story is ok, but timeline issues abound
I really wanted to like this story. It has all the right elements, drama, and angst, but I got so bogged down in timeline issues and continuity, I just couldn’t. There are some typos, but those can be overlooked, but when the first chapter mentions the character is 17 and starting college, then subsequent chapters reference AP courses, parents forbidding their 18 year old to date, lockers, homecoming dances, then refer to sororities and fraternities… this seems like it the ages were changed to make it a college book, but pertinent details remained unchanged. This was further demonstrated by the epilogues where the main character refers to meeting the H at age 15… but she was 17 and starting college….
Anyway, if those issues with continuity were fixed and the pacing was slightly better balanced, this could be a great story. For now, it was okay, but confusing.