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Water, Fire, and Air
Only Elementals remain.

I think I’m getting the hang of this and things have settled into a nice rhythm. I have uncovered more information on opening the portals. I have three men left to claim, and then we begin to journey around to open the portals.

Ashe has been the hardest to get through to, but he’s opened up a lot. Ty is still my sweet innocent one. While Zeph is a total unknown still. We have only a few weeks before the first portal must be open, and the race is on.

The only thing that worries me; is playing pass the Luna out in the open where anyone might see. Well that, and the assassins still hot on our tails.

*Warning this book is intended for 18+. It is a fast burn Reverse Harem series, with a cliffhanger. This book contains lots of M/M interactions, BDSM, DD/Lg, and other explicit sexual scenes some readers may find offensive.

369 pages, Paperback

Published September 23, 2019

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Rozie Marshall

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Rozie Marshall is an inspired writer from Colorado, where she lives with her husband, kids, and fur babies. She has a BA in European History and works in a bookstore, where else? Although she started writing over a decade and a half ago, it took some convincing for her to publish her first book, but once it happened, the floodgates of words burst and the books kept coming.

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283 reviews59 followers
February 5, 2020
OMG noooo I need the next book now!!!
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22 reviews
January 26, 2024
So apparently my girl is pregnant now...
Profile Image for Amanda Quarles.
2,171 reviews39 followers
March 26, 2023
Goddess Claim

Oh things are getting good! Good gracious at all the spiciness in this one. If you enjoy that kind of thing this is definitely for you. Especially with all mm and group activities that continuous happens. Great story!
Profile Image for Irene Kiew.
624 reviews66 followers
November 7, 2021
I've noticed that there's a pattern of people running away when something happens that they don't like, don't agree with, or can't deal with. Lucien ran away after the bathroom scene with Luna before she claimed him in book 3; Ty kept running away every time he came too soon; and at the end of book 3, Luna ran away when the guys took a step she was not ready for. Even later in this book, she runs away when the guys are shaken by an ominous dream and start to doubt whether they should help her open the portal if there is a risk of her getting injured. There are probably other instances of running away in earlier books, but I can't remember. It's a really childish way of reacting to things, although in each case, someone goes to the person or the person comes back eventually and they talk things out.

Nevertheless, in this book, Luna FINALLY claims the last three men, hallelujah! I never thought it would take SO MANY BOOKS just for her to have sex with 12 guys. Now we can get on to the business of opening the portal.

To open the portal she has to have sex with each of them, in a particular order, and complete all the sexing within an hour. So they "practise" and then they have the actual ritual and basically, this book is just full of sex and more sex. And I gotta tell you, sometimes I'm not even sure that the positions described are anatomically possible. There were a few times when we have two peens in Luna's vagina at the same time, and that's bad enough because I can't imagine the stretch and the sting, but then we have Ty and Slade:
He began positioning himself around me so that we looked the opposite way, seated chair style, ass to ass. I bent my c*ck so I could line it up with his ass and felt him do the same. He slid down my c*ck pushing his c*ck into me at the same time.

I feel like I need to watch more gay p0rn, because I have tried and tried and still can't figure out how this could work. I don't think there's any peen that long or that bendy...? What am I missing???

Well, that's basically this book: a lot of sex, and, in between, some dreams or visions of Draven Thorne attacking them and kidnapping Luna. Somehow, although in book 1 River is the one with a gift for visions, once Luna claims him, he never gets a vision ever again. Suddenly, the only one getting visions and dreams is Luna. Like I said in my review of book 2, River has been pushed to the background; in fact, all the earlier guys are. River, Max, Lucien, Zuriel, Ryzeth, they're all only mentioned in passing. The only focus on Ry comes when when his incubus spells are needed to get them all horny because they have to sex up Luna within an hour to open up the portal.

Let's get back to Draven Thorne and his threats: Draven is a powerful vampire with ambitions to rule to world. I suppose every book must have a villain, but so far he has just been all bluster and not much action, probably because Luna and her mates have been protected in the elemental compound. Draven has been mentioned in earlier books too but also mostly in the background, except for an attack in book 2 while they were at the Fae Seelie court visiting Everette's brother. There has been no explanation as to how he knows that Luna is the goddess' child or that she has been tasked / destined to reopen the portals and bring the reawakening of magic to the world.

In terms of relationships, Luna claimed Ashe, Ty, and Zeph in this book, the last three. Ashe finally worked out his insecurity and fears, Ty finally manages to consummate, and Zeph, I still know next to nothing about Zeph. Why had he worked as a stripper? Especially if he had been a straight-A student and football player? It seems like he would have had other options for a career, and opportunities to go to college if he had wanted. How did he get into the furniture business with the others? Luna never asks, and it really seems like she cares about him much less than all the others. Ty apparently magically overcomes his premature ejaculation difficulties once he has had sex with Luna; thereafter there's an encounter with Zeph where Zeph asks him to hold off on his orgasm and he seems able to; he doesn't come.

You know, it's easy to throw words like, "I love you," around, but harder to make people feel them. I'm always happy to have sex and smut in a romance book, because having sex with someone is natural when you care for them and want to be intimate with them in every way. But when there's so much sex in a book that it seems that the sex is all there is, the relationships just seem based on lust or physical attraction, that thing called "chemistry". It isn't based on knowing a person or connecting with them at a deeper level.

When Luna first meets each of the guys, prior to claiming them, she finds out a bit about each man's background. Like, she knows that Ry was enslaved for a time and that's why he fought being claimed by her. But we never saw her try to soothe that fear in him, and once he is claimed, we don't get to see his reaction to that or the realisation that it's nothing like being enslaved after all. We don't get to see him feel grateful that she doesn't misuse the bond she has with him or make him chafe at the loss of his 'freedom'.

Similarly, she knows about Ashe's background and his struggles. She assures him it doesn't matter, but once she claims him, it's like all that just disappears. Long-standing fears and insecurities can be healed with help from a loving partner, but that takes time. It's like once she claims him, she doesn't have to worry about all that any more, she doesn't have to continue reassuring him, she doesn't have to build the relationship any farther. It feels like she only did as much as she needed to in order to get him to be comfortable with the claiming, and once it's done, she moves on. So the relationships all end up feeling very shallow.

Like I said in my review of book 2, a book built mostly around sex is boring. If I just wanted smut, I'd go read erotica. I read RH and romance because I want story and feelings. There is some story here (or I wouldn't have read till book 4) but the story keeps getting interrupted by the sex. Honestly if you cut out all the sex except the parts where she's connecting with the men on a deeper level and claiming them, this series could probably have been a trilogy. And I feel that requiring her to have sex with each man individually in order to open the portal was just... I don't know, it feels a bit ridiculous. Like an excuse to have more sex, and rushed sex at that, since there's a time limit. There was no reason given why she has to have all of their semen inside her, but only in a specific order. No reason except "magic", which is a pretty lame reason, if you ask me. Most rituals require blood more than sex, because there is power in blood. So I'm feeling like the world-building could have been a wee bit better in this series.
212 reviews1 follower
February 9, 2020
Ok. I'm out.

The first book was good and the second was fine. The third was blah. This has gotten ridiculous. Twelve men is just way too many to keep track of or even care about. And they were very redundant. Do we really need two water guys? I won't be continuing this series.
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717 reviews
May 14, 2020
More drama and action

Finally, some excitement and action with the whole prophecy and opening all the portals. Don’t get me wrong, I thoroughly enjoyed the development of all of Luna’s relationships and all that steamy deliciousness but I was ready for some drama and fight scenes.

Lilith’s character has me intrigued the most I think. I am curious as to what her role will be in this whole ordeal. And her relationship with Lucien’s brother seems to be something many in his family is against but I want to know why. I would love to read a spin off focusing on Lilith.

Plenty of steam still in this book but the guys’ individual kinks were not as prominent as in book 3. Still plenty of MM too.

Out of all of the books in this series, none of them have really had a big cliffhanger until this book. I cannot wait to see how Luna’s plan will work out now that she has passed the point of no return in her scheme.
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105 reviews
September 1, 2020
This review is for the whole series, it is now complete.

First, lets talk about the story line. It was good, a paranormal "find the magic" trope, where the female main character is not aware she is supernatural until she meets the first of her men. After she has come to terms with being supernatural, she has to save the world, with the help of her fated mates and some friends. The story line is good, the characters develop deeply enough that you know what to expect from each person in the harem. Its a large harem, but the reader knows how she connects to each guy, and their relationships make sense.

Now, lets talk about the hot hot hot relationship scenes. WHEW! With so many guys, there are a lot of them! In all configurations, so expect many MM scenes, some with, some without the FMC. The guys develop relationships with each other, romantic and familial, outside of the scope of the female, which made this book so nicely tied up into its happy ending.
Profile Image for Ray.
128 reviews7 followers
September 20, 2021
This series is getting beyond ridiculous now *squints at all the 5 star reviews in bafflement*

The sex scenes (literally every damn page) are all over the place. There are positions the authors putting these guys in that are physically impossible... seriously, I googled A LOT, I conferred with gay friends and they just laughed and said "wtf". It's just so unrealistic even for fantasy and I find myself skim reading the smut waiting for it to end and anyone who knows me would be shocked to hear this.

An editor is seriously needed for these books. The amount of spelling mistakes and typos I'm logging on kindle is taking away from any remaining enjoyment.
Profile Image for Mel G.
381 reviews4 followers
October 2, 2021
Okay that ending TOOK ME OUT.

Not going to lie,
I started to get a bit bored by the last quarter of the book but then we got some shocking news about Luna and a lovely cliffy to absolutely consume our minds!!

Off to the last book of the series and I’m excited to be wrapping this one up.
I have truly enjoyed watching Luna kick ass with her men up to this point; it’s been an incredibly fun and sexy ride and I’m getting quite sad thinking about having to leave this harem behind after the final instalment.

Speeding to find out what Luna has up her sleeve now, that devious goddess.

~4 stars~
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290 reviews30 followers
April 12, 2020
Addictive Series

I couldn’t put this series down, when I would walk away from the book to do something, I would find myself drifting right back. I don’t know how she does it but Rozzie has managed to make me love not 5 not 6 but all 12 of Luna���s men. I have the worst book hangover right now because I am dying to find out what happens next. I’m glad the next book comes out in May!
Profile Image for Taylor.
2 reviews1 follower
May 28, 2020
Just to follow up on my review of the last book, this one is SO MUCH BETTER! The editing has improved tremendously, and the men who had sparked prior to meeting Luna seem to be focusing on those relationships more. I know I’m writing these long after the series is complete, but I’m glad the author received some guidance and listened to those around her. Loving this series, and off to finish the last book!
Profile Image for Isa Hubbard.
91 reviews6 followers
September 26, 2020
Did someone turn up the heat?!

If you’re on book 3 venturing on to Goddess Claimed then you are already familiar with Luna and her TWELVE sexy men. The series is good but I love the story and where it’s going that I almost wish the heat was turned down a notch because I can’t wait to see what happens in the final book. This one leaves you on a cliffhanger but the series is complete.
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33 reviews9 followers
June 30, 2021
Dude.... this series really is great but it could have been better with a good editor... the hookup scenes are super HOT 🔥🥵😍 but the punctuation and grammar issues took away from the story... im the type of reader than can skip over it if the story is good enough so I finished and still loved it but I know some ppl aren't like that.. would have given the whole series a 5 star if it weren't for that but I'd still recommend it if you want some good smut :)
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332 reviews3 followers
April 25, 2020
Orgies Galore!!

Dang Luna girl I hate to break it to u but even with the pill all them orgies will get ya goin to mom town in no time! Luna n her guys focus on orgie training n magics. They start off to the portals soon afterwards. These books remind me of true blood lol open with a bit of plot 😂
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467 reviews
April 27, 2020
I have no words!

This was absolutely amazing! The twists and drama and the cliffhanger! Sometimes at this point when a series goes on this long for me I get board. This has kept me interested and I cannot wait to dive head first in this next book! I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Profile Image for Alicia.
846 reviews133 followers
July 6, 2020
Ahhhhh!!! I’m so into this book, all 13 of these characters, and all the sexiness in this book is drool-worthy. It feels like there’s something for everyone... and they are all partners in every way. I love that so much. I feel invested in each of the guys and Luna, and I just want them all to be a happy family. Now I’m off to read book #5!
595 reviews4 followers
September 29, 2020
Ok story...

I really like the premise of this book. 1f and 12m?!? Oh yeaahhhh. This book was just too similar to the previous, because, apparently, there are only so many body arrangements one can do with a group of 13. I looooove the steamy parts, but wish there was more story in between rounds.
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1,266 reviews
January 1, 2021
Medium-Burn, awesome sex, great characters and their growth throughout the series. Love each and everyone. This author really delves into some different kinks for each of the guys. Note there are 12 of them and each one is very different. Overall a great series and fun to read. I really love this author.
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305 reviews1 follower
July 7, 2022
Another amazing ride

So again action plot and smexy time is on point. And yes there is a lot of smexy thou to be fair they have an incubi and if you made it this far you know its necessary to open thee portals. I'm all about more smexy time and getting to know each guy thru that and there personalities when not having smexy times.
Profile Image for Virginia Feidler.
450 reviews
August 20, 2023
I normally don’t mind if a book has a lot of smut, even if it means it has less plot, but in this book, it was definitely a bad, overwhelming, and repetitive smut. I just feel like basically no plot development happened at all, and the quick and repeated sex scenes. Just weren’t doing it for me in this book.
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Author 2 books5 followers
January 3, 2025
Epic

This series gets better the more it progresses! I can't wait for the next instalment. Although, I am disappointed with the lack of aftercare. After a BDSM scene, there is no cleaning provided, no creams, and nothing like it. It's just hugs. What about UTIs? There is a lack of clean-up after x-rated fun
249 reviews
May 29, 2020
Thrilling

Problems are starting to come to head and there is so much action and adventure. Luna and the guys are continuing to learn more about their powers. I cannot wait to see where this goes!
Profile Image for Galina Sulaiman.
2,357 reviews6 followers
August 8, 2020
Goddess claimed

Having claimed all of her mates it's now a race to open all of the portals . Draven wants Luna, and he wants all her mates dead and to rule the world. The tension is heating up to an epic battle, I can't wait!
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Author 91 books1,527 followers
March 11, 2021
Yet another amazing book in this series!

Sad to know I'm going on to the last book ready! But excited to find out what happens next! This book had everything. Love, sex ,drama and action❤
835 reviews14 followers
November 27, 2021
Yesss

We are finally getting somewhere with these portals. I thought I'd never read if them getting opened. Luna has so many men and I love every moment of it. I am wondering what draven has did to himself go have everyone concerned that he could be stronger than a goddess
Profile Image for Nicole Garcia.
286 reviews1 follower
June 3, 2020
“Like a ninny”

I loved that quote so hard. Another fantastic book in the series and I’m so excited to read the next and final one!
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927 reviews2 followers
September 24, 2020
Holy hotness

Can I just say that the m/m action in this series is one of my absolute favorite parts! Yes the story is great, I love the characters, but the steamy scenes are FIRE!!!
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770 reviews
June 29, 2021
claimed

Fabulous! So much has happened up to this point. On to the epic conclusion! I will be sad when it ends. I am loving this series
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