I’m so disappointed in this one, especially since the setup sounded promising. Merris’s twin sister gets murdered, and she’s psychic, so she ends up seeing flashes of the man involved, which leads her straight to a shady underground club. He’s mysterious, broody, obviously dangerous.
But the execution? Way too much rambling from him about his tragic past, and none of it actually made me care. I didn’t feel anything for either of them, and the connection between them just never landed for me. It’s hard to enjoy anything when the characters feel flat, especially in a story that’s supposed to hinge on this deep, emotional (and physical) bond.
The pacing was all over the place too. It takes forever to unravel the mystery around her sister’s death, and by the time anything really happens, the story just... ends. Abruptly. Like someone just stopped mid-scene and forgot to write the rest. I actually checked if this was part one of a duet because it didn’t feel finished, but nope, that’s it.
Also… the setting’s a BDSM club, but the spice was super underwhelming. The scenes felt more like placeholders than anything that actually added to the story or showed real chemistry. If you’re gonna use that backdrop, give it some weight or at least make it interesting.
This could’ve been intriguing, but it ended up feeling both emotionally flat and frustratingly empty. Would’ve been fine if I had connected to the characters even a little, but sadly, I didn’t.
Trops/kinks/safety
🖤age gap
🖤vampire/human
🖤psychosis
🖤s/m
🖤d/s
🖤nipple play
🖤pussy/clit torture
🖤spanking
🖤pussy spanking
🖤blood play
🖤biting&marking