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Pee Perverts: Human Toilet
Tom Lowry’s life has been shattered by divorce. Phoebe Clifford-Scott is a luxury womenswear consultant who takes full advantage of Tom’s weakened state, turning a pornographic, escapist fantasy into a very wet reality.
Having turned Tom into a piss slave, Phoebe promises sexual rewards if he offers his services out to her clients. Tom meets a variety of women who all want one thing from him, and one woman who wants a lot more.
This wet story is about 7400 words.
Having turned Tom into a piss slave, Phoebe promises sexual rewards if he offers his services out to her clients. Tom meets a variety of women who all want one thing from him, and one woman who wants a lot more.
This wet story is about 7400 words.
36 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 15, 2019
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February 17, 2022
If you have a pee fetish then it is certainly worth the read.
Man has relationship with a woman who uses him regularly....then this expands..
Criticism for author......
Part way thru the multiple women scene it read as if the internal excitement with you got a bit out of hand.
From pretty good descriptors and developing the story lone things got messy. (pun is deliberate)
People in and out...no discussion or descriptions things just seemed to tun together. This happens when a writer talks of things they like within erotica....
Second, WHY? is he allowed cum let alone multiple times? He is first described as her submissive then the label 'slave',
At that point his pleasure is irrelevant. His penis should have been locked up so there is no accidental let alone deliberate arousal, let alone finishing.
Should his hands been allowed to be free and waving around? Partially I say no, but also partially yes to allow him to settle things the others positions so he is safe.
Lastly, don't ignore the REAL MESS this will make. Include a description of him laying on multiple blankets, a tarp or suh under him..
Place a very large stack of towels for the women, not for him.....
When caged, yes he will have to pee many times possibly, but his doesn't shoot up on the dominant females. It is contained and only goes on him. Again the difference between a submissive, slave and will volunteer.
rene'
Man has relationship with a woman who uses him regularly....then this expands..
Criticism for author......
Part way thru the multiple women scene it read as if the internal excitement with you got a bit out of hand.
From pretty good descriptors and developing the story lone things got messy. (pun is deliberate)
People in and out...no discussion or descriptions things just seemed to tun together. This happens when a writer talks of things they like within erotica....
Second, WHY? is he allowed cum let alone multiple times? He is first described as her submissive then the label 'slave',
At that point his pleasure is irrelevant. His penis should have been locked up so there is no accidental let alone deliberate arousal, let alone finishing.
Should his hands been allowed to be free and waving around? Partially I say no, but also partially yes to allow him to settle things the others positions so he is safe.
Lastly, don't ignore the REAL MESS this will make. Include a description of him laying on multiple blankets, a tarp or suh under him..
Place a very large stack of towels for the women, not for him.....
When caged, yes he will have to pee many times possibly, but his doesn't shoot up on the dominant females. It is contained and only goes on him. Again the difference between a submissive, slave and will volunteer.
rene'
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