A week away together turns three friends into something so much more...After his breakup with Jill, Tom and Nicole invite their best friend Chris to join them on their break. He's their best friend, their roommate, and the last thing they want is for him to be left behind while they disappear and relax.They've been together for years, never needing anything more than each other, but after Nicole confesses one of her fantasies, things become blurred. She's always wanted to see Tom with another man, to share that experience and enjoy both men at the same time....Away in their cabin, Tom is left to face urges he never knew he had. After hearing Nicole's desire, he can't help but look at his best friend in a completely different light. Now seems like the perfect time to act, to invite Chris to join them, but they both know the damage it could do to their friendship and relationship."Two Become Three" Is a hot and steamy MMF romance intended for mature audiences 18+ This story contains male on male sex and explores the evolving relationship between all three characters and their changing sexuality. Approximately 40,000 words with HEA ending.
Wow, this is bad. The writing is stilted with a very limited vocabulary. The three first person perspectives are identical, coming across as a young woman's voice. The plot unfolds with all the subtlety of a porn flick in which a character suggests something outrageous that should give everyone pause but everyone just goes along with it. Want to have a threesome with your best friend and his girlfriend even though you and he are both straight? Why of course. Why didn't I think of this before? Just give me 30 seconds and I will wrap my mouth around his dick.
Even though this is quite short, I just couldn't bring myself to read anymore of it.
(The third chapter is mislabeled "Tom" when clearly it should be "Chris". Yeah this is so bad the author couldn't even tell the difference between the two guys. )
This is up there with my favorite MMF stories. At least too 3. I was so wrapped up in the story, I actually didn't think the conflict would be resolved. There are some editing issues, but I didn't find them too distracting. My one complaint: the book is written in first person POV, with all three characters perspective, but the chapters aren't labeled so you have to read a bit before you know whose POV each chapter is. To me, I feel like that should have been an easy fix before publishing. Complaint aside, I absolutely loved this story
I really wanted to like this book. Usually I’m not overly critical of books. However I think this whole book was kinda rushed. It takes away from the story in my opinion. Sex scenes were good. Overall a decent read.
It was a good story, good characters, with the focus on their relationship, not how wild they can get with sex (like so many others.) Typical PNP with no significant development, just a friends to lovers thruple that ends with an HEA. Good for a quick erotica read. Narrator Barry Lemon did a good job. Definitely could become popular with more experience!
I requested and received an audio version of this book for free. I was not asked to submit a review, but I review every book I read anyway.