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200 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 1, 2019
Tears were running down the sides of my face into my hair; I knew it was relief tears. Tanner asked me if I was all right and I explained that the tears were due to me being happy and not to worry. I explained that people cried for different reasons and happiness was one, sadness was another, allergies, and so on.Instead of allowing us to experience what was actually said and letting us feel the connection between the FMC and Tanner as they got to know each other, everything was summarised in two sentences. This happened many, many times throughout the book, and I couldn't stand it any longer because I just wasn't connecting with the characters. How can I connect with them when I don't even get to watch them talk to each other?
Theo finally returned and handed me the bags to inspect. My mates looked worried that the purchases would be inadequate. I opened each bag and emptied them on the bed so I could see what was there. I looked at the sizes and he had purchased the correct ones. I didn’t know how he knew what sizes I needed for each type of garment. I pulled out undies and asked them to turn around; I wasn’t sure why since they’d already seen me naked and had obviously seen everything since they bathed me. At any rate, they complied with my request.I... blah blah blah. I... blah blah blah. I... blah blah blah. There's no variety in the sentence structures, which makes it very boring to read and also makes it sound like it was written by someone very young and inexperienced.
"Sorry, you can put your hands down. I didn't realise there were only captives down here. We are supposed to say that in case the perpetrator is hiding." He looked around at the various conditions of the twenty women and whistled. "He's been busy. Glad we found you before he did whatever he was planning to do. We think he was going to sell you to off-world slavers. We don't have proof of that, though."I rolled my eyes so hard, I'm surprised they didn't fall out of my head. How unprofessional can a policeman get? Again, my impression is that this author is very young and needs to conduct more research to make her story more believable and flesh it out much better.