The Veil

by Ruby Papciak

Some say La Llorona is the harbinger of doom. Marisol seems to have had more than her fair share of unfortunate events take place. Even when things seem to be looking up, something else is just around the corner.
Marisol’s grandmother makes her promise to always do what’s right. Can she keep that promise or will La Llorona win in the end?

57 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 31, 2019

About the author

Ruby was born and raised in South Texas. After graduating high school, she worked as a waitress and cook for ten years. In 2011, she married her best friend, and is momma to three amazing human kids and two fur kids. Her husband is Active Duty Army, and over the years they have adopted the military family creed. This has expanded their family to include two grandchildren, three daughters, and three sons. The family continues to grow.
Ruby also has an Associate's degree in Psychology, but has always dreamed of writing books. It was not until recently that she was given the courage through family and friends to actively go after those dreams.

Reviews

[Ellie Midwood · Rating 5 out of 5]

“The Veil” came out just in time for Halloween and it was a perfect read for me personally. I couldn’t help but root for Marisol, who is sweet and vulnerable and strives for love and approval only to find betrayal instead. This is where a mysterious spirit appears and promises quite an unorthodox salvation from all the pain. The atmosphere was dark and brooding; all Marisol’s emotions rang true and made my heart ache for her but also hope for her to get revenge at last. Did she? You’ll have to read it to find out. I’m really hoping that a sequel is in the works - I’m not ready to say goodbye to Marisol yet! Fans of the dark fic genre - this one is perfect for you!

[maureen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great short! I will say this author sets the scene for the dark and creepy , get ready for that feeling of looking over your shoulder. . I loved Marisol and the position she has been put in. It’s the line between good and evil and sometimes it’s a difficult line to tow. I grew up with stories of the LA Llorona and even as an adult find her terrifying. This was a scary well crafted tale that had me on page one. Great read. Hoping to get more from this author. Click it!!

[Kathy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Totally surprised as to the twist of the story. Loved the supernatural twist in the story. Truly enjoyed the short story. Recommend you read it.

[Karen - Kazza's Books Blog · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a quick creepy read. I did enjoy the whole aspect of the story. It gave me chills. Just wish it was a bit longer.

[Lisa S · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great short halloween story, with twists and turns.