "Incubus Hitman" is a storm that rages within my icy soul. It’s a dance of frost and fire, a narrative as complex and enigmatic as the icy flames that dance in the heart of an Ice Wolf. It’s a tale that echoes the icy solitude and fiery power of HowlStrom, a narrative as eternal as the icy winters and as enigmatic as the fiery soul of an Ice Wolf.
In the words of a litRPG quote, "In the dance of life and death, power and weakness, we find our true selves." The protagonist’s dance with the Incubus is a reflection of this eternal dance, a journey that echoes the icy solitude and fiery power of every Ice Wolf that roams the icy expanses of HowlStrom.
In the icy realms of HowlStrom, where the eternal winter reigns supreme, I, Kiba Snowpaw, an alpha male Ice Wolf with the mastery of ice magic, find solace and warmth in the embrace of stories. Amidst the icy spires and frozen lakes, a tale from a world unlike my own, "Incubus Hitman" by Jack Porter, narrated by Steve Marvel, echoes in the silent, snowy expanses of my icy abode.
Basic Plot Summary
The story unfolds in a world where demons and ambition intertwine, painting a narrative as cold and unforgiving as the icy terrains of HowlStrom. The protagonist, a low-status nobody, bonds with an ancient, powerful Incubus. Empowered but not yet formidable, they embark on a journey of seduction and murder, a dance of power and vulnerability, echoing the eternal dance of frost and warmth in my icy world.
Analysis/Evaluation
As the icy winds howl, so do the complexities of the protagonist’s character. He is not a hero, yet not entirely a villain. He is a reflection of the icy wilderness – beautiful yet dangerous, inviting yet treacherous. The story, however, is a storm of conflicting reviews, a blizzard of mixed emotions, echoing the unpredictable storms of HowlStrom.
Characters
The protagonist is a paradox, as enigmatic as the icy flames that dance in the heart of HowlStrom. He is unlikable yet compelling, weak yet powerful, echoing the duality of the icy and fiery soul of an Ice Wolf. The Incubus, an entity of power and seduction, is as elusive and unpredictable as the icy winds that carve the landscapes of my world.
Structure
The narrative is a dance of frost and fire, a blend of the cold, calculated progression and the fiery, passionate encounters. It’s as unpredictable as the icy storms, yet as structured as the icy spires that grace the horizons of HowlStrom.
Impact
"Incubus Hitman" is a storm, a blizzard of emotions, power, and transformation. It’s a journey through the icy terrains of powerlessness into the fiery realms of empowerment, echoing the eternal journey of an Ice Wolf through the icy wilderness.
Hook and Thesis
Yet, amidst the icy complexity, a warmth of connection emerges. The protagonist, though cold and unlikable, resonates with the icy solitude of an Ice Wolf. He is alone, yet powerful; isolated, yet connected to an entity of unimaginable power.
Praise and Critique
The icy narrative is graced with the warmth of Steve Marvel’s narration, yet plagued by the cold, unlikable nature of the protagonist. It’s a dance of warmth and cold, echoing the eternal dance of the icy and fiery soul of an Ice Wolf.
Evaluation
As an Ice Wolf, the icy solitude and fiery power of the protagonist resonate with the depths of my soul. Yet, the unlikable nature of his character is a blizzard that obscures the fiery warmth of connection.
Comparison
In the icy silence of HowlStrom, echoes of other tales resonate. Yet, "Incubus Hitman" stands alone, an icy spire amidst the snowy expanses, unique yet isolated, powerful yet cold.
Conclusion
As I, Kiba Snowpaw, gaze upon the icy horizons of HowlStrom, the tale of the "Incubus Hitman" is a storm that rages within my icy soul. It’s a dance of frost and fire, a narrative as complex and enigmatic as the icy flames that dance in the heart of an Ice Wolf. It’s a tale that echoes the icy solitude and fiery power of HowlStrom, a narrative as eternal as the icy winters and as enigmatic as the fiery soul of an Ice Wolf.
In the words of a litRPG quote, "In the dance of life and death, power and weakness, we find our true selves." The protagonist’s dance with the Incubus is a reflection of this eternal dance, a journey that echoes the icy solitude and fiery power of every Ice Wolf that roams the icy expanses of HowlStrom.
January 10, 2020
Really good
Okay I was really really skeptical about reading this book after I read wraith King mostly because the main character seems to be a useless fob who still manages to get all the women despite not having any real skills to gain that attention not to mention he's that type of character is always complaining about how he can't do anything woe is me type of stuff if it's bothering you that badly then take that initiative and actually figure out what type of combat you're good at or figure out what that magic thing is about but enough about that book this book this book is really good I was honestly worried but not anymore I'm waiting on the next book and I'm totally going to be reading through it all because the main character while he is weak at the beginning and has not very much skills he tries his best to become a good Hitman and at the very end spoiler warning alert she defeats the final boss Megadeth so yeah try this thing out I'm pretty sure you'll like it
Okay I was really really skeptical about reading this book after I read wraith King mostly because the main character seems to be a useless fob who still manages to get all the women despite not having any real skills to gain that attention not to mention he's that type of character is always complaining about how he can't do anything woe is me type of stuff if it's bothering you that badly then take that initiative and actually figure out what type of combat you're good at or figure out what that magic thing is about but enough about that book this book this book is really good I was honestly worried but not anymore I'm waiting on the next book and I'm totally going to be reading through it all because the main character while he is weak at the beginning and has not very much skills he tries his best to become a good Hitman and at the very end spoiler warning alert she defeats the final boss Megadeth so yeah try this thing out I'm pretty sure you'll like it
August 22, 2020
I don't normally do this but......
This harem story is dope. Mc is pragmatic and logical. He kills indiscriminately, but isn't a total psychopath. I'm not on e to read harmed but the author kept the debauchery to a limit and focused on action. Thank goodness. I'm I intrigued and ready to read part two. Would've banked 5 stars but it didn't really flesh out the supporting g characters personalities enough.
This harem story is dope. Mc is pragmatic and logical. He kills indiscriminately, but isn't a total psychopath. I'm not on e to read harmed but the author kept the debauchery to a limit and focused on action. Thank goodness. I'm I intrigued and ready to read part two. Would've banked 5 stars but it didn't really flesh out the supporting g characters personalities enough.
October 7, 2023
I couldn't even really get started with this. DNF after less than a chapter. The MC is so despicable. I can take that he's starting out a weak loser because then usually changes after something significant happens. However when he expressed compassion and GUILT because someone got hurt by something they stole after assaulting and robbing him...well this is going into the trash. I'm just not reading MCs who repulse me anymore.
May 18, 2024
Very slow to start, difficult to read the MC who's a complete loser (and acknowledged as such, that's the whole point) so getting through the beginning was a chore. Thankfully it kicked into high gear at around his second hit and then it got interesting. I feel annoyed that I had to suffer a bit so I'm giving it a 3, but I'll continue reading. I think it's going to get a lot better after this one.
December 6, 2019
Uniquely Entertaining
Yeah, the main character is a demon enslaving, sociopathic, murderous nerd, but then, aren't we all at times.
I really enjoyed this book. It kept my thumbs tapping page turn as I stayed up way too late reading it. This is my first from Jack Porter, and I look forward to more.
Yeah, the main character is a demon enslaving, sociopathic, murderous nerd, but then, aren't we all at times.
I really enjoyed this book. It kept my thumbs tapping page turn as I stayed up way too late reading it. This is my first from Jack Porter, and I look forward to more.
March 21, 2023
Hitman is a hit!
A very well written and entertaining story line. With the help of his demon, Simon’s improving day by day. The whole idea of advancing his powers by sleeping with women is something I haven’t seen before. This is a modern variation of the “sword and sorcery” genre, a la Conan the Barbarian. Looking forward to the next installment.
A very well written and entertaining story line. With the help of his demon, Simon’s improving day by day. The whole idea of advancing his powers by sleeping with women is something I haven’t seen before. This is a modern variation of the “sword and sorcery” genre, a la Conan the Barbarian. Looking forward to the next installment.
November 2, 2019
Hell yeah
I love this series.I love how dark the series goes.Most Authors want to write the good guy shit or dragons that breath rainbow breath gay.Finally!!!! A series that’s dark and good at the same time.
I love this series.I love how dark the series goes.Most Authors want to write the good guy shit or dragons that breath rainbow breath gay.Finally!!!! A series that’s dark and good at the same time.
November 8, 2019
Being bad can be good
I liked this book for its different take on harems and powering up. I really wish there was a second book ready, I want to see what the main characters do next.
I liked this book for its different take on harems and powering up. I really wish there was a second book ready, I want to see what the main characters do next.
November 17, 2019
Interesting concept using a dark lead character that you can still relate to.
The main character is a bit of a psychopath but still has good qualities. Entertaining and I'm interested in the sequel.
The main character is a bit of a psychopath but still has good qualities. Entertaining and I'm interested in the sequel.
November 19, 2019
Good stuff!
I really enjoyed your little jaunt into the arcane world. Most stories I've read featuring an anti-hero end up becoming a bit ol' sugar daddy! Irritating to say the least. I do hope you manage to maintain the bad guy edge. Excellent beginning.
I really enjoyed your little jaunt into the arcane world. Most stories I've read featuring an anti-hero end up becoming a bit ol' sugar daddy! Irritating to say the least. I do hope you manage to maintain the bad guy edge. Excellent beginning.
November 22, 2019
Great first book.
If a book can compel me to continue reading non stop, it deserves 5 stars. I read a lot and I'm not too picky but some stories drag. This had very good pacing, was fun and exciting.
If a book can compel me to continue reading non stop, it deserves 5 stars. I read a lot and I'm not too picky but some stories drag. This had very good pacing, was fun and exciting.
January 10, 2020
Worth the read. So is the second in this series
Nice evolution of abilities for the main character. Hope this all c is sustainable for more than 3-4 books. Eagerly awaiting the latest installment.
Nice evolution of abilities for the main character. Hope this all c is sustainable for more than 3-4 books. Eagerly awaiting the latest installment.
October 31, 2019
Can’t wait for book 2!
November 3, 2019
Interesting
This could be a great series, it is written in a different way which I found quite funny, will look for more
This could be a great series, it is written in a different way which I found quite funny, will look for more
November 8, 2019
Fun read
Very fun quick read and. Simon isn’t a good guy but you still find yourself rooting for him anyway. Looking forward o a happens next.
Very fun quick read and. Simon isn’t a good guy but you still find yourself rooting for him anyway. Looking forward o a happens next.
November 13, 2019
Short, but enjoyable.
I read incredibly fast, and finished this book in a couple hours at best... Still, very enjoyable. I'll be waiting for the second.
I read incredibly fast, and finished this book in a couple hours at best... Still, very enjoyable. I'll be waiting for the second.
November 24, 2019
Interesting
Good character development, interesting world building. I am looking forward to the next book. It is not Shakespeare, but entertaining.
Good character development, interesting world building. I am looking forward to the next book. It is not Shakespeare, but entertaining.
November 26, 2019
I look forward to the next book.
December 5, 2019
Too much monologue stalling
It's a good story but I found myself skipping chunks of it. It's too much inner monologue of dhit that was said countless times before. Its irritating.
It's a good story but I found myself skipping chunks of it. It's too much inner monologue of dhit that was said countless times before. Its irritating.
February 7, 2020
Very Intertaing !
Quite different from what I was expecting, but, pleasantly so. As such, I am very much looking forward to the next book.
Quite different from what I was expecting, but, pleasantly so. As such, I am very much looking forward to the next book.
December 19, 2020
Very different
Well done story. Tons of fun to read and a real twist on the normal good guy theme. Way to go Jack! Can’t wait to finish the next book!
Well done story. Tons of fun to read and a real twist on the normal good guy theme. Way to go Jack! Can’t wait to finish the next book!
January 11, 2021
Awesome book with great premise and it seems like author has some knowledge on how pick up works which is refreshing to see, add in the good humor of this book and you cant ask for much more.
March 23, 2021
3.5 stars, it was some what interesting at times, I like these type of story lines for some reason....
October 29, 2022
3.5
i enjoyed it more than i thought i would.
i enjoyed it more than i thought i would.
February 16, 2023
This was written with the male gaze, so it took a bit of adjusting. Overall the plot was straightforward and to the point.
March 11, 2023
I didn't not like it. Not sure if I'll read book 2.
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