This novella has an interesting premise and intriguing observations. Also the author is skilled at creating a sense of place, and revisiting past memories and the everyday moments that can trigger them. Sadly, the awkward dialogue is a massive distraction, which manages to be both childish and overly formal at the same time. I liked Robin a lot, but rather than being a young man who has the brains to acquire a maths degree, the dialogue makes him seem like somebody still in primary school. This manuscript would have benefitted from some proof reading, as there are inaccuracies in the text e.g. a character with a changing name (Erdogan/Erduwan), and Ray being a maths and geography lecturer yet later on we are told that he lectures in history and geography.